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    when god get's confused

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=264482
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    The explanation of who we are
    Life’s a one-way revolving door with no building,
    Filtering No boundaries just open gates to confuse the bewildering.
    Who stop and stair between escalators and elevators
    Procrastinators and vermin, who can’t determine,
    How to select a pace. They’d rather journey through miles of space.
    When it would take less effort if they just used the staircase.
    …………..I’ve just officially hit the gravity bong………………..
    Gone up and refuse to come down,
    Unless I choose I’d rather be one of the fans then be the clown.
    No man makes my fate nor lives it except me.
    The path I walk is one that can’t be chalked blame on any entity.
    Jesus Christ, God dam nit, …… man it….
    Seams everything breeds manic panic,
    So I strike a match for life with a flare for the dramatic.
    Living this sorrowful symphony feeling self sympathy
    Like I had an epiphany to be whom I use to bee’s epitome.
    I hate being myself id rather be you and every other man
    Till my wish comes true and im bored wanting to be me again.
    Never mind my apathy, I’d rather be a chief than Indian
    Cause followers are weaklings that rather not do the thinking
    I put in work then double up as a tour guide on weekends-
    “Scouting the TRAIL OF TEARS” as the last of the Mohicans.
    Some men want their dreams to come true but
    I’ll be damned if they plan…Acting like they the only ones
    ”No I never walked in your shoes but I do use the same brand.”
    I won’t stop till I’ve achieved satisfaction in my existence
    And I wont settle for fractions or limit my persistence.
    If I feel this is where I belong then why is it never right?
    And why is it when I find it’s meaning it will be the end of my life?
    As the clock tics, I’ll journey a thousand labyrinths chasing myths
    Deep dive with no oxygen deep into an abyss
    To find if there is a heaven or hell when I could save time and just slit my wrists.
    The moral is…fuck it most don’t understand the question
    That infects like a cancer? But by the time you make sense of the
    Question you wont have enough time left to find the answer.
    So in the end when you have broken what you cant fix
    You’ll ask where was jesus and i’ll respond still on the crucifix.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    good shit man...
    nice topic
    felt it alot...
    kind of long....
    but still was a nice drop son...peace

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    yo. it had nice wordplay it was a good topic. it flowed well. it had extravagant vocabulary. an its what im used to seein you do. an hey did you ever retrieve the shit from when your computer crashed. cause i was lookin forward to seein what your verse was about when we was gonna take on the word p crew but peace out for now dawg.

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    Nice wordplay, the flow was good and the rhymes were good, you went into the topic good aswell, so yea stay up

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    no luck finding it but im here for another collab if you want thanks for the love
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    good shit man...
    nice topic
    felt it alot...
    kind of long....
    but still was a nice drop son...peace

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    Thanks Twin I Didnt Know How People Would React To It Its Good Some Understood It
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    AIght i felt this shit, the topic was good, the flow was good and i liked the style and presentation, also i expect ta see more from you in the future, aight stay up

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    More Will Fallow Indeed
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    i felt the topic.... the concept was above average, the structure was ok ok. the flow was str8 also, and i liked the way you stayed on the topic, and got real deep into it...nice drop fams......7/10
    WoRD

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    Okay i felt this key, the topic was good,
    the flow was fluent
    and i liked the style and presentation
    SUm nice imagery and creativity,
    expect to read more off ya texts

    stay at it

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    thanks twin
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    yo hit me up on pm wit the topic an i'll send you mine aight. peace out

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