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    Death Wish

    THEY SAY SMOKIN' KILLS,
    MAN I DON'T CARE,
    I'D RATHER DIE BREATHIN' SMOKE THAN LIVIN' IN AIR,
    AND I GOTTA SAY THAT LIFE IS OVERATED,
    COS WHEN YOUR DEAD AT LEAST YOU KNOW THAT YOU WON'T BE HATED
    I WAS BORN TO LIVE,
    NOW I'M LIVIN' TO DIE,
    DON'T ASK ME ANY QUESTIONS COS' I DON'T KNOW WHY
    I DON'T CARE IF I GO TO HELL OR UP IN THE SKY,
    IT'S ALL GOOD TO ME JUST AS LONG AS I DIE,
    COS I'VE HAD ENOUGH OF BEIN' SKINT,
    I'VE HAD ENOUGH OF NOT FUCKING A BINT,
    I'VE SURE HAD ENOUGH OF THE DAILY STRUGGLE,
    I'D SHOOT MYSELF DEAD BUT IT AIN'T THAT SUBTLE,
    THAT' WHY I GOT A DEATH WISH,
    IT AIN'T BEEN GRANTED YET,
    I KEEP RUBBIN' ON THE LAMP,
    AIN'T DEAD SO I START TO FRET
    I AIN'T GOT NO LOVER,
    I AIN'T GOT NO BABIES,
    IT JUST ADDS TO MY STRUGGLE,
    MAN IT DRIVES ME CRAZY
    EVERYDAY I SEE MY FRIENDS DO GOOD,
    I AIN'T GONNA DO WELL,
    BUT I WISH I WOULD,
    IT'S KINDA HARD WHEN YOU FALL BEHIND YOUR PEERS,
    THAT'S WHY IM SAT IN MY ROOM AND I'M DRINKIN' BEERS
    OH WHY THE FUCK DOES GOD IGNORE MY PRAYER,
    TO BE DEAD IN THE MORNIN'
    EVEN HE DON'T CARE
    BUT WHEN THE LORD DOES LAY MY ASS DOWN TO REST,
    HE'LL ASK ME IF I'M HAPPY, AND I'LL SAY YES

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=257996
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=257196

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    Quote Originally Posted by t29000
    YO fuck pusha c punk ass and dick sucking crew
    save that shit for Bitch Slapped homey, dont clutter up dudes OM wit that bullshit...

    anyways, nice piece...id say work on ya structure a lil bit it was kinda hard to keep an even flow while reading...an tha caps lock shit needs 2 stop...
    6.5/10

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    It Fallows Like You Was Truly Blazed Whil Scripting This. Structure Don't Mean Shit But How It's Read The Content Was There And Made This An Enjoyable Peace To Read Do What You Do Homie.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Dont link to your own pieces.

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