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Thread: Representin' Tha Streets

  1. #1

    Representin' Tha Streets

    Check it,
    I love my son but he hasn't been born,
    Like Abraham, it takes a man to love,whatever God's plan,
    You understand?
    England be home but got cancer,Who I dare?
    Everyman who breathe air and walk land,
    You understand?
    Take my time to address England,
    we'd be better off, killing fam than ignoring God's plan,
    Like Abraham,
    Understand, that became a great man,
    So spiritually,every man and every woman,
    Hold up their hands

    Recognise what's real and what's false,
    God is right,Gives us life and he loves us the most
    Said to Moses on the mountain of the fire and storm,
    Be the only being that you get your rules of life from
    Who are we to say God made mistakes in this book?
    There's no proof?
    There's proof if you take a good look
    You wanna die and go to hell?
    Well, regret what you did,
    Or repent,Save your soul,
    And do what Abraham did
    -----------------------

    (Chorus)

    Read it and weep,
    You thought that I was just flowing on beats,
    Groomed from the street,
    finally this rap is unique,

    But not complete,
    Jesus holds the key to my jeep,
    Who am I representing?
    I'm representing the streets

    Read it and weep,
    You thought that I was just playing with beats,
    Groomed from the street,
    finally this rap can compete,

    But not complete,
    Jesus holds the key to my jeep,
    Who am I representing?
    I'm representing the streets
    ------------------------

    Who the fuck was Simon anyway?
    Like I give a fuck what he say,
    Probably one of those oppressors from back in the day
    Whippin' niggas,
    spittin' wet tobacco on niggas,
    When Simon says clap your hands,
    I ain't clappin' my niggas.
    Racist motherfucker wanna tell me to jump,Well how high?
    Might as well pull the trigger 'cos i'm ready to die
    Ready to bleed,Ready to learn,Ready to read,
    Ready to end this slavery inside me, that they created in me
    Don't let this animal out because I'm ready to feed,
    This sick society separates the plants from the seed,
    Water my flower,
    Do everything, grow for hip-hop,Speeding so fast,
    Dusty physically cannot stop,
    Water my flower,Spit intellect through this hip-hop,
    So the thuggish homies feel this when they smoke weed a lot,
    Plant from the seed,
    The Government dictates around me,
    But to succeed they need the children and they haven't found me
    -----------------------

    (Chorus)

    Read it and weep,
    You thought that I was just flowing on beats,
    Groomed from the street,
    finally this rap is unique,

    But not complete,
    Jesus holds the key to my jeep,
    Who am I representing?
    I'm representing the streets

    Read it and weep,
    You thought that I was just playing with beats,
    Groomed from the street,
    finally this rap can compete,

    But not complete,
    Jesus holds the key to my jeep,
    Who am I representing?
    I'm representing the streets

    Read it and weep,
    You thought that I was just flowing on beats,
    Groomed from the street,
    finally this rap is unique,

    But not complete,
    Jesus holds the key to my jeep,
    Who am I representing?
    I'm representing the streets

    Read it and weep,
    You thought that I was just playing with beats,
    Groomed from the street,
    finally this rap can compete,

    But not complete,
    Jesus holds the key to my jeep,
    Who am I representing?
    I'm representing the streets

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    Last edited by Dusty Skidz; December 16th, 2005 at 09:11 AM

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    Yo dude, that had some really good lines and wordplay in that
    The rhymes was good but the only criticism i reckn is it's a lil long.
    You dun have to add tha chorus in it... even tho it's a song... jus add it once...in tha middle or sumthin coz then pplz aint gona loose interest at lookin at the length of the piece.
    The chorus was good tho lol, and the topic was nice to read.
    Well don man
    ~1~
    thnx for leavin feed on my piece

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    i wasnt really feeelin ya opening section,
    the second section had some nice aliteration
    flow was real gud consistant i agree wit legacy
    bout ya chorus bein to long,seems like
    a work in progress...since theres two versus
    was ight...still room fa elevation... i think you cud
    use some vocab fam...adds fire...yerr...the first
    section had better content...the second section
    was just more RAW...put the two styles togeather
    wud be hot...thanks fa the peeps on mine...peace

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