Forgoten Suitcase.

[A Pimp Named Saucy]

Forgoten Suitcase.

Blackout,woke up on a bed,found myself in a clinic.
Didnt have a sickness,Found out the clinic was illicit.
There was a cup,I tip'd it and found some sort of pills.
I feel somethings wrong,Knowing my nurse wasnt real.
My mouth was sealed,I seen two big guys at the center.
Wondering why im here,tryin to think tho I dont remeber.
One of the guys had a tempter,He was yelling and screaming.
Teaming up on one guy,They killed him and they started leaving.
The nurse starts leaning towords me,Tells me something cruel.
'They gunna do the same to you',Tryin run,Tho couldnt move.
She said 'dont try to,I numb you,Tell me about the suit case'
She relates me to a runner,I lay here and lose all my cruel faith.
I contemplate,And realise i might die without knowing why.
I try again to remeber,cant,Line my thoughts,Im going to die.

ill get part two soon....this was a quicky one

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=258114

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=256347

[Dyl]

Wasnt much but is was good.I was rea\lly feeling your flow and enjoyed it.Good vocab as well.Keep it up

[noncentz]

it was very solid alittle short you could have made a deep rooted peace but cut it short it was still nice none the less.

[Mistral]

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