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Thread: No Guest Starring

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    No Guest Starring

    Line for line asking me to guest star?
    That’s like picking up the tab for the giants at sports bar.
    This kid get retard and show you the meaning of gifted
    Presenting some of the best skills omitted
    Tailored for my fans like yankee fitted.
    Learned from the best that did it ..so if we aint equal
    Then call me the franchise dawg way I spit it makes a sequal.
    Worth my weight in gold and never fold so it’s apparent…right
    I measure up to so many carrots bugs bunny put a hit on my life
    It’s still HIT RUN with the punch lines that rip gums
    Leaving your gangsta style broke your crew will have split guns.
    Nigguz is dumb
    if they thinking they testing whats comes from lung to tongue
    Pronounce the name in singular text damnit im the only one.
    On every tracks reruning of hot bars and puns
    Lyrical wordplay and talent that leaves scientists in conundrums
    Git r dun…rappers careers are done before they begun
    For testing me.. this rhymes like inscest cause im fucking you son.
    You want it kid ? better off if you adopt
    Fuck off the top my adlibs will make your first single flop.
    A sexy mother fucker with flow… while you suckers rhymes… not a drop
    I could post a verse and get a ten on www. hot or not
    So if you think you fucking with me I say hardly
    As for a cameo I wouldn’t guest appear at your release party.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Vertikle
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    OK vocab, you need to work a lil on flow, but it had an ok flow.Rhyme scheme made the flow a lil off but still it was ok.Good imagery, juss keep working hard, decent drop.
    Please hit my piece up, the link is under here.


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=198584

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    Hugh Jazz
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    I hated the structure and the vocab. I didnt like the way you rhymed the same word in about 3-5 lines. The only exception to this would be if you were writing it for audio...which would sound good. Flow was dece throwing words that rhymed in the start of your lines helped it along. Overall this was a gangster drop...I could almost hear 50 cent singing it.Liked the self glorification involved. nice work..

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=198702

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