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    Two Man Army (me and Murd3r Mind3d)

    Murd3r Mind3d:
    yall niggaz are carpetz u do nothin but get stepped on/
    n since itz only two against mobz our weaponz been drawn/
    sit there n get god i mean meet him wen i detonate all 8 bombz/
    cuz im sicker den sadom pluz mixtape kidnapz den rapez ya momz/
    while im cheerin him on, have no fear/
    we da mutha fuckin heroz in diz dead atmosphere/
    murd3r mind3d'z mixtape over shadowz da day break/
    n leave yall in da past like ur hitz neva get air play/
    cuz itz a war, n diz our battle-field/
    im da reason 4 morguez, now u know how cattle-feel/
    get a bullet moved nextdoor 2 ur grill/
    howdy neighbor aloud us ta introduce ourselfz meet conquer n kill/
    pluz i neva display joy til i destroyed or knocked ova buildingz/
    oh boy we'z killing more emceez den injuryz from lil children hurtin their feelingz/


    Mixtape:
    we spittin a sicka death than if AIDS was in your breath,
    like takin that chronical meth you trippin over our step,
    we soldiers that lock -n- load ya shakin like ya cold,
    man that look in your eye is priceless ya gonna fold man,
    then we gon rip you up now you the enemy the fin ta be,
    killin souls a hundred times like the legs of a cenipede,
    we crawlin behind ya lines we burnin the very minds,
    that diss our clique with grips they bread -n- butter mine,
    Murd3r holdin ya neck while i trigger the tech,
    my two fingers address like im smokin a rette, (cigarette)
    we a two man army we invadin the UnderGrounD,
    takin by storm this forum writtin the lyrics found,
    you see ya boys are proppin the murders caused,
    mix they minds with a tape of murder flaws....



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    uppin for feedback...really need it people......come on dont sleep...we dont got any pillows here....

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    i liked this alot....both verses were hot...although i like mixtapes more....one thing i thought could be changed were all the "z's" instead of "s's" in m3rder's verse...i just think it would be easier to read without them....keep droppin and check out my next openmic

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    uppin this OM...........need some feedback.........come on

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    need some feedback on this OM man....come on there's no pillows here....get your asses up and feed lol

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    man....this is bullshit......why cant you all just feed, i will give feed back....damn...just leave a link

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    I thought this was cool. Both verses were good but I like mixttapes better. I liked his better because of the creative internal rhyming sceme he had goin on. It just kinda made the piece seem more interesting. Murd3r's verse was cool as well, he gave alot of imagery, However, I don't know why, but it kind of seemed like your verse was more of one for a battle. BUt both verses as I said before were good, keeps writin

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    thanks for the feedback man....uppin this thread peeps

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    thanks for the feedback man...keeps it comin

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    her si sum feed.. tis was horrible!!!
    lol, just playin.. this was real HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    great job both verses.. i enjoyed reading this... liked the rhyemz and flow and structure.. keep elevating.. good job

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    yea this was cool shoulda added a hook and shit nah mean... uhh mixtapes verse WAS better... like everyone else is saying... i do gotta admit it... like the other person said murd3r gave a lotta imagery though... nice job 7/10

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