E-MORTAL vs Darknova

[Darknova]

10-12 lines
due, ?? asap.
normal rules..

bxp, stubby, can't vote.
no hate
no d/r... etc..

[Darknova]

no feeding, as well.

thought i'd point out the obvious, just in case.

[Darknova]

I don't know if I can drop tonight man because it's almost 3AM here. But set it up and spit and I'll check it tomorrow sometime.

... and I said fine.

Check-in already so I can spit. You accepted this, ur still online. I don't want no stupid no-show. And I know u saw me tell you to checkin.... so where u at E?

[And Death]

Check in.

I'll spit after I see that you have.

[Darknova]

I really hate battling these fags, but I guess this time I must
Says hes unhuman, but the only thing E-Mortal is his rust
I voted against you, and face it you lost but you won
Cause behind viewers eyes... E's got mad d/rs flows in tons
Only way u win, but you can't "E-portal" now for more help found

Vote - B.X.P. (A lot of Darknova's verse was filler and random nonsense.

Cuz with my filler & nonsense, I lead u to ur home...
..ur deathbed underground
I know, "ur already there," good job, ur wack-ass killed you first
His wackness used to show with the names in sig under his verse!
Could only beat no named emcees, of hell.. really no importance
E disect my verse.. its too dope for you, have ur buddies sort this
Dope's a different language to you, never will see, never heard
More? I easily won vs BXP dumbass, and u winning this is absurd


** Explaining my verse a bit... I voted against him in a battle he should've lost, but he got two votes in the last 15mins to win. Then came to my battle vs BXP and voted against me, which I won easily... nah, that's not dickriding/hate........

[And Death]

Look at how he complains...he got a gender crisis to reveal
I'd walk a mile in his shoes...but I doubt I can fit in high heels
Quotes are extremelly played now...I think he's a little late
I'ma put him in front of a calendar...and bring him up to date
DK's like telemarketers...I didn't want to answer his call
He has no balance on stilts...just setting himself up for a fall
And he's not hungry...he just got too much on his plate
Watch me drop this kid...like anorexics lifting heavy weights
He's getting clowned...but there's one thing missing I suppose
Punch him in the face...there, now you even got the red nose
And this wasn't even a battle...it was more like a landslide
Did I hear someone say Kentucky?...this chicken's been fried

[Allevyate]

ok im gunna vote on this please return the favor if you havent already
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134407

Personals: Usually I group personals and punches together, but in this case I had to seperate them because they were disconnected in this battle... Dark takes this by far because he used personal attacks, where E was very general, altho Darks was kinda hard to grasp

Punches: This goes to E cause his more frequent and hit a little harder, altho his concepts were not that complex, anyone could have thought them up (anorexic weights, etc.)

Flow/Structure : E because he was consistant in his line length and his rhyming scheme

Creativity: Neither came really creative, give it to E because he attempted to make metas as opposed to just saying my verse is better than yours like dark

So overall even tho Dark came more personal, E takes it because he was more witty and consistant V/ E-Mortal

Now return the favor

[The Under Study]

Darknova-YOu had a pretty decent verse but still was lackin a few things. While u had punches and personals they really didnt even hit that hard. Clearly they missed. You had a good structure and flow was on point though. Just try to get better with wordplay and u be fine. Elevate on vocab and multis and trying to aim ya punches a lil better.

E-Mortal-You came out pretty strong on this battle. Good punches from u that really hit the opponent as well as personals. You had a good structure and good flow. Wordplay was pretty consistent throughout the battle too. Some vocab but not alot.
Good opener but bad closure. But overall u did pretty good
v/E-Mortal

[The Under Study]

return the favor
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133965
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134012

[Darknova]

and it took him all day to write too,
why am I not surprised...

uppin 1.. i'll hit those links tomorrow guys.

[Sao The Don]

I really hate battling these fags, but I guess this time I must
Says hes unhuman, but the only thing E-Mortal is his rust
nice

I voted against you, and face it you lost but you won
Cause behind viewers eyes... E's got mad d/rs flows in tons
Only way u win, but you can't "E-portal" now for more help found
Cuz with my filler & nonsense, I lead u to ur home...
..ur deathbed underground

nice

Dope's a different language to you, never will see, never heard
More? I easily won vs BXP dumbass, and u winning this is absurd

nice


Look at how he complains...he got a gender crisis to reveal
I'd walk a mile in his shoes...but I doubt I can fit in high heels
Quotes are extremelly played now...I think he's a little late
WEAK
I'ma put him in front of a calendar...and bring him up to date
DK's like telemarketers...I didn't want to answer his call
He has no balance on stilts...just setting himself up for a fall
And he's not hungry...he just got too much on his plate
WEAK
Watch me drop this kid...like anorexics lifting heavy weights
He's getting clowned...but there's one thing missing I suppose
Punch him in the face...there, now you even got the red nose
And this wasn't even a battle...it was more like a landslide
Did I hear someone say Kentucky?...this chicken's been fried
WEAK


Your whole shit was wack, about 35 more posts and ill be able to vote

[RealiM]

heya...

Dark..

I really hate battling these fags, but I guess this time I must
Says hes unhuman, but the only thing E-Mortal is his rust
pretty weak opener...

I voted against you, and face it you lost but you won
Cause behind viewers eyes... E's got mad d/rs flows in tons
lol.. not too bad
Only way u win, but you can't "E-portal" now for more help found
Quote:
Originally Posted by E-MORTAL

Vote - B.X.P. (A lot of Darknova's verse was filler and random nonsense.


Cuz with my filler & nonsense, I lead u to ur home...
..ur deathbed underground
uhh... weak bar
I know, "ur already there," good job, ur wack-ass killed you first
His wackness used to show with the names in sig under his verse!
niceness
Could only beat no named emcees, of hell.. really no importance
E disect my verse.. its too dope for you, have ur buddies sort this
average
Dope's a different language to you, never will see, never heard
More? I easily won vs BXP dumbass, and u winning this is absurd
gay finisher

pretty weak verse.. kinda lame punches =S

e-mortal...

Look at how he complains...he got a gender crisis to reveal
I'd walk a mile in his shoes...but I doubt I can fit in high heels
nice opener..
Quotes are extremelly played now...I think he's a little late
I'ma put him in front of a calendar...and bring him up to date
lol thats played.....
DK's like telemarketers...I didn't want to answer his call
He has no balance on stilts...just setting himself up for a fall
blah
And he's not hungry...he just got too much on his plate
Watch me drop this kid...like anorexics lifting heavy weights
decent
He's getting clowned...but there's one thing missing I suppose
Punch him in the face...there, now you even got the red nose
lame
And this wasn't even a battle...it was more like a landslide
Did I hear someone say Kentucky?...this chicken's been fried
gay...

both were pretty damn weak... but e-mortals opener was nice.... both need to work on punches and shit...

v/mortal...


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134448

[Kwiksand]

k...
Punches and Personals -- Darknova won this. He just hit harder and took the offensive, attacking approach which was pretty good. E-Mortal was more generic and spent for time with creativity and originality. Point - D

Vocab -- Nothing really special but better than most battles in Front Lines from both of you. Decent vocab, here it is a tie. Point - Tie

Flow and Structure -- This goes to E-Mortal cuz his whole verse was the same length and consistent. Each bar had even syllables and just worked better. Darknova had good structure too but E's was near 100% consistent throughout his whole verse. Point - E

Opener -- E-mortal's made more sense, flowed perfectly, and both lines of the opener related to each other (gender crisis subject) and it was witty. Darknova's was decent, nothing real great. Point - E

Closer -- Both closers were even. Smart, nice rhyming, good flow and finish. Point - Tie

Wordplay -- E-Mortal clearly wont this category cuz he came out with more creativity and thought. It was smart, and fun to read. Point - E

So it goes 3-1 in favor of E-Mortal here.
Vote -- E-Mortal

return the favor guys, nice battle...

TomER vs. Kwiksand
Rule vs. Kwiksand
Rookie vs. Kwiksand

i liked both of ur verses....so try out for a new crew from me and allevyate called Cerebral Magicians, tryouts open to anyone

Cerebral Magicians try out

[Escar]

Both came good with flow. First dude has a problem though, few stretched lines. E-Mortal's flow was pretty decent.

First dude's punches didn't hit hard either. They were more likes statements. E-Mortal's punches hit hard, more than enough to merk the first dude.

First dude's structure was wack, stop using quotes man. It fucked your verse up, anyhoo, E's structure was dope.

Basically, E came better with everything. First dude needs to work on his flo & punches.

Blah blah go ahead and DQ my vote. I left enough feedback though.

V/E-Mortal