10 lines
blind spit
due half hour after thread is made
Good luck
10 lines
blind spit
due half hour after thread is made
Good luck
Soft Focus
..Returns..
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can i go 12 lines?
aight watever...i will if its okay with u
if its not....ill post again and just delete two lines
here we go
Fuck'a image i'll ruin your record with wordplay
Give you a dictionary & you couldn't playword
Kids nervous over the net, his hearts pumping
Rushing to think quick but comes up with nothing
Notice i'm typing with a light head it's thoughtless
You're in the bag cause thats where I put garbage
Murdering you blowing up your selfesteem rookie
It'll take a lot more then Kwiksand to drowned me
Heres my thank you because I needed this thread
To get into LLL jr and rip some talented kids instead
Soft Focus
..Returns..
Wat kind of name is this, callin urself Eclapt
Think u can take me easy, callin me out in bitch slapped
Occupation high school, well sit down and learn a lesson
After I hand u a loss, ur reputation it will lessen
I’ll start to mutilate u with my skills and Intelligence Quotient
I’ve cast a lyrical spell on u with no antidote for this potion
Goin by two names, I’ll Rule out a possibility
And that’s you coming close to sensin a victory
From up north in Ontario, Canada where he can tolerate colder weather
I still managed to freeze him. Voters, whose verse was clearly better?
Reppin Soft Focus, ill give u a Hard Distraction
Ur skill compared to mine is merely just a fraction.
you should be dq'd for not knowing the rules that you agreed to peon
Soft Focus
..Returns..
c'mon man....just let it go
i accidentally wrote 2 more lines...i was goin and i couldnt stop
if u want to....add 2 lines to ur verse
votin on this return the favor if u havent already
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134407
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134382
Ok so keep in mind to me the most important things are killin the opener and closer and havin hard hitting, personal punches.........
Personals/ Punches: Has to go to Kwik because his personals actually referred to eclapt instead of being general. Eclapt had some clever ideas in there, but they werent really directed at Kwik and they could have been worded better. Kwik takes this cause he actually took Eclapt into account.
Structure: Both had generic structure, but I give this to Eclapt because he kept his lines the same length, kwiks kinda varied throughout.
Flow: Both of you gotta work on your rhyming, Kwik rhymed Lesson and Lessen, they are two different words, but they are pronounced almost exactly the same so in essence for this use they are the same. Eclapt was even worse with a lot of his stuff, especially the opener, Wordplay and Playword just straight up dont rhyme, even if you were trying to be clever, Give slight edge to Kwik, but really no one deserves this category.
Vocab: Easily Kwik, Eclapt talked about played concepts and used everyday words, Kwik: Intelligence Quotient, that took the vocab alone
Creativity: Eclapt Callin him garbage and talkin about puttin him in a bag is something that anyone could think of, but Kwik didnt stand out that much in this category either, Again slight edge to Kwik
Opener: Eclapt's just flat out didnt rhyme, and even tho Kwiks wasnt amazing it was much better than that line that attempted wordplay about wordplay without even rhyming.Kwik takes this.
Closer: Call this a draw because I really thought both of your closers were decent with good flow, Kwik way to work his crew in and Eclapt it was a big improvement from the opener.
Overall I give this one to Kwik not a lopsided battle but he had personals and harder hitting punches, and he was more consistant in his rhymin so V/ Kwiksand
Now return the favor
wow it's a battle...why are you talking about vocab
and most my lines you didnt understand...blah
for instance..my garbage line...2 meanings...
in the bag...(easily won) garbage belongs in a garbage bag
blah..get some more decent votes from people that can read
a punch..and understand it...upping
Soft Focus
..Returns..
uppin one....ppl please vote........................
iight.. dont worry Rule about that first vote, kwiksand, Emortal, stubby, allevate, philosopha r all on the same click..
Wat kind of name is this, callin urself Eclapt
Think u can take me easy, callin me out in bitch slapped
0/5 shit was wack
Occupation high school, well sit down and learn a lesson
After I hand u a loss, ur reputation it will lessen
.021/5 you up in scale
I’ll start to mutilate u with my skills and Intelligence Quotient
I’ve cast a lyrical spell on u with no antidote for this potion
this aint fuckin zelda 0.01/5
Goin by two names, I’ll Rule out a possibility
And that’s you coming close to sensin a victory
shit is so filler 0/5
From up north in Ontario, Canada where he can tolerate colder weather
I still managed to freeze him. Voters, whose verse was clearly better?
nice.. .. want a cookie? 0.1/5
Reppin Soft Focus, ill give u a Hard Distraction
Ur skill compared to mine is merely just a fraction.
ok i think ive read that 683426.2 times... 0.5/5
Overall 0.3452/5
Fuck'a image i'll ruin your record with wordplay
Give you a dictionary & you couldn't playword
iight.. 1/5
Kids nervous over the net, his hearts pumping
Rushing to think quick but comes up with nothing
lol hahahah 3.6/5
Notice i'm typing with a light head it's thoughtless
You're in the bag cause thats where I put garbage
ROFLMAO 3.8/5
Murdering you blowing up your selfesteem rookie
It'll take a lot more then Kwiksand to drowned me
iight.. 2.0/5
Heres my thank you because I needed this thread
To get into LLL jr and rip some talented kids instead
iight.. 1.4/5
Overall... 2.75/5
ill vote 4 u in about 20 more posts
yo get out STD....ur just a hate vote and i kno it
its cuz of that other battle between u and allevyate and watever i said got u real pissed off
so if i suspect hate....u kno im reporting it to get ur vote out
kwik sand.. i aint a hata... quit fuckin free postin.. jus cuz you weak... sux... and 10 years old dont mean u gotta hate... fo real.. playa hatin.. jus cuz u look like your avatar... o yea did i mention your line
"I’ll start to mutilate u with my skills and Intelligence Quotient
I’ve cast a lyrical spell on u with no antidote for this potion"
sounded like some zelda shit?
u keep bringin up zelda u little fruit....and ur freeposting stupid hypocrite
not 10, but 15
and that ain't a kiddy cartoon u jackass....Family Guy if u kno it
or are u still hooked on looney tunes?
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