you know the rules 10-15 lines
no hate dr crew votes
no feeding
you know the rest
due soon
u spit first
Sabotage
Allevyate
you know the rules 10-15 lines
no hate dr crew votes
no feeding
you know the rest
due soon
u spit first
Seems your name just boils down 2 " All Evy Ate "
I'd jump 2 assume that this bitch Evy is 1 fat weight
Your attempts to amuse people through verse I oppose
Similar to your endeavor to anybody 2 who you propose
Bladder and your head hit the floor when the pistol call
I see the tragic fate of your rap career thru crystal balls
You wont be much of a gangsta after the missles fall
I crush through you without effort with my blissful maul
Just seems like nobody knows who they are 'till it happens
Untill than we'll be all cool say, " wusup? " & 'wuss crackin'?'
ok checkin, will b keyed soon..............................
ok well I went one line over, I hope that isnt an issue to you, here it is
Guess what I’ve got almost 4 wins, you know what that means?
Because you’re a Sad And Boring Ogre, That Allevy’s Gunnabe Elite
Sab you better stick to topicals, battling isnt workin out
You spit a sour verse like your were force fed sourkraut
So, your I see in your pro interests are “throwin pancakes at bitches faces”
Then your dating skills are about equal to a 13 year old nerd with braces
If your metas are herpes then mine are full blown AIDS
Your muttering your rhymes while I go off on tirades
I’m not gunna call you a hockey fanatic, igloo resident, or a syrup drinking canuck
Or say that a 14 year old could reek havoc in Canada with one pair of nunchucks
I just want you to remember one thing from this confrontation
Respect U.S., women, and me, better consider reconciliation
Cause Sab I didn’t come fake or thug, I came to mess with your cerebral
Allevy’s the police about to lock you up, sabatoge is wrong and unlawful
my size got messed up before, hopefully it worked this time
Guess what I’ve got almost 4 wins, you know what that means?
Because you’re a Sad And Boring Ogre, That Allevy’s Gunnabe Elite
Sab you better stick to topicals, battling isnt workin out
You spit a sour verse like your were force fed sourkraut
So, your I see in your pro interests are “throwin pancakes at bitches faces”
Then your dating skills are about equal to a 13 year old nerd with braces
If your metas are herpes then mine are full blown AIDS
Your muttering your rhymes while I go off on tirades
I’m not gunna call you a hockey fanatic, igloo resident, or a syrup drinking canuck
Or say that a 14 year old could reek havoc in Canada with one pair of nunchucks
I just want you to remember one thing from this confrontation
Respect U.S., women, and me, better consider reconciliation
Cause Sab I didn’t come fake or thug, I came to mess with your cerebral
Allevy’s the police about to lock you up, sabatoge is wrong and unlawful
THE REAL THING
Guess what I’ve got almost 4 wins, you know what that means?
Because you’re a Sad And Boring Ogre, That Allevy’s Gunnabe Elite
Sab you better stick to topicals, battling isnt workin out
You spit a sour verse like your were force fed sourkraut
So, your I see in your pro interests are “throwin pancakes at bitches faces”
Then your dating skills are about equal to a 13 year old nerd with braces
If your metas are herpes then mine are full blown AIDS
Your muttering your rhymes while I go off on tirades
I’m not gunna call you a hockey fanatic, igloo resident, or a syrup drinking canuck
Or say that a 14 year old could reek havoc in Canada with one pair of nunchucks
I just want you to remember one thing from this confrontation
Respect U.S., women, and me, better consider reconciliation
Cause Sab I didn’t come fake or thug, I came to mess with your cerebral
Allevy’s the police about to lock you up, sabatoge is wrong and unlawful
sorry about the triple post, the last one is the real one, disregard the others, uppin 1 for votes
aight then...
Sabotage:
Ur verse was decent. I didn't really understand ur opener. Ur closer was also weak. Decent wordplay and good vocab. I didn't see any really hard hitting punches or personals. Ok metas. My fav lines were the pistol falls/crystal balls ones. Good structure..each bar matched up and the whole verse flowed well Overall i'd give a 6/10
Allevyate:
Opener was ok...kinda tried to force the Sad And Boring Ogre...stuff. Nice personals and punches, u want straight after his pro and his personal info so u def win there. The 2 Canada lines were ok but it was hypocritical. U said u werent gonna diss Canada but u spent two lines dissing it anyway. Ur closer could have hit harder or flowed better cuz cerebral/unlawful is a forced rhyme and doesnt sound that good. I really liked the herpes/AIDS line, good wordplay. Good vocab even or a bit better than Sab's. Overall 7.5/10
Vote -- Allevyate
ok thanks for the vote and I will return the favor, like I will return the favor for anyone else who votes on this battle, just leave a link
uppin 2
sabotage-Your verse was pretty decent. It was a nice flow with a decent structure, and good wordplay. But u could have came harder with your punches and personals. your vocabulary can improve a bit as well with your multis. Overall a decent verse from u but i dont think it got u the win. Your closure also put u down some points.
Allevyate-Your verse was also pretty decent. You had some good punches and multis, with a very good structure. You had a so-so flow that can be worked on. But other than that u had better word play and better vocabulary that was crucial to this battle. Also good closer to come up with the win
v/Allevyate
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Yo nice drop alle... i didn't think you had such good diction! uppin' 1
kwick.... the opener is like this.... Evy is the short form of the name Evylin.. or something to thjat effect...
I wasnt really feelinf either verse , most of the lines were played butttttt
alevyate had that nunchuck line lmao thats had me laughing , that was the best line of the battle.
sab:you had good multies "crystal ball" pistol call" but i think they were forced and dindt rea;; have any meaning, if you can make a multi that still hits hard then do it but if your goonas sacrifice meaning for the multi i think you shoudlnt.
alevyate: you came ok but your flow was pretty weak, th saving grace was the nunchuk line even though i am canadian, i still though it was dope.
pretty close but the nunchuk line put allevyate over the edge
v/all
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Seems your name just boils down 2 " All Evy Ate "
I'd jump 2 assume that this bitch Evy is 1 fat weight
Okay i reread this...i get it...a bit confusing...but good punch...7/10
Your attempts to amuse people through verse I oppose
Similar to your endeavor to anybody 2 who you propose
Blah....nothing special yet...3/10
Bladder and your head hit the floor when the pistol call
I see the tragic fate of your rap career thru crystal balls
Its not hard hitting...go straight at him!!....3/10
You wont be much of a gangsta after the missles fall
I crush through you without effort with my blissful maul
Still nothing....2/10
Just seems like nobody knows who they are 'till it happens
Untill than we'll be all cool say, " wusup? " & 'wuss crackin'?'
Umm...no....0/10
Verse Score = 15/50 = 30%
Okay pretty much your verse didnt have any punches...plain and simple...mostly all filler...go straight at him and use a personal....get sum meta's in there too...only thing good about ur verse was flow...but that dont win the battles....
Guess what I’ve got almost 4 wins, you know what that means?
Because you’re a Sad And Boring Ogre, That Allevy’s Gunnabe Elite
Umm...doesnt rhyme...gay bar...really...1/10
Sab you better stick to topicals, battling isnt workin out
You spit a sour verse like your were force fed sourkraut
Decent...just try not to use sour and then sour again...messes it up...5/10
So, your I see in your pro interests are “throwin pancakes at bitches faces”
Then your dating skills are about equal to a 13 year old nerd with braces
Another decent punch....6/10
If your metas are herpes then mine are full blown AIDS
Your muttering your rhymes while I go off on tirades
Self glorification...2/10
I’m not gunna call you a hockey fanatic, igloo resident, or a syrup drinking canuck
Or say that a 14 year old could reek havoc in Canada with one pair of nunchucks
Ehh decent...5/10
I just want you to remember one thing from this confrontation
Respect U.S., women, and me, better consider reconciliation
Yeah yeah yeah...wheres the punches?!?!....4/10
Cause Sab I didn’t come fake or thug, I came to mess with your cerebral
Allevy’s the police about to lock you up, sabatoge is wrong and unlawful
Not feelin it...1/10
Verse Score - 19/70 = 24%
Scores may be deceiving...I'm still giving this battle to you...you had punches...he didnt...thats why u won....plain and simple...
Vote - Allevyate
I cant poll yet...but will you please up the battle with V' Tech in my sig with an honest vote...thanks...
SAB- not really feelin you in this one man, i dont think you did as bad as everyone else said that you did but u didnt do as good as i seen you do either, anyways in this battle i think that you had really great structure but your punches (2) only hit him lightly and i know you could have thrown good good ones about his file
Alleyvate- still gettin batter man, every battle of yours that i read you get better in, i think that your doin good cause your takin everyone elses feed back, anyways in this one i also think that you had really really great stucture which set up your punches, and word flow really really well
V/Alleyvate- sorry sab but he threw up better
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