ill start
10-14 lines
no hate
no bitin
u no the rest
Kwiksand
TomER
ill start
10-14 lines
no hate
no bitin
u no the rest
ok man....spit
Somebody give me the mike, I flow like a menace,
Hurry up and get this little dike, I cant believe hes in this
His rymes dont make sense, just like Ronald McDonald and his buddy GRIMACE
That purple piece of shits got more of a rite 2 rap in this
I new just the rite guy who 2 pick,
u aint neva had yerself a chick
cuz u and ur mama sucka lotta dick,
This guy aint neva gonna see no booty
He likes them skittles, its all fruity.
Your gay son, u wear that Abercrombie & Fitch,
ooo.....go home....and taste the rainbow BITCH!
Vote in this battle of mine/ anybody
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134051
ok....................... lets see whatcha got kwiksand.......
Ur not gettin the mic, ur just behind a screen and typin
Ill print out ur verse and bend over for u to start wiping
I don't do fruity skittles, i prefer the chocolates
My flow melts u like keeping them in ur pockets
17 years old and still hooked on Sesame Street
Another lousy teen with a face of acne and defeat
Ur the gay one, u always wear the GAP
Gay And Proud, im killin u in this rap
Think u are a flowin emcee, big mister Tomer?
Just callin u a textcee is a big misnomer
Good Battle ................now lets see if we can get some votes
well I'll tel you one thing both of you shouldnt put clothes as jokes in your verses that was mad stupid wit tomer sayin somtin about fitch and kwiKsand talkin about gap wen he said gay and proud
TomER- wow it was kinda wack the best line to me was :Somebody give me the mike, I flow like a menace" your structure and flow wasnt that good, your wordplay was iight I saw no punches and no good personals your verses overall was like a 4/10...
Kwiksand- your best LINES were:
I don't do fruity skittles, i prefer the chocolates
My flow melts u like keeping them in ur pockets
17 years old and still hooked on Sesame Street
Another lousy teen with a face of acne and defeat
Your structure was good and so was your flow I saw some personals that hit your overall verse was a 6.5/10
vote: Kwiksand
Hey Kwiksand what ever happened to no feedin on others rymes
Qoute
anyone wanna battle?
10 lines
no d/r
no hate
no feeding
no biting
u set it up
u spit first
lets go
lol so now your gonna dq him cuz your scared of loosin
i didnt take anything directly out of urs or anything....i just maybe countered some stuff u said which is wat u can do right?
ill let this slide cuz i dont care, but another person might get pissed off when u write a rule and dont follow it.
Thats True But Unfortunalty Until Someone Says Something About That, Then I Am Afraid Kwik Has This He Laid A Better Verse, Better Structure, Tomer I Didnt Really See Anything Good In Your Whole Verse
V/kwik
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
ok well kwik already hit up one of my battles tomer u can hit one up with feedback, and kwik if u feel like it u can hit up another
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133926
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133962
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133989
Flow/ Structure: I give this to kwik cause he was consistant, and when tomer threw in that GRIMACE it kinda messed it up when you were reading it
Punches/ Personals: you gotta give it to kwik because he actually tried to attack you personally, as apposed to ur punches which were very general, i agree with apoc that both of your clothes lines were a little wack, but at least kwik referred to the fact u were 17.
Creativity: Kwik cause he got some humor in there, and I liked the M+M line it was much more creative than skittles
Vocab: Neither used great vocab in this one but Kwik had a little better.
Overall I've seen better from Kwik but he did plenty to win this one v/ Kwik
Now return the favor
uppin one...............please we need votes
2 more my way and this can be closed
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