Chemical

[$oulja Redz]

Creep with me, as I crawl through your bloodstream
Dirty as the bathroom in New York club scenes
A chemical river that flows through veins of drug fiends
Ob-scene, un-clean, love between teens
It's chemical, phlegm that I spit, adrenaline kicks
Flow through your body, make it stressful as shit
What they inject into meat, into food you eat
Nowadays will make you lazy and wanna go to sleep
Chemicals seep in dirt, work deep in earth
Spin babies in the womb feet first at birth
Leaves embryonic fluid polluted and kids stupid
Fruit juice diluted, your drinkin' water putrid
The chemicals, heroine, built to be American
Pussies puke blood, baby mamas miscarriage-in'
Additives, preservatives, add to my nervousness
Bad when it surfaces, the madness is murderous
It's chemical

It's probably the reason I'm havin' panic attacks
Can't manage to relax, got me brandishin' gats
Paranoid, thinkin' everybody's plannin' a trap
It's just a chemical inside me I managed to tap
And now there's fiends smokin' it, this weed's soaked in it
It's more than just trees with a little coke in it
A Pandora's box, stop, don't open it
The euphoric feelin' revealin' the opiate
Back when I was little and they had me on Ritalin
I was chillin', literally zombie-type feelin'
Addicted to caffeine like some sort of crack fiend
Let it post through my veins like powerful vaccines
You're dependent: toothpaste, soap, deodorant
A chemical addiction without even knowin' it
You listenin' right now? Your body is holdin' it
A chemical dependency, no way to get over it
It's chemical

Anthrax, death threats, X, enhance sex
Steroids effects pecs, abs, and biceps
Advil relieves pain, trees deceive brains
Add a little chemical, you start to see things
Water filled with fluoride will fix up your teeth
Hormones are gettin' pumped in pigs, chicken, and beef
Alcohol slurs words, Mydol controls birds
Xanax calms your nerves if your brain's disturbed
Vitamin C for health, to take care of yourself
And you can even cure AIDS if you got enough wealth
Food coloring tricks you, glucose addicts you
All the dirty shit in food is why your clothes don't fit you
Red Bull pumps your energy, weed fucks with memory
Coke mixed with Hennessy turns friends to enemies
Pills to stop pregnancies, slow the flow steadily
Incredible, we're based on a chemical dependency
It's chemical

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[See]

this was real long but thats a good thing it made me still wanna read it to get to the end and its was good so stay droping like this and if they this long and nice you willl stay getting mad feed

[Old Man]

It was newbish. I liked some parts, but the beginning to me was awful...no imagery in this piece at all. You need to be emotional and creative when writing OM's. keep trying, you have the wording, but the vocab lacks a little. Good Try!

-Old Man

[Smokey.]

I Liked It I Thought Had Some Good Worpdlay , U Know Concepts Everything Seemd To Flow Pretty Well Coulda Worked On Cratity Mor Eemotion Into It But Overall Keep Doing Ya Thing Stay Up Homie

Good Shit

[$oulja Redz]

uppim

[*Jay*]

nice nigga long but i was feelin it all the way through mayne u keep my attention good story u brought it real to good shit

[moneyonmymind]

this was nice
you stayed on topic the whole song
nice multis
and vocabulary