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Thread: Maybe I should.....

  1. October 11th, 2005, 08:55 PM #1
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    Maybe I should.....

    I originally keyed this in Cypher forum in the Elevation thread off a topic given….Im bored so I decided to expand it and drop it in here…Blah

    Wakin up pissed, feelin like my minds been fucked since birth
    Struck and cursed, feelin like noone gives a fuck, it hurts
    Its like Im, just gon burst, eyes blinded by this blood lust and thirst
    Whats it worth, livin dead to the world like a man crushed by earth

    I cant take this shit!!!!

    Maybe I should snap, break and explode before my mind jus bursts
    Not tryin to hurt, noone but this pain got my head, fried and burnt!!!
    Crisp and hard, ready to smash any and all..someone please try me jerk!!!
    Youll die, get merked quicker then my crushed dreams now lying in dirt

    Or maybe I just.……I should

    I should just live through this whirlwind of cold fronts impacting from all angles
    But Im stackin no paper, broke from inside out, feelin relaxed but so strangled!
    Perhaps Ill go mangle, ligaments of some kat …attack and scream let go anger!!

    Yes that’s it……

    Its time I take a stand as man & show this world gods son will make it
    Id just love to take this wrechid life through the flood of blood and hatred
    God Id Just love to take it, turn it around, flip the script. crush and shake it
    Oh God Oh God........I guess Im just........Gonna take it

    …Blah
    …..….Blah
    …….……Blah



    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=239057
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=238278
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=238627
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  2. October 12th, 2005, 10:52 AM #2
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    lmao....someone needz to rip into this shit....wtf
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  3. October 12th, 2005, 10:58 AM #3
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    Im not gonna rip into this piece cause ive read other pieces from you so i know your verses are pretty good. The concept was decent but nothing stand out. Your imgery and vocab matched well for the piece you diodnt go over the top with the vocab like a lot of people on OM. You had multies in there they could of been a bit more consistent with them but you had some mixed in there so i'll give you props for that. I get sick of seeing pieces with no multies it just makes shit look sloppy so i thought this was a decent piece.
    Only thing i could say to you is come up with some better concepts and keep your multies consistent and your verses will be better.
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  4. October 12th, 2005, 12:55 PM #4
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    ill hit up the link in lil bit kid.....in class right now
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  5. October 12th, 2005, 01:59 PM #5
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    well its better than the last ancient pice you posted
    got a few poetic skills emerging
    i actualy like long lines if the flows held together well..
    rhyme sceme was basic.. but i guess it worked
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  6. October 12th, 2005, 08:47 PM #6
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    thankx for the feed yall.....im hittin ya link now War....and much respect Vortex for givin a real reply even though our beef......still lookin for someone to rip into it......so up it goes
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  7. October 13th, 2005, 10:14 AM #7
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    .....zZzZZZZZZZZZZz

    ....Wake up muthafuckas
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  8. October 13th, 2005, 06:37 PM #8
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    WTF.....second page wit noone ripping my shit yet....fuck is wrong wit yall?.....I rip into alot of katz shit on here.....noone can return the fuckin favor???????????
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  9. October 13th, 2005, 07:12 PM #9
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    yo i was feelin ur piece it had everything u just need to work on ur scheme and everything would be great but other than everything was on point man keep it up and im lookin forward to more of ur drops aight
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  10. October 13th, 2005, 11:23 PM #10
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    aight...good look


    ...fly high one more time
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  11. October 14th, 2005, 10:04 AM #11
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    Everything Was Right On Tracc I Liked The Structure, The Whole Concept,
    J Us Work On The Scheme
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  12. October 14th, 2005, 10:05 AM #12
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    Nice Piece I Give You

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  13. October 14th, 2005, 01:42 PM #13
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    kid ...u realize you replied twice....in a fuckin row....WTF?????


    Cant noone see the shit I see wrong wit this???????
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  14. October 15th, 2005, 01:34 AM #14
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    To the first page please................upppppppppppppppppp we go
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  15. October 15th, 2005, 02:12 PM #15
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