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  1. October 6th, 2005, 07:25 AM #1
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    Fakes and Actors

    nope.
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  2. October 6th, 2005, 07:28 AM #2
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=237186
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  3. October 6th, 2005, 07:31 AM #3
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    lots of good rhymes vocab and good flow...i felt some more imagery would of done this piece more justice, like give me some more to envision and feell...
    all well worded tho.. above average writing

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  4. October 6th, 2005, 07:39 AM #4
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    This was a nice piece, u had some good rhymes and kept on point. Good vocab and the topic was well potrayed. Both verses came strong and i felt you were saying. Good drop
    written voices makes hidden noises
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  5. October 6th, 2005, 09:11 AM #5
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    yo....vocab there.....but thats it..............rhymes....cant believe these kats eyes poppin over a few internals....but topics been done and done again....at times alot better then this one here......Wordplay/Metas would add depth and imagery
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  6. October 6th, 2005, 05:27 PM #6
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mic_Dareall
    yo....vocab there.....but thats it..............rhymes....cant believe these kats eyes poppin over a few internals....but topics been done and done again....at times alot better then this one here......Wordplay/Metas would add depth and imagery
    iight... your entitled to your opinion... mo feed plz.
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  7. October 7th, 2005, 12:22 AM #7
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    could I have some more feed please

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    bump!!!
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  8. October 7th, 2005, 12:23 AM #8
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    ha ya nice vocab there i liked ur shit 8.9/10
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  9. October 7th, 2005, 12:30 AM #9
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    yah Man. Good Flow. Really Liked It. You Had Good Vocab And From Me If I Rated It I'd Give You A #8....peep Mines.
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  10. October 7th, 2005, 07:43 AM #10
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    Thnx yall.... leave some better feed next time tho... lookin for more feed.
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  11. October 7th, 2005, 10:52 AM #11
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    I liked the concept to the piece it was different ive seen a lot of original concepts in Om lately seems the place is improving about fucking time.
    Your vocab was good it helped you describe your feelings and thoughts in great detail so i thought it was a good read. Your flow was nice but i know all about flow so i know you got inconsistant with it in some of the bars so next time you write keep that flow more consistent. The imagery and vocab was perfect for the piece so all i can say is next time you write come up with another original concept and keep that flow more consistent.

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  12. October 8th, 2005, 05:13 AM #12
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    Thanx warchild... will take on board... more feed yall..
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  13. October 11th, 2005, 12:56 AM #13
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    Anymore feed??
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  14. October 11th, 2005, 05:11 AM #14
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    was good...u shoud make it more detailed..7/10
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  15. October 11th, 2005, 08:12 PM #15
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    yo it was good especially wit the vocabs
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