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    reality check

    soon to be audio to just a moment by nas



    Taking baby steps as an adult in this situation
    wish my head could rest through this assult im facin
    it hard living flawed with concrete commitment in me
    ground need breakin’ and my minds the tool it seems
    but foolishly I’d rather speak then achieve my dreams
    keep things like my shoes clean, stead of quite screams
    silent nightmares haunt me, like the ghost of the coming
    night terrors kill philosophy, and still I conquer nothing
    the blood is bubbling and it’s evident a change is due
    but im stuck standing with glued shoes so nothings new
    so we take a deep breath an inhale what we were given
    stay livin sinin’ in mental prisons with no ambition
    our only course of action is to remorse on the past
    and understand a mans life like this simply cant last
    so imma take my high school degree and be great
    create a decree to make the flag salute me, with no hate
    no devastation, no limitations, or regulations
    simply a mutual respect for us to be placed in
    cuz I seen too many held back instead of escapin’
    while contemplation leaves us evading regulation
    the nations a glass house, we cant face the reflection
    this is a session of recession our attentions in detention
    development is arrested, who’d guess were suppressed
    oppressed and our defense is silence to further wreck mess
    so it’s you I address with a message to take a stand
    a presage, to rise above liars and live like a man
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    upping please, thank you
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    good topic, good emotion, good structure, solid vocab, GOOD imagery, solid rhymes. you're elavating man, i can see it with every piece you drop.

    silent nightmares haunt me, like the ghost of the coming
    night terrors kill philosophy, and still I conquer nothing

    ^^dope, my fave lines in the piece.^^

    Glad to have you as a teammate in the tag league, we will murder some people. lol.

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    thanks fam, nice to get kudos from someone as cool as you
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    thank you upping
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    You need to stop going around telling people to follow the rules in there open mic. Cause it just makes you look bad cause all you are doing is freeposting then i have to delete the post. It doesnt make my job any easier.

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    This was dope man, i aint posted on this site for a while but i remember some of your old pieces and youve improved a lot.
    The emotion in the piece was great it would sound good over that nas beat you was just talking about your goals and what you think is fucked up with the world so i was really feeling it.
    Your vocab is good so is your wordplay, the flow wasnt that good but your vocab and emotion in your pieces make them stand out.
    When i say the flow wasnt great i just meant you dont match up a lot of your syllables but thats cool cause your vocab and wordplay really help your verses, this was dope nothing i could hate on.

    Can you reply to my new thread please:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=205329

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    thank you guys...means a lot.

    credz sorry man, i honestly was just trying to help.. you could have pm'ed me telling me this. cuz what you did is basically the same thing you told me not to do, unless you would like to leave me some feed. but yeah i wont say anything now, just report it.
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