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Thread: Whats the Catch

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    Whats the Catch

    U see the stuff in the media, papers and news
    And wonder what more innocence could this world lose
    Is it this bad caz we simply choose
    or maybe becaz we all are mindless fools
    Some hide it better then other people can
    Like some people are confirmed sane and others pretend
    I think we dont even completely understand
    Why we were made to rot on a dying land
    We take life for granted now and kill all the time
    Whether it be video games, music, or just in our minds
    We are like sheep that a brain dead, mentally blind
    And in our heart we feel we got something to find
    Others find spouses to ease there pain
    Of being alone so they make there road a two lane
    If u were alone all ur life, would u still be sane
    Or would u be a dope addict who cant member his name
    If u had a very early abortion would u feel ashamed
    Or do u think 1 month and 7 months are not the same
    And when ur an old man in ur chair, sitting with ur cane
    Will u look back on ur life as a game that was lame
    Life is not easy to get through but has a purpose
    Like everyone, bus drivers, teachers, nurses
    People blaming God for the problems with evil curses
    And then even more problems emerges
    Do u really think God would like to torcher u
    Nah ur forgeting theres a devil out there to
    And some people who are out there, dont have a clue
    Do u think a molested, beaten child, can be re-newed
    Or do u mess up in life and just think, man im screwed
    Take one step at a time and u can get through ur problems
    But wouldnt u like it better if someone more powerful helped u solve them
    Call him, hes home all the time, day or night
    all u gotta do is close ur eyes and pray, u dont got to write

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    wow....that was dope....i was really feeling the whole "world view" approach to this piece.

    Like everyone, bus drivers, teachers, nurses
    People blaming God for the problems with evil curses......dope line

    We take life for granted now and kill all the time
    Whether it be video games, music, or just in our minds....so true

    and i like how you ended it. funny i read this, cause i just got done reading some of the bible before i checked this site. and it's been months since i have. I guess i feel like i'm getting to old for it.....
    I dup the fake, there's no way to Duplicate this cocky stocky 5'3 emcee wit more stamina than rocky, i leave you wit lumpty lumps and ruin you like humpty hump and shock G.....ME

    Dog you a FOOL, comparin' me to you is like Pac to Ja rule, no comparison ya style is lame weak and embarrassin', so find a new hobby....Me

    Fuck the world don't ask me for shit....BIG

    What ya really know about the DIRTY SOUTH?

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    Miss you Dad...stay like you were when you were here....keep it ganksta....

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    This was a tight verse i was really feeling it.
    The concept was something we can all relate to you got out true and raw feelings out in the rhymes. The structure and vocab were fine you need to work on the flow a little bit but other than that this was a hot verse.

    Return the favour.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175058

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    hot damn man this shit was nice like what..
    you got skills ...keep it up dawg 9/10

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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175014
    Credz, this is my second link to an open mic

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    shit was dope kid and it was deep
    it startz to make a nigga thin and shit

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    Thumbs up

    WRD THIS IS A HOTT PIECE,
    FEELING IT FO' REO.

    KEEP IT UP DAWG... KALIKOZE9/11


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    I was feelin this
    not my style, but I do like

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    Dope Drop.
    Ill Wordplay.
    Multies Was Hot.
    Fire Drop.
    Keep Them Coming.
    Blood Angel Dynasty...

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    yo, this shit is pure... sick, kudos to you

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