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    Still in the grave Johnny 6-feet's Avatar
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    64 Lines

    The Good Stuff- Credz

    Hanging High- Wicked

    I originally called this "No-ones iller" but on second thoughts that title is wank. I got the idea for this piece from an old track by Eminem, Swifty, Bizarre and Fuzz. It's basically made up of a load od verses and half-verses i wrote over time and pasted together to make 64 lines. The audio version of this (with me sounding gruff as fuck) is available for your listening torture through the link in my sig.


    Don't be fooled by the jocks that i knock
    I rock, i'm still certified to drop
    Hot shots better than you, a veteran crew
    Til we collapse, our faces turned steadily blue
    Its heavy, its true, the mic and i are intertwined
    Enter minds? My rhymes have entered mine
    My vision is red, i walk with pricision and tred
    On any and all obsticles, crush 'em in my mandibles
    The ripsaw opens up crevasses and pitfalls
    Hits all, the verbal results are shit drawers
    The contact, slaps back fakers and wack raps
    On track, locomotive crush flat your speech flaps
    Who needs gats? Fuck a weapon all i need is aggression
    Two fists, i move swift, broken flesh is a lesson
    I'm guessin', you think murder is the final solution
    But i'm stressin', humiliation in the form of a bruising
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    I'm the human horror film, resurrection insurrection
    No disrespect son, on my radar detection
    Are you blushing? Embarassed at the words that i'm cussin'?
    Or bluffing? Just another herb who's discussing
    The most under of the underground, freaking the sound
    Mayhem bound, knock contenders down in the first round
    Plus these, PYT's got me making enemies
    Who displeased this young seed recieves striptease
    Forever present, i make you forever repentant
    For your lazy slack wackness, terror comes with my entrance
    I'm forever more clever, use my voice to roar better
    And spit the storm weather, the one you saw wetter
    Apply a plier squeeze to acquire a quiet fee
    In society with a higher steez, riot police freeze
    A messiahty? Or better yet a UK illity
    Johnny 6-feet, aint nobody iller than me
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    So call an ambulance, this is a bloodbath ambience
    Part one of this track was with Keezy and Ambient
    I collect vets to wreck your wet set
    Disrespect you and the city you rep
    I sling words like rocks from David to Goliath
    Strike your temple, your eardrums, ask who's the highest
    The flyest, white guy since that offspring song
    Don't get it twisted like a blonde bitch, the whole thing wrong
    Bring bong, jack daniels and coke to mix
    If we're standing, attack at the slightest diss
    But for now i'm scheming on the lightest bitch
    With gold words like i flipped a hidden midas switch
    And i might just trip, fall flat and pass the fuck out
    But i will take those rats in the class they took out
    Attrack dykes, excite hype from day to late night
    And i got what it takes to rock the mic right
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    I'm just throwing record players like i'm flipping the beat
    Make arse cheeks clentch so hard they put a rip in the seat
    I haven't heard this many lyrics dropped in ages
    Hit emcees with lasers, tasers and razors
    You'd better bring a long stick if you wanna prod vets
    And swing harder than the golden state projects
    You cowards talk shit and hide behind your crew first
    I give a fuck, i find beef addictive like truth hurts
    There's a morale to this tale like an aesop fable
    You know 6 rock's able and my mind is unstable
    Leave 'em fosselised like mossquitos in amber
    Even in mexico leave chico's camramba'd
    Who's the only emcee with props in the UK
    Who can move like Jet-Li and make the room sway?
    I'm hanging plaques on my wall like an art exhibit
    But for now i'll let the next man kick it
    64


    done, thanks for reading.

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    Very Nice! i loved reading this peice for a certain reason.
    the content was so precise, it was as if it could have been brought to a higher perspective. you know what im sayin?
    anyways,
    very detailed imagery throughout this peice. you showed you could hold a scheme to a monotone level. you understand what im sayin?
    overall, i thought this was creative to a certain aspect, and held great content and imagery throughout this whole peice.
    im nominating this for OM of the week. nice work, and an incredible read.
    8.9/10.
    keep writing dude. be strong and stay strong.


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    that was some tight shit johnny
    keep it up
    peace

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    Nice man, I liked this....I read this kinda at a fast pace and it flowed great for me that way and i liked it lol...Flow was good overall!...Had nice multies in this which help support the fast pace flow for me, i dunno if thats what you were going for but thats how i got it and i thought it was good!...Vocab was nice in this, didnt over do it like some peoples...Overall though man this was a nice piece, i liked it a lot...Thanks for the feedback on my piece. I would leave longer feedback but Im kinda short on time cause My ride is soon here and i figured i might as well leave some now cause i will probably forget later lol..But Thanks man! Nice Piece

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    verses vocab never missed the flow, the multis sinked in all the words to where you didnt have to stop and read over to catch the flow again, the fact that you can do 64 lines and still not drop the flow is pretty incredible for a text, overall the shit was cool cause it was wat it was:meaning you never steered off topic and you did the verse for wat its worth and didnt try to make this a "deep peice" just cause you had so many lines to add stuff like that in, tight verse, 9/10...

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    Yup S'hup Johnnnny? Ain't seen you for a while

    Word to what the guy up above said about the multis keeping it flowing nice, content was more audioish suited I'd say..but I reckon you should make it audio if you haven't already.

    Was this that long one you were writing months and months ago? LOL

    Keep it coming mangggg.

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    shit was on fire like micheal jacksons hair at pepsi commercials...the multis were superb...i remember this kat from a while back...anyways nice piece...keep that hot shit coming...one

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