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Thread: A link in the chain

  1. November 9th, 2004, 07:15 PM #1
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    A link in the chain

    I am together joined, an inviolable unbreakable unit
    provin’ brothers banding bring chastity undeluded
    denuded collusion infuses our bond of brotherhood
    common good could be understandably misunderstood
    should one take time and open eyes they will realize
    jointed lives define the kind of life that we idealize
    close ties sensationalize the intimacy of our crew
    only few pursue to subdue and accrue the true view
    do you want to be wholly sole or a soul in a whole
    know vile and cold is moving without a common goal
    behold the powers of numbers that number blunders
    conceal n cover confused lucidity when minds wander
    singly, honor is stuttered showing like light through shutters
    loud as mutters, strong as butter acting sublime like cutters
    enshrouding feelings leading to bleeding pain not belonging
    longing to be cohesively released to be pieced for connecting
    rejecting the road of being alone to be cloned and composed
    counters counter con’s and produce pro’s leaving misdiagnosed
    suppose you got wove into a group to be considered intertwined
    would you find that being a link in the chain is not utterly sublime?


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  2. November 10th, 2004, 03:10 PM #2
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    common you guys are sleeping again. im not that wack. well i least i don't think so.
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  3. November 10th, 2004, 07:51 PM #3
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    You Got Some Skill Twin Dont Worry Sleepers Have To Wake Up Eventually
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  4. November 10th, 2004, 11:59 PM #4
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    uppin this
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  5. November 11th, 2004, 02:27 AM #5
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    Not Bad Man...Pretty Nice Piece i thought...you had nice vocab usage which i thought did good for this piece!...flow was very nice as well in this, one of the things i liked the most about it...Structure in this was pretty decent i thought very good...But overall man I thought this was a nice piece...I liked the read...it was worth checking out...and sorry for such the short feedback, I just got home from work and checked my thread and saw you left a link so i thought i would return the favor before i forgot!
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  6. November 11th, 2004, 12:51 PM #6
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    Great use of vocab .. A few of the word were hard for me to understand, But the flow of the piece brought it back together for me .. The word usage brought a great structure to the piece .. meta's were decent
    ( singly, honor is stuttered showing like light through shutters
    loud as mutters, strong as butter acting sublime like cutters )....Best line
    Over all every thing was there ??? Hall of fame ??? I still dont understand how that all works but great piece every aspect of rap was there ..
    Newtestament* .... OHH' & thanks for the feed back on my piece.....
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  7. November 11th, 2004, 02:24 PM #7
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    has woken up and saw this my 2ed read om of the day

    it was a nice peiace
    the vocab was good as well as the flow bein consistent

    ur structure was cool too


    good drop
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  8. November 11th, 2004, 02:46 PM #8
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    thanks for all of the great feedback. wow. feel free to nominate it. thanks guys.
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  9. November 11th, 2004, 06:30 PM #9
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    The bump cause wall sleepin on dude......Good shit fam. Vocab was unbelivable.
    I really see a lot of improvement. Its easy for people to use a lot of complex vocab but it takes skill to really say something with those word. Good piece
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  10. November 12th, 2004, 03:15 AM #10
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    man that was tyte

    this line here: close ties sensationalize the intimacy of our crew/
    only few pursue to subdue and accrue the true view.

    that was good. keep it up. peace man i'm out
    They say the best are kept hidden...its about time I came out of hiding.
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    thanks yall upp
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