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Last edited by Illus'; November 23rd, 2008 at 02:58 PM
yo its ill but i wanted a better ending lol other then that thuis shit was straight fire and i dont like ur ish being slept on
to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
Thanks Word-Perfect...
Appreciate it...
I don't like my scripts being
slept on either..after all the
effort...sighs.
uppin
thats some nice shit you be spitting some good shit..keep it up
i always like your topicals, but i think this was probably the worst i have read from you. it was only above average. maybe it is just me but i thought that your flow was a little off and i wasn't feeling a very solid rhyme scheme. maybe i just couldnt pick it up. overall above average.
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Thanks for input..
For this piece I wasn't really
focusing on a flow scheme
more of a story scene...
The flow I did in some parts
were there due to me always
rhyming ...peace..
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