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check one check hard
u check & its out with nard
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136103
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136115
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...29#post1529229
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136102
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...63#post1529563
Last edited by Scott B; July 8th, 2004 at 12:45 PM
.. im back
im considered the best, but u.... ur just new
u think inside the box, but not becuase ur in the crew
well im poppin my collar, ur just tipping the cuff
few can talk trash..... while ur stuck picking it up
ur outta ur luck... ur garbage kid, time has taken toll
and ur so bad, u decide to battle with a fake poll
ur lacking balls, contrary to what ur name implies
and im serving up punches, and ur serving me fries
^ lol at me secretely insulting myself, to bad u cant feed
cuz if wackness was food, ud be bigger than me
10 lines..... here u go
.. im back
erm i don't get this i check first right?
if so...
Check
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I Could Care Less
I Carried WestCoast Rap On My Back
Yo yo..
You cumin in this ugly, like your bitch on the end of your dick
geek thought he could post phat by opening threads of his pic
|ok geek put on your glasses for this|
Pfft, fuckin wanna be, make this wigga really drop and holla
Then touch this bastid pimp and really pop his collar
I知 bi-talented, but just now my right hand is controlling ya health
Then Ill raise ye soul so you can really watch over yaself
Am here now ye interest rate lowered like yall move mortgage
An I値l have dizzle in a panic like theres a fuckin food shortage
All this shit talk and confidence you値l be regretting royally
Rip off ye flesh, an have ye spine bein viewed like checking loyalty
Go figure, fat boi aint depressed, hes a real happy dude
Kus As long as you can laugh at yourself you will never cease to be amused
good luck kid... most metas were simply, if you dont get them dont vote...
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I Carried WestCoast Rap On My Back
good battle........... upping.
sorry for the unneeded up
Last edited by Scott B; July 6th, 2004 at 07:15 PM
.. im back
you didnt need to up it, nor post that nonsense.. somebody delete these last two posts...
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I Carried WestCoast Rap On My Back
im considered the best, but u.... ur just new
u think inside the box, but not becuase ur in the crew
Played, but decent flip.
well im poppin my collar, ur just tipping the cuff
few can talk trash..... while ur stuck picking it up
Lol.
^ lol at me secretely insulting myself, to bad u cant feed
cuz if wackness was food, ud be bigger than me
Lol
That surprised me. Decent verse Dizzle.
Pfft, fuckin wanna be, make this wigga really drop and holla
Then touch this bastid pimp and really pop his collar
Ill concept, but the wording and setup were so fucked that it ruined it.
I知 bi-talented, but just now my right hand is controlling ya health
Then Ill raise ye soul so you can really watch over yaself
Decent
Besides that, the closer had potential. I think SDizzle edged this out. He just had better wording on his concepts, so they hit much harder. Nard, you got the concepts, just work on wording.
Vote:SDizzle.
-W1
Hence Forward
axis powers
im considered the best, but u.... ur just new
u think inside the box, but not becuase ur in the crew
---Have seen this concept before but it was decent. well im poppin my collar, ur just tipping the cuff
few can talk trash..... while ur stuck picking it up
---Ok. Not bad
ur outta ur luck... ur garbage kid, time has taken toll
and ur so bad, u decide to battle with a fake poll
---Links are soo gay. No.
ur lacking balls, contrary to what ur name implies
and im serving up punches, and ur serving me fries
---lol. Its funny but not that good of a punch
^ lol at me secretely insulting myself, to bad u cant feed
cuz if wackness was food, ud be bigger than me
---Decent.
Ok you came pretty good. Links are bad. Bigger than me line was cool so was opener and trash. You flowed ok. Maybe try and Throw in a few multies good structure I guess. So a decent verse.
You cumin in this ugly, like your bitch on the end of your dick
geek thought he could post phat by opening threads of his pic
---Uh....not bad...try to stay away from dicks and such.
Pfft, fuckin wanna be, make this wigga really drop and holla
Then touch this bastid pimp and really pop his collar
---Dont get it..
I知 bi-talented, but just now my right hand is controlling ya health
Then Ill raise ye soul so you can really watch over yaself
---Didnt like it.
Am here now ye interest rate lowered like yall move mortgage
An I値l have dizzle in a panic like theres a fuckin food shortage
---Sdizzle weight lines are played.
All this shit talk and confidence you値l be regretting royally
Rip off ye flesh, an have ye spine bein viewed like checking loyalty
---Wheres the punch?
Go figure, fat boi aint depressed, hes a real happy dude
Kus As long as you can laugh at yourself you will never cease to be amused
---Decent I guesse.
You came with some wit. But no good punches. You exceeded his line limit anyways so the line I dont get I just wont count. Closer was ok. Opener was ok. I didnt like anything else. The structure was kinda messed and wasnt really feeling the flow. You came wittier than dizzle but I felt dizzle edged this one.
Vote/sdizzle
Lol.
Vote-nard.
All this shit talk and confidence you’ll be regretting royally
Rip off ye flesh, an have ye spine bein viewed like checking loyalty
I liked that spine/loyalty line.
sdizzle obviously didnt take you serious & I wasnt feeling his punches at all. It was way too simplistic. Although, your closer was decent.
there was no lime limit i didnt agree with anything... plus i said if you dont get it dont vote...
2-1 thanxz for the votes... its appreciated.
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I Carried WestCoast Rap On My Back
decent battle competition wise...
dizzle,
im considered the best, but u.... ur just new
u think inside the box, but not becuase ur in the crew
not a good opener.. not even true. no punch 2/10
well im poppin my collar, ur just tipping the cuff
few can talk trash..... while ur stuck picking it up
better... good concept, decent hit. 5/10
ur outta ur luck... ur garbage kid, time has taken toll
and ur so bad, u decide to battle with a fake poll
personal, flow was bad, punch was ehh.. 3/10
ur lacking balls, contrary to what ur name implies
and im serving up punches, and ur serving me fries
ehh, not even tru. not a good punch. 3/10
^ lol at me secretely insulting myself, to bad u cant feed
cuz if wackness was food, ud be bigger than me
stupid again... too basic.. not a good closer. 2/10
dissapointed, thought you'd come wittier, no wordplay, flow wasnt good,
punches were weak at best, concepts were trash... metas were basic,
shit was elementary. bad verse from you, i expected more.
15/50
nard
Pfft, fuckin wanna be, make this wigga really drop and holla
Then touch this bastid pimp and really pop his collar
fed a little here... -2 points... so... decent.. 3/10
I知 bi-talented, but just now my right hand is controlling ya health
Then Ill raise ye soul so you can really watch over yaself
good concept, not too hard a punch, flow was off 3/10
Am here now ye interest rate lowered like yall move mortgage
An I値l have dizzle in a panic like theres a fuckin food shortage
good personal, punch... made me laugh... 5/10
All this shit talk and confidence you値l be regretting royally
Rip off ye flesh, an have ye spine bein viewed like checking loyalty
no. flow off again...1/10
Go figure, fat boi aint depressed, hes a real happy dude
Kus As long as you can laugh at yourself you will never cease to be amused
good closer.. good punch flow was better.. 6/10
flow wasnt great, metas were decent here n there, no wordplay really...
concepts were ok.. some lacked... overall wasnt to bad, first i seen of you...
18/50...
vote - nard
If he said 10 lines you have to agree or in your check in state otherwise.Originally Posted by nard
#3. All opponents MUST agree on a line limit IN THEIR CHECK INS!!!
he should of stated in his check in... then i would of agreed in mines, but lets just forget about it
thanxz for the votes people... somebody deletes these freeposts..
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I Carried WestCoast Rap On My Back
^Usually you should match him...if he didnt do it in check ins....
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