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I'm in...'
prepare to DIE...
j/k..
prepare to GET VOTED AGAINST...(somehow it doesn't sound as menancing...)
peace
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Last edited by RapidFire; July 7th, 2004 at 01:33 PM
I.J.L.
Givng him something to aspire to..
Cry me a river son, i'll tear through his 'tissue' like a fucked hymen,
Cause checking your shit got me wondering why Willium Hung started Rap rhyming,
All these people can't be wrong, im winnin this shit, even you on my dick,
Because it compliments your whackness, ~wHeN yOuR NamEs wRiT oUt lIke ThiS~,
Don't care about your experience, 3 years taught you to flee first, (obvious personal)
Cause this cat needs to slip-off-my-balls, like the surgury got reversed,
He's an internet-thug, I'll merk his text and audio he'll try to fight me,
I'm telling you to stick to audio..... Thats why oPey doesnt like me,
He feels all special, he's smoka's cousin, i swear he NEVER drops it,
But theres something he failed to tell you son.. You're adopted
Don't bitch about dickriding, because your disabled shit got you free parking,
These people aint 'bowing down to their superior MC', There just on the ground laughing..
Damn homie,
In highschool i beat the shit out of you and ya man homie,
Ya girl wanna blow me and dont even know me,
she lonely and she think you phonie,
i take a piss on a development deal from sony.
My verse is devastating, punches takin ya breath slow...
cuz ya shit is plain stupid, like musical chairs in death row...
this kid's a wannabe, I'm pretty sure the voters see that...
cuz even w/ my verse burnin ya, you wouldn't B. Black...
You're punches are old and played, like ancient recitals...
^^ which is the complete opposite, of your custom title...
Leave you wrapped in a noose, this faggot will lose...
just no-show kid....atleast then you'll have an excuse...
Ya girl says that ur hung....yea just keep ya dreams ahead...
cuz tha only 9 millimeter you got, is hangin between ya legs...
if semen was alcohol, then Black's liver is trashed...
cuz he's on the fag-tip, like an english ciggerate ash....*
(*) for those who don't know...in england the word for "ciggerate" is "fag"
iight...let the voting commense
I.J.L.
up...
Damn homie,
In highschool i beat the shit out of you and ya man homie,
Ya girl wanna blow me and dont even know me,
she lonely and she think you phonie,
i take a piss on a development deal from sony.
Cry me a river son, i'll tear through his 'tissue' like a fucked hymen,
Cause checking your shit got me wondering why Willium Hung started Rap rhyming,
first line was coo', didnt get the second one
All these people can't be wrong, im winnin this shit, even you on my dick,
Because it compliments your whackness, ~wHeN yOuR NamEs wRiT oUt lIke ThiS~,
lol, this is a nice personal
Don't care about your experience, 3 years taught you to flee first, (obvious personal)
Cause this cat needs to slip-off-my-balls, like the surgury got reversed,
lol, damn nice
He's an internet-thug, I'll merk his text and audio he'll try to fight me,
I'm telling you to stick to audio..... Thats why oPey doesnt like me,
dont understand
He feels all special, he's smoka's cousin, i swear he NEVER drops it,
But theres something he failed to tell you son.. You're adopted
lol, nice personal
Don't bitch about dickriding, because your disabled shit got you free parking,
These people aint 'bowing down to their superior MC', There just on the ground laughing..
lol haha, nice personal
My verse is devastating, punches takin ya breath slow...
cuz ya shit is plain stupid, like musical chairs in death row...
lol, this made me laugh.. duno why
this kid's a wannabe, I'm pretty sure the voters see that...
cuz even w/ my verse burnin ya, you wouldn't B. Black...
would be nice personal.. but his names d black
You're punches are old and played, like ancient recitals...
^^ which is the complete opposite, of your custom title...
not feelin this sorry
Leave you wrapped in a noose, this faggot will lose...
just no-show kid....atleast then you'll have an excuse...
he dropped before you, other wise this would of been quiet good
Ya girl says that ur hung....yea just keep ya dreams ahead...
cuz tha only 9 millimeter you got, is hangin between ya legs...
lol- these were played a couple of years ago
if semen was alcohol, then Black's liver is trashed...
cuz he's on the fag-tip, like an english ciggerate ash....*
nice bar..quiet a nice metaphor, first line made me laugh
personals: black
punches: black
Meta's/ Wordplay: hmm- this was about even
multis: rapid - had a few
Bleh.. Vote- Mr. D Black - all around better verse... nice battle, keep elevating.
You Probably Don't Remember Me.
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I Could Care Less
I Carried WestCoast Rap On My Back
okay battle
Structure:Both of y'all had good structure, but blacks internals were better more consisent
Personals:Black got this that name Personal was hot, best bar of the battle,Rapid had good personals like b.black joint just didn't outshine his real's name personal
Punches: both emcees had good punches and they were just about even and so i can't give this catergory to any1
Black won this with good personals, structure and decnet punches and rapid just couldn't keep up in the all of the catergories
v/Black
This battle was ok.
Rapid came with a few played lines, meh, yeah just a few. Others were average, not anything great. Didn't really enjoy his verse.
D. Black came with really hard hitting punches. Good use of personals too. Plus the SmokaJoka's cousin line had me crackin' the fuck up lmfao.
V/D. Black
Nard broke it down well.
Realim hard much harder hittin punches alot of good personals and good wordplay was used. flow was ight, structure werent great, but punches win battles and realim came alot harder
v/ realim
[YOUTUBE]qZwqp6S1gIw[/YOUTUBE]
<<Thought everybody knew Rapid was my cousin....keep up with the times...
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v/ rapidfire..... his opener killed it for me... although it did depart from there... musical chairs on deaths row.. classic
.. im back
Wow@this.
RapidFire won.
Mr. B came stretched & used a William Hung line. & your last two lines didnt even rhyme. = /
I wasnt really feeling your punches or wording.
^ thought i was the only one that noticed..
Vote: ~RaPiDfIrE~
Reason: The opener killed it for me. His flow was good through the whole thing. The B. Black line was nice, but everyone says his name is D. Black. Which it is, but I think he changed it, but I dunno. Anyways, I loved Black's closer, it was tight, but it didn't rhyme. Anyways, good battle.
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D black verse was wack, his punches were really weak, personals were really weak not a good read at all, all he did was brag in his verse instead of insulting his opponent not a good thing son, overall a pretty weak verse
Rapid.....your opener shut this shit down had me laughing hard son, nice way to open things up, the rest was ok you focused on him instead of hyping yourself up so I think that your verse was a lot better good drop try to stay more consistent throughout but you still took this one
Vote: Rapid
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