Nard vs. UrbanReelist

[Brother Blue Collar]

12-15 lines
blind spit
verses due b4 midnite eastern time
no feeding
no d/ring or cru votes

g/l nard

[nard]

ok ill juss key it so your not waitin... ive only juss seen it so...

didnt have to battle, but ill be happy to be the winner
kus [R] thinks he in double R when battlin the mirror
you gotta be kiddin me yo, am splittin this joke
and i'll drop [reel] like clumsy cinema foke
enough of this dude, i'll chuck words in
time to come off, like white kids houses i'll sub-urban
you not holdin ki's, not even seein what my hands feelin
watch nard become a mod, and really ban reelist
your kiddin me, are you not? ill be flippin thee on the spot
and the voters aint pickin urban, like biggimy at a job
this fucker wish for piece? be careful what you wishin
kus i'll throw list in fire like a sweedish christmas tradition*

*yer, i seen it on some film that they throw there christmas lists in the fire... dont ask me if it was true, it was some santa clause film

i coulda had some fun with your name, but w/e... good luck kid, the other battles i seen you done good...

[Brother Blue Collar]

checkin droppin ina few

[Brother Blue Collar]

fuck a nard this bastard trying hard to be(B) real
so today all he did was "jump around" so deal
with the truth, hell even ya own damn tactixx(Tactics) screams dick
i'll smash this poor excuse of a femcee this bitch
i know you wish you was a good textcee
ya more shook up than a dropped can of pepsi
now listen closely let me tell you a secret
pussy do not "snatch" victory from the elite kid
, you 2 gay and dumb to realize you being raped
so now ya ass just think you battling for pete's sake
to stop this ass whipping i shot in his pete's face
the truth is you are just a dick sumthing to beat
, just an ugly gay-ass fruitcake sumthing to eat

nice drop nard and g/l man

[nard]

nice verse.... uppin.

[nard]

uppin..................................
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[Poetik Thug]

Nice drop on both parts but I was feelin UrbanReelist.

peace

[Kleetus Kleaver]

Good battle fellas, worth the peep...

Nard-I dug the double R line...pretty creative..The dropping reel line was dope...funny as hell...your verse fell off a little after that but then picked up with the biggamy on the job...i didnt dig the sweedish tradition line, but then again, i'd not sweedish either...

Reelist-I didnt really like your opener...didnt seem like much of a punch to me...And i didnt click the link in the next line because you shouldnt have to click a link to get a punch...The pepsi line was ok, and so were the two that followed it...This though...

you 2 gay and dumb to realize you being raped
so now ya ass just think you battling for pete's sake
to stop this ass whipping i shot in his pete's face

This seemed to chop your flow to hell and back...you're go on a 2 line rhyme scheme for the whole verse, then 3...dosnt fit...your closing lines were pretty weak...

Vote-Nard...nice battle guys...

Now go over to the audio battles and vote on SDIZZLE VS SHADOW or any other open battles that need votes...

thanks..

[Brother Blue Collar]

good vote man but i guess you didn't get the snatch line huh???? anyway upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

[dom-N8]

Very close, nice verses from both. Nard just focused too much on the name disses & his verse suffered for it but there was some clever stuff in it. urban had a more varied rhyme & structure, but a bit of a weak ending.
VOTE: urbanreelist (but only just)

Hit this up with an honest vote:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136322

[Brother Blue Collar]

more upping

[Jonezy]

this was close as hell...
ihave seen nard use a different style which was more effective..
but both came pretty good with some good lines..
punch wise i think urban took it, his were a lil harder..
nard had better wordplay and creativity..
but in battles hard punches win battles, so urban did come harder.

both flowed well not really any choppy bits....
structure was also pretty good from both, some lines were kinda strecthed but nothin serious and as long as flow was ok its not a problem.

overall i vote URBAN, just cos his punches were a lil harder

return the favour in my battle me vs ilmatc D

[Miss Behaving]

This battle was bloody close. Both had some good punches, but Nard seemed to be focusing too much on Reelist's name, making his punches seem a little boring and not much else, therefore UrbanReelist gets my vote for more interesting and harder punches, but only just.

Vote// UrbanReelist

I took the time to vote on yours, please hit up one of the battles in my sig with an honest vote. Thanks

[kandy]

didnt have to battle, but ill be happy to be the winner
kus [R] thinks he in double R when battlin the mirror
(lol..aight)
you gotta be kiddin me yo, am splittin this joke
and i'll drop [reel] like clumsy cinema foke
(good use of wordplay)
enough of this dude, i'll chuck words in
time to come off, like white kids houses i'll sub-urban
(haha nice personal)
you not holdin ki's, not even seein what my hands feelin
watch nard become a mod, and really ban reelist
(nah...)
your kiddin me, are you not? ill be flippin thee on the spot
and the voters aint pickin urban, like biggimy at a job
lol
this fucker wish for piece? be careful what you wishin
kus i'll throw list in fire like a sweedish christmas tradition*
wording was kinda messy but good closer



fuck a nard this bastard trying hard to be(B) real
so today all he did was "jump around" so deal
(good opener)
with the truth, hell even ya own damn tactixx(Tactics) screams dick
i'll smash this poor excuse of a femcee this bitch
(wording is messy)
i know you wish you was a good textcee
ya more shook up than a dropped can of pepsi
(lol i liked that...good punch)
now listen closely let me tell you a secret
pussy do not "snatch" victory from the elite kid
(okay)
, you 2 gay and dumb to realize you being raped
so now ya ass just think you battling for pete's sake
to stop this ass whipping i shot in his pete's face
(flow kinda threw me off)
the truth is you are just a dick sumthing to beat
, just an ugly gay-ass fruitcake sumthing to eat
(gay closer)

overall Urban did a better verse

[Brother Blue Collar]

thankz for the votes Upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn