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Thread: The Orion Project

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    THE ORION PROJECT



    My story began in the depths of hell. During a period that pre-dates your existence and even your understanding of time itself…The 6 kings of hell, Comprised of the Fallen Angels Michael and Gabriel. Along with Death, Famine, War, and Plague (also known as The Four Horsemen) divided the throne after slaying Lucifer in battle…I do not know why this occurred, however, I know it was a disagreement of power that lead to Lucifer being destroyed…but with Lucifer murdered, there was no way to enter the realm of Earth…For no being in Hell the ability to traverse the many portals that lead to Earths domain…It was decided that the use of Lucifer’s deceased body was the key to unlocking the secret passage ways…pieces of his body were used to create me, ORION, a demon spawned from the origin of evil itself…I was the immortal tool that was needed in order to enslave the humans, who had evolved from mere sludge, but were growing in mass numbers because of their obsessive need to multiply…I was the Eternal soul that would annex the Planet Earth into the kingdom of hell…or so it was told…


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    ORION

    …Organic pieces come together to form…

    ORION

    …Heretic creature Reading the seven scrolls…

    ORION

    …Born with three sixes embedded on my arm…

    ORION

    …A living corpse. Dead but the flesh is still warm…



    ...Hellfire – BRIMESTONE, Paralyzing – WINDSTORMS…
    ...There lie THIN BONES, nearby, behind the GRIMLORDS…
    ...BIG ORCS, Hands GRIPPED ON, THICK SWORDS…
    ...Evil spirits in SIX FORMS, Sitting upon the SIX THRONES…
    ...Barbaric WARRIORS, the demonic FORCES forever LOYAL…
    ...HOLDING onto MORTAL SOULS as tight as a serpents COILS…
    ...They said, “This is the INFANT BOY”…
    ...“Who We FORGED from POISONOUS SOIL”…
    ...“A SORCERER BORN IN ROYALTY and here he lies BEFORE YOU”…
    ...A MORBID CREATION, SWORN to LEAD the NATION…
    ...Of fallen ANGELS, in WAR FOR WORLD DOMINATION…
    ..Ancient methods of battle, with SWORDS FOR DECAPITATION…
    ...And ORANGE ORBES, that bring FORTH HOARDS from the WASTELANDS…

    “IT HAS BEGUN!!!”

    ...CANNIBALISTIC, ANIMAL RIPPING APART RIB CAGES...
    ...CHANNELING SPIRITS WITH DARK LYRICS in SIX STAGES...
    ...A mandible jaw STRUCTURE for rapid CONSUMPTION...
    ...And DOZENS of sharp fangs that release a venomous SUBSTANCE...
    ...The Final Judgment, the sudden fall of the PLANET...
    ...The RAPTURE, SAVAGE demonic PHANTOM THAT swarms the MASSES...
    ...Darkness covers the lands, whole city-states succumb to SHADOWS..
    ...BLACK MATTER allows me see the future through time TRAVEL..
    ...Prophetic visions, I witness my end in bloody BATTLE...
    ...As cannons and fiery ARROWS split up my upper SCAFFOLD...
    ...For months I meditated in my CASTLE...
    ...Harboring plans for victory until I was finally shown the ANSWER...
    ...Orion the NECROMANCER, formed by the HANDS OF...
    ...SATANIC EVANGELISTS bent on SACRIFICE and SACRILGE..
    ...The many practices of the BLACK magic CRAFTS...
    ...Do not protect me when the valley of death is invaded by MAN...
    ...Mortal humans, BANDED together by FAMILY and CLANS...
    ...The sheer number and MASS of their attack HALVES The DAMNED...
    ...Swinging enchanted axes and SWORDS that can kill IMMORTAL MEN...
    ...LOYAL to my death, I continue to fight a WAR that I cannot WIN...
    ...I remove my armour, for I know how this BATTLE will END...
    ...But in this life or the next, shall EXACT my REVENGE!!…


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    There was a great revolution in the world of science and archaeology when the lost continent of Atlantis reemerged from the bowels of the ocean. The site’s Founder, a dr. Sergio Prometheus, marveled over the ancient artifacts and wondrous technology that pre-dated our own. He also studied the fossils of an unknown group of hominids that had apparently been extinct even before “the great quake” that plunged Atlantis deep into the waters. On June 6th, 2006 (6-6-6)
    Dr. Prometheus strangely disappeared from his office located in Egypt. leaving behind a peculiar note that read:
    “I have made an amazing discovery among the fossils of this great continent of Atlantis. I have stolen all of the living samples, but I shall return with an abundance of knowledge that I will share with the world”
    That was the last time anyone would hear from Dr. Prometheus. That was also the last time that anyone would see the light of day. For the great doctor had stumbled upon the apocalypse


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    …10000060000000000000001DATE=6-6-6PRESENTDAY
    …100000600000000000000000000000001NOWLOADING
    …1000006000000060000000001INTERFACINGWITHSAT
    …1000000000000060000000001BOOTINGCOMPONENTS
    …100000600000006000000000000000000000001TESTING
    …10000060000000000000000000000001ALLSYSTEMSOK
    …100000600000000000000000001ORIONISNOWONLINE

    ORION

    …Mechanic pieces link together to FORM…

    ORION

    …The second version of a hell-demon SPAWN…

    ORION

    …Appears before you for reasons UNKNOWN

    ORION

    …The Evil-LORD, unable to BE HARMED…


    ...CLONED from the ORIGINAL…
    ...The EXPERIMENTAL SENTINEL…
    ...SENDING sentient MISSLES From metallic barrels of PISTOLS…
    ...Continuously SWITCHING DIGITS…
    ...To enhance VISION to SIX-MILLION-and-SIX-PIXELS…
    ...EQUIPPED to complete DIFFICULT MISSIONS…
    ...My WRISTS FOLD, then TWIST, connecting WITH CHROME PISTONS…
    ...I ACTIVATE DEFENSIVE MECHANISMS…
    ...Like FIELD surveillance, PHASERS and energy SHIELD PRISMS…
    ...SPITTING LYRICS engineered WITH PRECISION…
    ...That BEGIN SPINNING like kinetic EINGINE IGNITION…
    ...BIO-MECH, with nickel-PLATED weapons SET to KILL…
    ...I DEFLECT, and EVADE as LASERS PENETRATE through the HILLS…
    ...ABLE to detect, and FEEL PAIN, like its was REAL…
    ...I sense the LOCATION, and then REANIMATE the STEEL…
    ...Sensory pads on the FINGERTIPS…
    Slash, Miniature cybernetic machine ligaments…
    ...Behave as single cohesive BEING INSTRUMENTS…
    ...The total ENGERGY that is ABSORBED…
    ...Is DETERMINED by the percentage of INJURIES RECORDED
    ...A robotic NOISE, then I begin TRANSFORMING…
    ...I TELEPORT, ATTACK then, TELEPORT BACK to the FORTRESS…
    ...I receive energy from HUMAN CORPSES…
    ...And computer programs that reenergize my FORCES…
    …Hailing from unknown ORIGINS…
    ...ORION always obeys the rules and laws of the DARKNESS…

    “THE TIME HAS COME!!!”

    ...YOU SEE A TEAM, I SEE an ARMY…
    ...YOU SEE the military, I SEE TARGETS…
    ...I UNLEASH NEON GREEN BEAMS from my THESE ARMLETS…
    ...Nautilus navigational radar DETECTION…
    ...ELECTRIC, neuro-recievers for light to CONNECT WITH…
    ...I see in infa RED ASSYMECTRICAL HEAT REFLECTIONS…
    ...From heartbeats pumping FRESH blood DEEP INTO VESSELS…
    ...Tele-kinetic WAVES SENT by the DIGITAL BRAIN…
    ...That OPERATES by CALCULATING DIGITS in FRAMES…
    ...CLOSE-UP VISION FOR AIM, from MODE-ONE TEMPLATE I CHANGE…
    ...INTO a super NOVA-like INSTRUMENT OF PAIN…
    ...PRESENT-day ASSASSIN, WEAPONS INTERGRATED…
    ...PROGRAMMED with the highest form of INTELLIGENCE EVER CREATED…
    ...Veteran level, With the SAME powers as THE ANCIENT…
    ...INCARNATION of my self in DATED versions of the MATRIX…
    ..Only more DANGEROUS, with a higher attack RATIO…
    …Standing over EIGHT-FEET-TALL, transmitting songs on the RADIO…
    ..I SPEAK computer LANGUAGES like BINARY CODE…
    ...Through methods UNKNOWN, I SEEK to VANQUISH my human SOUL…
    ...That remains in this ice-COLD, bio-mechanic MOLD…
    ...I RELOAD my programming, in order to regain CONTROL…
    ...Fighting for the sole purpose of an underground LEGION…
    ...Who idol worship CREATURES and Symbolic TETRAHEDRONS…
    ...The same ones who created me in the DOMED CATHEDRAL…
    ...With GOLDEN REEFS and BEELZEBUB painted UPON the CEILINGS…
    ...As long as my batteries radiate HEAT, I’ve SWORN ALLIGENCE to EVIL…
    ...In chryo SLEEP, having REPEATED DREAMS of killing PEOPLE…
    ...FIFTY-percent MACHINE, Forty-eight percent DEMON...
    ...It’s hard to BELIEVE but the final 2 percent is my only WEAKNESS…


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    ...TO BE CONTINUED...

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    Someone call the exorcist

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    Quote Originally Posted by N-Demik
    Someone call the exorcist

    what is that supposed to mean exactly??



    MY LINKS!!!


    link number 1. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...49#post1216349

    link number 2. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...7&page=1&pp=15
    Last edited by ORION; February 25th, 2004 at 12:39 PM Reason: EDITING TO ADD SOME LINKS!!

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    You need to leave 2 links of replies you left or this will get closed, Thanks.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Credz
    You need to leave 2 links of replies you left or this will get closed, Thanks.


    aiight i can do that........(damn why everybody hatin ALREADY??)

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    Twas a joke

    You have a copy of the Necronomicon at home?

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    Quote Originally Posted by N-Demik
    Twas a joke

    You have a copy of the Necronomicon at home?

    haha....maybe if i knew what it was....

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    It's the book of the dead.

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    Damn that shit was long as fuck! This piece was a dope one.......your vocab is fucking immense...this had great narration i thought an your verses were real good....

    ...Hellfire – BRIMESTONE, Paralyzing – WINDSTORMS…
    ...There lie THIN BONES, nearby, behind the GRIMLORDS…<--Nice opening

    this would have been flawless in my eyes, but there were a few things i saw that kinda took away from that.....your first verses you used the words like for example: "sword" a lot an alot of what your talking about was redundant....and on the second part was kinda the same.....all this kill this an that.. do you kinda see what im saying?....but like i said just the way you fucked with the vocab made that shit hardly noticeable........dope shit...id give this a 9/10....good job dawg......cant wait to see part 2........peace....

    Hit up my Open Mic Collab with Dev called MIND SPOKEN.....the links in my signature......peace
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    Quote Originally Posted by N-Demik
    It's the book of the dead.

    well i know what that is....what the F@ck is a necromakdakajfdkjfa???...naw im just playin....cut me some slack though...i dont know the definition of every word now.......the word sounded familiar though.....

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    LOL...I was just getting at the fact that your piece was rather..."dark" you know...And you have a pic of you(I presume) as a vampirish looking fiend in your sig

    It was a nice open mic...you just seemed possessed by the devil or something

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    This was alot different to most spits I've read, but in a good way... lemme break this up

    Flow - Flow was sickly, I felt this, and I felt tha way you sometimes had a rhymin' word at tha end of tha line, then had tha other rhymin' word at tha start of tha next line, I used to spit like that... flow was illin'

    Structure - Again, this was hott, didn't once fall off, they followed a pattern, which shows that you didn't rush this spit... hott work

    Overall - 9/10, tha concept made it hott, cus it doesn't follow anyone elses ideas, you were brave, and it pulled off... tha structure and tha flow... whoa, this made tha whole script all come together, real tight cuz, keep doin' ur thing

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    Vocab and flow were just sick. Think I saw a few spots where the structure seemed a little off ie:
    ...Sensory pads on the FINGERTIPS…
    Slash, Miniature cybernetic machine ligaments…
    but considering the length that's meaningless.
    Agree with Eleete that it is a bit repetitive but even though you were saying the same things you kept doing it in different ways. Very nice work. I like your way of spitting - it's quite different from everything else I've seen here.

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    I'm dead.


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    Hence Forward

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    This was a fucken long piece ! but like i told you on your last piece i like deep imagination like this... Like thinking bout things like this.. and the way you brought out the piece through great vocab and also the flow wasnt bad .... all the props to you.. structure was oright... but it took me ages to even get myself to start reading this piece once i did i didnt stop.... this trully is a unique piece .... good work!


    plz return the fav
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116574

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    Long Piece, But I Liked It, You Flowed This Nicely, And You Had Nice, Deep Lines, YOur Vocab Can Be Better, And Structure Was Pretty Nice, I Liked The Piece, Keep Posting, But Next, Shorten It

    Peace

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