False Religion

[Rancor]

False Religion


Christ died for our sins, on a cross with splinters of wood in his skin
thinking his love would transcend, maybe even mend
our mentality
and that we needed him, that he was our king
but in reality
he was just another fool to sing
of senseless morality

in 2 B.C.
the world started again
the faceless god created a new sea
the second versions of you and me
and language so we could plea
Oh, son of god set us free
those that refused
well they are the demons you hear about exercised in the news
or reborn as a serpent two heads and one body fused
cursed not to live life but something far worse
to see the world without time and wait
an eternity to reimburse


Jesus loves me this I know
my mother's in jail my father a no show
gentle lamb, savior of man
crushing our hearts in his hand


God made earth for slaves not for love
and told his forty favorite "create a place -- undreamed of"
the heaven above where you wouldn't be judged
then with disgust god betrayed their trust
therefore
the first devil and 39 demons wrote that book you find dear
to spear a head of glory on an evil engineer

Oh father are you there
the devil has us
we've been thrust
into a pit of disappear and odd lust

God himself is the lead moderator of this ancient matrix
made to keep us under control and transfixed
inside these hallow walls made of mud brick
hieroglyphics that stick to the walls depict
the first to see the world without time
the first to say God isn't sublime
the beauty of a free mind
once confined to likes of mankind
but it wasn't meant to last
Still in hell they fry
Oh, the lord has two hands on his sword
fighting for our damnation
enslavement of religous whores

god sure has been god to me
every night he brings vision of devilish banshees
and i plea
"god make them go away"
but my love for him has been betrayed
i'm still in the middle of this dismay
The exiles know of the first two attempts at earth
the third jesus birth and Mary Magdalene true worth
how she was really god's original love slave
and wass buried alive in her grave
rhe hell that gods gave
You wouln't know it if i wasn't telling you
god has killed 20,000 elxiles almost all he has pursued
to keep your belief in something untrue
the remaining ten
had to descend
into caves, but we write stories like these
to ensure we die the truth shall still be free

its false Religon

[Rancor]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=325777
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326037

[Forum]

This piece here was a very though out drop....on an intellectual bases...I caould feel the emotion in the drop as I read along...the wording was coo...yet it got kinda akward at times..The topic is different and not something that you see everyday..so I found that creative...and I like the whole suttle approach you began with...overall I truly think that this is one of your best pieces....keep it up and RTF....

[The Vortex]

nice format/ structure tis most artistic////////////.....

u mos def had that dark imagery thing going on.and the piece poured some emotion to the screen. i

and yeah i know how you mean with the whole fake religion.. i mean what a load a bull certain things is......


nice piece f'sho
keep em coming n check my one

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326351

[Chris Magic]

tyhank for feed i will rtf upp

[Me$$y One]

This is some pretty basic rhymes but the topic is deep and strongly felt.
The graphics to sort of guide the rhyme along was pretty cool.

Nice read on this wonderful sunday morning haha.

[Rancor]

yup rise

[mr_puti]

wow dazz all i gotta say bout that yea wow damm lol god shiit ma nikka stay upp

[Truth Iscariot]

niggaz these days are lazy thanks to all that replied

[Tragedian.]

I will leave feed later on. Very nice, Just to long to leave feed at this moment.

Remind me if I don't.

[urban legendz]

Okay, this was a good piece, but misguided at times you should do research on certain things befor acting on your feelings and what you belive, because this seems more like a rant than anything, but in the love of poetry and pure entertainment, this was a good piece flow and imagery wise it kept me interested and the flow was very consistant through out the piece although a more original rhyme scheme would've elevated my decision from this being good to nice, you deffinently set the atmosphere of a lost,hypocritic person living a life of disbelife and contradicitiveness, I believe you got what your message through to me, yet I wish this was alittle more accurate, I feel you left out or were misinformed maybe even ignorant about certain parts of this piece, but all in all this was a nice piece now that I take everything else into consideration, please hit up my piece's in my sig and show up for our battle lol.

[Taz™]

cool drop , watch out for those die hard crhistians
flow wise it was cool, i was really sucked into the topic
to notice it in every aspect, but i found it to be on point
for most of the time, could always up that rhyme scheme
word choices was good, not forcing anything
nor over complex w/ words to give the whole piece its own vibe,
a calm preaching ish. somehow like that, ...
tho at times, i was not feeling ur content/ message ,
good drop all in all,

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=325329

^.

[urban legendz]

Please Return The Favor Leave Quality Feed On This Link.

[Truth Iscariot]

coolio momento

[vocabz]

This was just pure dopeness, I agree. Flow and all was on point, stayed on the topic. And also was a well-picked topic, I think. Some parts just had me skipping from here to there, though, ya know, kinda clueless. Than again, I dont read the bible, probably never will. I just don't believe in it, never will. Keep elevating and dropping the dope pieces.