Antonio Banderas (0-0) vs TaK (0-0)

[Aines]

LLL Jr. Week 1

Rules:

New season starts here...everyones fresh so your all equal as of now

No show your gone no matter who you are

Drop 10-20 lines agree with your opponent

Check in by wednesday drop by friday midnight, i understand that were all in different timezones so i will give way for a hour or so late

No feeding = banned from league
No biting = banned from league and site
No recycling, come up with new un original shit of your own

You must vote on four battles and leave links. you will lose two votes for every missing link. you can't vote on a no show battle and use it for your link either.

Have any problems/requests PM me and Pm me early

Last of all come hard and get yourself up to LLL.

good luck.

[TaK]

lol @ sayin come hard...

checkin in zorro

wanna drop around 14?

[Antonio Banderas]

Sure.. And yes... This is the real banderas!!!! I changed my password and I have returned!!!!!

[Antonio Banderas]

this aint the military, but watch as I wreck ya rank
yeah ur the shit, smell like unflushed septic tanks
Left drawin blanks, so ya was never really artistic
ya tools are rusty to the point a repair kit fix it
single in on him, beat 1 on 1, now joints r useless
punish he's eyes so bad u'll think he joinned deuces
yeah your toxic, to the point perfumes cant help ya
Shut the door on ur hopes like foreclosed homeless sheltas
Straight foldin this fuck, until his eye blackens
I'll show mixed emotions, read ya verse & cry laughin
what's the hold up? this is robbery, without the gun
Ask him for RANSOM, the bitch jogged, trotted, & runs
Yous a flake, and ya stats show it, unknown to the site
ya could squeeze out a punch if ya used all of ya might

[TaK]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=250592
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=250644
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=250598




we all know zorro'll tat a cat wit a Z....
so we know this imitation does it as well
Cause i read ya verse dog and caught a couple myself
so watch as i pummel this whelp, cause jus like the battle league
your most definitlely the weak one in this battle B
and i know its so sad to see im leavin you broke bastid
cause your lines make ne snort like ima fuckin coke addict
so faggot its kinda obvious that you reek in rhyme
nevermind you were speechless when i said speak your mind
ill stare n hell squeak and hide shrinkin from my eyes til hes hard to hear yo
cause ill smack the shit outta Antman and any other marvel hero

sorry i ain come 14.. busy wit thanksgivin n shit

[DaTrusHurtz]

this aint the military, but watch as I wreck ya rank
yeah ur the shit, smell like unflushed septic tanks
shit wordplay is soo played
Left drawin blanks, so ya was never really artistic
ya tools are rusty to the point a repair kit fix it
worded wrong, but aight, kinda basic
single in on him, beat 1 on 1, now joints r useless
punish he's eyes so bad u'll think he joinned deuces
I don't get it?
yeah your toxic, to the point perfumes cant help ya
Shut the door on ur hopes like foreclosed homeless sheltas
lol, this wasn't that great, but I liked it for some reason
Straight foldin this fuck, until his eye blackens
I'll show mixed emotions, read ya verse & cry laughin
lol, same as above, with rewording this woulda been dope, the mixed emotions shit was a good idea
what's the hold up? this is robbery, without the gun
Ask him for RANSOM, the bitch jogged, trotted, & runs
Another good concept. Maybe like this "He just got outta jail cuz he ransom illegal gay bar" Eh, that's not that good either, but ya know, play with your concepts more until you get it dope
Yous a flake, and ya stats show it, unknown to the site
ya could squeeze out a punch if ya used all of ya might
you mean ya couldn't... reread ya verse before ya post it

vs.

we all know zorro'll tat a cat wit a Z....
so we know this imitation does it as well
Cause i read ya verse dog and caught a couple myself
flow was off and z stuff is played
so watch as i pummel this whelp, cause jus like the battle league
your most definitlely the weak one in this battle B
nothing wrong with this, but no wordplay and too basic
and i know its so sad to see im leavin you broke bastid
cause your lines make ne snort like ima fuckin coke addict
coke/lines wordplay is so played
so faggot its kinda obvious that you reek in rhyme
nevermind you were speechless when i said speak your mind
also played
ill stare n hell squeak and hide shrinkin from my eyes til hes hard to hear yo
cause ill smack the shit outta Antman and any other marvel hero
hahaha, corny, but i really liked this line

Antonio, you had some nice fresh concepts in your verse. A few played lines too, but that's expected. You mostly gotta work on the wording of ya verse. Get that shit down and you'll win lots of battles here. Tak, I wasn't feeling much from ya verse cuz most of it was so played. Also, saying you have thanksgiving is a lame excuse. First off, battles aren't due for a few days and 2nd, it was just two more bars, you coulda spent 10 to 15 more minutes. That close you had was hilarious, Antman, lol. Use more of that humor and you'll win more battles.

Vote - Antonio

[Antonio Banderas]

single in on him, beat 1 on 1, now joints r useless
punish he's eyes so bad u'll think he joinned deuces
I don't get it?

Dueces is a L.A. based street gang. When they kill someone, they carve a black darkened slit beneath their eyes. Continually punchin him... til he has double vision(That's what I based the 2nd line off of)

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=250592&page=2
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...4&page=2&pp=15
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=250612
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...1&page=3&pp=15

[Trahedy Siphon]

AB:

yeah your toxic, to the point perfumes cant help ya
Shut the door on ur hopes like foreclosed homeless sheltas

This shouldn't even be a quotable but I had to pick a bit of
light outta your verse. Up your game man, and try and dig
up some creative personals.

Vs.

Tak:

ill stare n hell squeak and hide shrinkin from my eyes til hes hard to hear yo
cause ill smack the shit outta Antman and any other marvel hero

You had the basics there man, but you couldn't get anything hard.
Your last line was kinda funny.. actually made me chuckle. But you
need to start getting punches with a hard backing.

Vote: Antonio Banderas

[A. Know-phistage]

Straight foldin this fuck, until his eye blackens
I'll show mixed emotions, read ya verse & cry laughin

vs

nothen

v/antonio other dude had no quotables and was kinda wack elevate Tak easy win for AB pz

[Nib Oswald]

yeah ur the shit, smell like unflushed septic tanks
Left drawin blanks, so ya was never really artistic
I'll show mixed emotions, read ya verse & cry laughin
what's the hold up? this is robbery, without the gun
Ask him for RANSOM, the bitch jogged, trotted, & runs

vs

Cause i read ya verse dog and caught a couple myself
your lines make ne snort like ima fuckin coke addict
you were speechless when i said speak your mind

Both had nice rhyming, TaK's internal rhymes and multis were better but needed to be funnier, Antonio came consistently stronger overall.

Vote: Antonio Banderas

[Antonio Banderas]

Thank yall for the votes / contructive critism...

[Demon Pyrokronix]

Straight foldin this fuck, until his eye blackens
I'll show mixed emotions when I read ya verse & cry laughin

vs

ill stare n hell squeak and hide shrinkin from my eyes til hes hard to hear yo
cause ill smack the shit outta Antman and any other marvel hero

Antonnio came pretty consistent in this, wheras all of Taks lines except his closer were very played. Antonio has potential and with better wording could become a really decent battler, he had the concepts but not the punches. Tak you need to work on finding less played concepts and also work on your wording.

V/ Antonnio Banderas

[Ruthless.]

this aint the military, but watch as I wreck ya rank
yeah ur the shit, smell like unflushed septic tanks
what's the hold up? this is robbery, without the gun
Ask him for RANSOM, the bitch jogged, trotted, & runs

vs

ill stare n hell squeak and hide shrinkin from my eyes til hes hard to hear yo
cause ill smack the shit outta Antman and any other marvel hero

v/ant.. decent battle.

[Untold.]

this aint the military, but watch as I wreck ya rank
yeah ur the shit, smell like unflushed septic tanks
what's the hold up? this is robbery, without the gun
Ask him for RANSOM, the bitch jogged, trotted, & runs

vs.

ill stare n hell squeak and hide shrinkin from my eyes til hes hard to hear yo
cause ill smack the shit outta Antman and any other marvel hero

v/ ab

[KempoMRK]

Antonio, to be blunt your verse was boring. I think it was due to the wording as it wasn't really mixed up enough or whatever, it just seemed quite elementary in the way it read. But you had some decent concepts, they were just boringly portrayed, the Ransom one was pretty cool.

TaK, you had some played stuff and some weirdly worded stuff as well, the battle league punch I didn't even get cos it was so weirdly worded, and the speechless punch was really played.

v/ Antonio