Thor (0-0) vs Tony Brown (0-0)

[Aines]

LLL Jr. Week 1

Rules:

New season starts here...everyones fresh so your all equal as of now

No show your gone no matter who you are

Drop 10-20 lines agree with your opponent

Check in by wednesday drop by friday midnight, i understand that were all in different timezones so i will give way for a hour or so late

No feeding = banned from league
No biting = banned from league and site
No recycling, come up with new un original shit of your own

You must vote on four battles and leave links. you will lose two votes for every missing link. you can't vote on a no show battle and use it for your link either.

Have any problems/requests PM me and Pm me early

Last of all come hard and get yourself up to LLL.

good luck.

[Thor]

check
go 10

[Tony Brown]

sure, 10's good

[Tony Brown]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=250424

hmmmm......i think ima win this one ass hole
since u used all ya pre-writtens in our previous battle

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lets make a deal, we both drop before midnight tonight? 10 lines, just to get it goin, cool?

Midnight? Come on, I keystyle better than dis bitch
see how he Feels like droppin early
..................................too bad nobody Feels ya shit
Thor doing audio, to hard to imagine....let alone visualize
Voice got my ears Ringing so violent
..........................shoulda won a No-bell peace prize
Think you’re a Livin legend? Well not when Ike ill this kid
Kinda ironic cuz ur the one who used to dickride Twizted
You can’t hurt me, I’ll prove it. Look at the facts boy
Thor was the God of Thunder
…………………...........all you do is make a really loud noise
Maybe you woulda won...coulda been a hot ass contest
CONCEPTS
.........get a new verse, i already Pre-wrote concepts

[Thor]

lol

Demon started the mag thing, but it never highlights nonsense
im sure u'll make the front page,....
...when ur readin the table of contents
hence ur too wack for a report, and to nothing you'll amount
only thing showin interest in u these days are ur bank accounts
this pussies never made out, but that'll change cuz he'll lose
he'll get the most tongue action ever when he's kissin my shoe's
ur a waste of paper dawg, n' Mak T. was just a name u abused
cuz if you really were Trained i'de still be readin the news
you behind me, just follow me Mak, ya personals are fake cunt
and i'de tell u to take ya verse back but it was never up front


*Edited, changed " n' " to "he'll get" on my 7th line because it wasnt proper vocabulary. Didnt change any punches or reword shit so much, so plz dont bitch Mak

[Untold.]

Thor doing audio, to hard to imagine....let alone visualize
Voice got my ears Ringing so violent
..........................shoulda won a No-bell peace prize

vs.

hence ur too wack for a report, and to nothing you'll amount
only thing showin interest in u these days are ur bank accounts
this pussies never made out, but that'll change cuz he'll lose
n' give em' the most tongue action ever when he's kissin my shoe's

that tongue line was just illy.

v/ thor

[Def Wok]

V/thor

better punches and personals

tony ya shit was iight just not enough

good shit thor like the concepts and everything

[TaK]

Both cats dropped good verses

I like the No-bell peace prize line from tony and the ike ill line was ok but thats all that really stood out to me

Thor i was feelin ya first 7 lines, the interest line was good and the tongue line i liked alot and i felt you had a more standout verse then tony though both dropped some real decent verses
vote - Thor

[Thor]

links


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...1&postcount=13
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...4&postcount=31
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...1&postcount=10
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...0&postcount=11

[Ike Ill.]

v/ - thor.

STFU- D

[Thor]

I know read my second last bar

[>Inertia>]

^Ike Ill, you're a fucking faggot. Why would you reveal someone's alias for absolutely no reason?

/v Thor though. This battle was ight as a whole, but Thor won it with that shoe/tongue line. Shit was sorta ill, just badly worded.

[A. Know-phistage]

Maybe you woulda won...coulda been a hot ass contest
CONCEPTS
.........get a new verse, i already Pre-wrote concepts

vs


ur a waste of paper dawg, n' Mak T. was just a name u abused
cuz if you really were Trained i'de still be readin the news


v/Tony good battle though yall has okay punches the shoe line could of be reworded pz

[Lyrical God]

Thor doing audio, to hard to imagine....let alone visualize
Voice got my ears Ringing so violent
..........................shoulda won a No-bell peace prize


Vs.

Demon started the mag thing, but it never highlights nonsense
im sure u'll make the front page,....
...when ur readin the table of contents
ur a waste of paper dawg, n' Mak T. was just a name u abused
cuz if you really were Trained i'de still be readin the news
you behind me, just follow me Mak, ya personals are fake cunt
and i'de tell u to take ya verse back but it was never up front



Quite an easy win for Thor, the other guy never really dropepd hard and in my opinion only had 1 quotable and that was at a push...
Thor had a few decent punches, more quotables therefore....

Vote/Thor

[Tony Brown]

*Edited, changed " n' " to "he'll get" on my 7th line because it wasnt proper vocabulary. Didnt change any punches or reword shit so much, so plz dont bitch Mak

c'mon now, do i ever bitch about anything? lol
and thanx for tellin the whole site who i am lmao