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Thread: Legendary Emcee

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    Legendary Emcee

    Legendary Emcee

    what is rap?

    i'll sit back and watch the beat flow thorugh the air
    withought a care i follow the heart, knuckles bare
    thats when the challenger err's stepping to the champ
    I climbed the ramp to the top... words through the amp
    I didin't drop, with a prayer I made a million sins
    with taste of action I just simply ignore the grins
    put my name on the map threwout the nation
    the sensation of my song feeds your ration
    so listen to the words that i put to paper and know
    before the words I said dissapear like vapour slow
    i throw a fistfull of hate and you think im golden
    but really it took me time to get this bolden
    mathematics politics i don't follow that shit
    ill spit till my toungue is dry, flame when i submit
    makes you wanna quit... the hate in this industry
    makes it so you cant see... this life is never free
    my stomach turns as i soul search in this world
    almost hurled as my whole view is suddenly hurled
    curled in a ball ill burst forth with a way of speaking
    seeking the one thing that i can hold till im old n creaking
    but ill grip my mic tight, legendary... you know it's here
    fear the way i bring emotion and imagery like a seer
    clear the water until it is drinkable and fathomed
    soon all will envision my transgression of where i roamed
    no matter how high the slope i will climb till my legs give out
    with a shout ill raise the bar one more time back on route
    the devout blessing that touches even the weakest
    bleak minds that can see the light that confests
    test me ill show you how i came to be the greatest
    look up and you'll see who is the damn latest
    with a pilgrims mind i wanderd where none would look
    and took what i found and left the world shook
    so see if i am devine and bear the sign
    with a riding rhyme my whisper will intertwine
    leave the restless rested and a whole new order
    im the legendary emcee here to clear the disorder

    *Wakes up*

    *Headdphones off*

    the picture fades off of the tip of his grazed mind
    each rhyme fogotten like the dream leaves blind
    the light that shined faded to the distance of echos
    like flamming arrow's my thoughts will decompose
    Last edited by Swift Death; April 13th, 2005 at 11:50 AM

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    You No Fucken Legend Im The Legend You A Fake/
    Ill Flatten Your Whole World One Of My Grandma's Famous Pancakes/
    You A Pussy A Fony A Fake/
    Record 27-14 Shit Thats A Real Mistake/

    Battle Me Nicca You Sorry

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    This was decent the flow was pretty weak so i wasnt feeling it.
    The concept was good but you didnt have enough nice lines in this to back up what you was saying in the verse. The structure was ok the vocab was decent but i just felt there was nothing in the verse that stood out.

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    ^^^ yeah its for SS... Dev won't show... so i just keyed up 40 lines... cause thats the min... not much for content.

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    it was aigh't I enjoyed it. was an easy read and the basic rhyme scheme kept me kind into it. your vocab's good structures good it was a well laid out piece I think. I like how you ended it off with the whole dreaming concept. but the idea was good I thik you got your point across but like warchild said nothing in here that made it really stand out but still a very decent piece. keep up. peace.
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    Polished and refined to bring a new groove to crews/
    gestures meaning lesser to negotiations between me and you/
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    thanks for all the feed

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    wtf? Twixn = Twizzy? lol, explain.

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    not bad for what seemed like a keystyle or whatever you call it....

    rymes were pretty simple and you seemed to just ramble in places...i even think you made up a word or two lol....overall not bad for what it was but there isnt too much you can really say about this piece its pretty simple

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    wtf? Twixn = Twizzy? lol, explain.
    he stole it...

    damn kid.
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    He stole what?

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    usta be Twixn...

    not swift death or Twizted.
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