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Thread: JUST A LIL BIT REMIX (Remix)

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    JUST A LIL BIT REMIX (Remix)

    All a nigga really need is a little bit
    not alot baby girl just a lil'bit
    We could head to my crib in a lil'bit
    and maybe you could suk my dick in a little bit


    This ya main man cominnn out ya computer screen
    made your bitch scream them i made her bleeed
    it aint nothing new girl its all routine
    i make her do it All cuz we aint a team
    after she's off her feet ill make her go to her knees
    ..Dont get scared because yoo baby daddy coming
    he aint fenna do shit that nigga just fronting
    girl you know me i wont let him find out cause im better man
    you know you could trust me im a veteran
    ...Or you could be a bitch if you wanna
    lets take this further into the present just like futurama
    and they let me suk them titties e'specially wen u hold them fifties
    they all up on yo dik for a lik cause they like to lik that shit
    oohhh my bad a little to dirty the truth is they want money thats why they get all flirty,flirty, dont hurt me calm that ass down take it nice and slow move around and around
    yeah dont stop till U make me get that bombarding sensation and you dont stop suking bitch thats on my nation i can fell the vibration girl there aint no calculation
    just do what you gotta do and move how you wannna move ...Hoe..

    Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Peace niggaz im back

    And try to read this a little slow so that u can read the rhymes a little better

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    gay as fuck dont rui nthat siong son

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    not really great here... seeing as you took a song.. plus you didint do a very good job... didin't really like any of it you gotta work on creating more than just flow.. you're wordchoice was a little weak and you didin't really have anything amazing here.. so work on that not bad for one of you're first drops but defiantly need alot of work here... not bad....

    check out legendary emcee...

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    you need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    hmmm... everything about that sucked. you took a decent song, and made it worse. it lacked originality, your lines didn't match fifty's flow really at all, i tried reading it to the music. plus, you didn't make any inovative additions by any stretch of the imagination. u might be better off dropping ur own shit, with just someone elses beat

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    my my my....thats all im goin 2 say.....u disgust me...

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    i cant really feel this u should try recordin' it and then see if not come up wit anotha concept cause the 'just a lil' bit' thing aint craCkin'

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    yeah i know what yall saying im reading it and it doesnt sound how i made it when i was typing it ...I was just curious trying to make a lil remix btu this one is a failure...lol

    Aight yall thx 4 da feddback my niggaz......

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