Straight Out The Straight Jacket

[warchild]

In school my teachers gave me a book it read hobbies
I didnt like none of em so i started digging up dead bodies
I used to talk to em and hide em in red lorries
Then my mother found me out so i said sorry
For my mothers birthday i made her an armchair
Made outa my ex girlfriends pussy lips, yes my charms rare
I ask hos to pretend their dead when i ball em
Now when im out on the pull the whores all run
So i run after em, catch em, now the bitch is screaming
I made her give me a blow job till my dick was bleeding
Then i told her to hand her fucking purse over
Im not a psycho when im drunk, im worse sober
Look motherfucker i was born cold, punk
Im wanted by the policefor murdering porno sluts
I love em, but my family i may slaughter mine
Im pushing samurai swords through mail order brides

How many people in my town smoke weed? all of em
Im smoking 50 joints a day so my head and balls are numb
I charm straight girls but its no problem for me to thrill dykes
Im a billion years old im the motherfucker who killed christ
Ha ha ha you religious prics try and take my life
Here eat my shit and here taste my knife
Then i'll get my friend to stick his drumsticks up your ass
I dont care about nothing so fuck my future fuck my past
Nah here's my past, grew up poor pissed off crazy as fuck
And it's still the same i dont fuck ladies just sluts
Who will stroke my dick and lick my balls
I just dumped my girlfriend cause her tits were small
Yo baby i only fuck bitches with massive tits
I make bitches scream in bed cause i got an acid dick
Fuck what you heard im the real mouth of the south
yo your mothers trying to say something let me take my dick out her mouth

This is just 2 verses of sick crazy rhymes there aint nothing deep in these rhymes.
My last few posts have been deep so i thought id post some of my crazy shit.
So please dont be like there aint nothing deep in the rhymes CAUSE THERE NOT SUPPOSED 2 B.

[Ink Thesis]

lmao @ this, this was sick man... pretty dope..

"Then i told her to hand her fucking purse over
Im not a psycho when im drunk, im worse sober
I charm straight girls but its no problem for me to thrill dykes
Im a billion years old im the motherfucker who killed christ
Yo baby i only fuck bitches with massive tits
I make bitches scream in bed cause i got an acid dick
Ha ha ha you religious prics try and take my life
Here eat my shit and here taste my knife"

^^lmfao, in my opinion, best shit in this OM...

last line (2nd verse) was real played tho, it was coo, a little twist tho, but played...

dope drop tho man..

keep it up

peace

[warchild]

Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173105
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173072

[SimonSays]

It was a decent drop for sure. It was half humorous at the same time. I liked it props and good job.

Stay up and leave feedback.

[Ink Thesis]

and yo warchild please hit this up man

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=2107804

peace

[warchild]

Thanx for the feed but im upping for more.

[Angel]

hehe...seein as im a woman....wont takei it 2 heart....made me laught tho...

the rhyming was good and the structure was simple

some of the visions tho....but scary! lol

Keep up the gd work babe

[Lady Redd]

That was tite, it was funny,
Jus needed to be stretched out more,
but overall it was hott!!!!!!!!

[Nega Mouf]

lmao @ this, this was sick man... pretty dope..

"Then i told her to hand her fucking purse over
Im not a psycho when im drunk, im worse sober
I charm straight girls but its no problem for me to thrill dykes
Im a billion years old im the motherfucker who killed christ
Yo baby i only fuck bitches with massive tits
I make bitches scream in bed cause i got an acid dick
Ha ha ha you religious prics try and take my life
Here eat my shit and here taste my knife"

^^lmfao, in my opinion, best shit in this OM...

last line (2nd verse) was real played tho, it was coo, a little twist tho, but played...

dope drop tho man..

keep it up

peace

Nega;
my raps given me, the suprimicy of captitvity, a triligey, to see my identity, or take away ya dignity, im not your casual admiral, intergalactical, classicals, for the infragable, un imaginable, also fassionable, the tragic, magic, rippen spitten acid.

[Nega Mouf]

Nega;

This next lessons, for the best deseptions, strangle your attilesins, till your neck stetches, yall rhymes is poor you aint afforden me, to much maturity, glory to my superiority, yall pussies like females joinen sororities, this will be the briefest, blood thirsty as leches

[warchild]

^ Wow You Can Rhyme Big Words You Should Be Banned For Being A Fag

[warchild]

Uppin more feed im replying to mad posts and i aint getting the feed back.

[Nega Mouf]

Uppin more feed im replying to mad posts and i aint getting the feed back.

Nega; yo bitch child, dont be mad cause you cant fuck wit me lyrically, by the way i fucked your girl.

[Na~Ledge]

Easy read but a humorous drop. Good structure and vocab. Like dude said earlier that line at the end of the 2nd verse was kinda played. Otherwise good drop man.

Please return the favor. Check the sig.

[Land Lord]

lol, that was nice
that second line was crazy, nice flow and multies.
overall, it was a good verse. props