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Thread: Lets get Blowed (Kane Town Style)

  1. #1
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    Lets get Blowed (Kane Town Style)

    grab the razor and chop the brick
    i get so high i cant stop that shit
    in my room theres some coke hoes
    wait its in my mind i suppose yo
    ey listen up while this weed is in me and i still give a fuck
    wow that was a long line just like yola
    drinkin coke n rum with soft coke n cola
    as u can see my shits scattered like crack bouldaz
    lets go to Baghdad on microdot and shoot at soldiers
    lets get paid like microsoft and make drug dealaz owe US
    fo sho BLOOD! chop that blunt and smoke til I blow up
    intoxicated enibriated faded straight laced with chemicals i cant hold up

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

  3. #3
    The True Psycho of RB
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    This was to short to give a lot of feed but the structure and vocab was fine your first 2 lines had a nice flow but then the rhymes after that were just average.
    Keep writing keep posting but try and make your rhymes longer 16 bars a verse is fine you will get better feed that way.

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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173174

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