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    rhyme attack

    my rhyme attack will crack ya back outtta whack
    ya try ta get away but i dont give no slack
    im a rhyming monsta like gozilla wit a pad and a pen
    copying others styles is just a straight up sin
    my style is all unique like snowflakes
    my flow is sweeter than the syrup that you put on pancakes
    the rhyme is fuller than a fresh new can of mace
    your rhyme is emptier than a handicapped parking place
    im know as the artist cuz i can create the flow how i choose
    if i battle u dont even have one thought that you will lose
    cuz i feed off your negative energy like a leech
    you might as well be a mute cuz i cant hear yo speech
    i only listen to greatness so its best get some practice
    if i was a code not even the architect couldnt crack this

  2. #2
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    you are whack try doing some double word rhymes because single is whack as fuck

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    seems like you wanna battle

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    you suck ass nikka
    99% OF ALL I SAY IS SARCASIM
    DONT TAKE IT SERIOUS
    IT'S THE INTERNET FOR GOD SAKES




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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    started with some forced multis, then u used some played concepts =\.. your structure was ok, but some lines seemed a little stretched.. but try not to use those played concepts and try writin to a dif. topic, or go battle or something...

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    The True Psycho of RB
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    This was pretty poor the structure was ok but your flow and vocab needs a lot of work.
    That snowflake line just didnt make sense and that pancake line was played out.
    Just keep writing and you should improve try not to make your rhymes so corny.

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