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  1. #1
    milonelion
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    Shadows

    i'm the right type to let shit take a second to heal
    while i remain on this mic to spit words that's real
    ill minded, got the lord on my shoulders, i'm blinded
    to hate, i dare try to educate, never to complicate
    the reason for which i glorify this mic, i try to be like
    any other man to rap, inwhich i spit, and i collapse
    with raps i never thought i would say, to this day
    i'm just short of breath, as this game takes to death
    i live behind these shadows that other people leave
    i greif, on fallen soldiers, swear to never lose my composure
    another head of hop, kickin' back to raps from georgia
    so take a minute to relax, and soak in the words for ya
    let my mic explore ya, and figure out your existence
    i keep my game on shoes, so they go the distance
    get hit with critical statements, but still no resistance
    i'm in the basement never leaving the sounds that i,
    listen.. to, i just do what i do best, die like the rest?
    nah, i think i'll just stick with the shadows of the rejects
    inject soul into my veins, so i can remain the shadow of insane
    just another minute to explain, on how i keep it real
    i never steal, i take only what's given, question yaself
    on why we livin'?, i hope to go to heaven, but there's
    only seven... sins, that will keep me from going,
    keep me from flowing, go on with life without knowing,
    my mind blowing like atom bombs destroying,
    release the snare, release the bass, and i'm exploring,
    my own ill mind, ignoring the sign, that i'm just a white kid
    that trys to get respected with text that's ill shit.
    i can remain spittin', but i will never remain on earth
    since birth, i let raps influence my body, my mind
    shadows of heart, and now i'm blind, i resign my place
    my throne, catch these emotions on my face,
    the color of my skin tone, i own.


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160947
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160865
    Last edited by milonelion; December 19th, 2004 at 07:32 AM

  2. #2
    The True Psycho of RB
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    i really like this piece the emotion u got through was cool, the structure was ok, i really like that seven sins line that was really hot.
    im looking forward to ya next post man, peace.

  3. #3
    The True Psycho of RB
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    wassup return the favour reply 2 my new post
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161055

  4. #4
    tonguetwista
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    hey man this was sick...it had good flow and the deep emotion. really good structure too...keep it up and post more...peace

  5. #5
    The Root
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    i know i hated on your last lil "freestyle" thing..but i cant hate on this...sure it has some points that could be worked on,but thats all good...

    "shadows of heart, and now i'm blind, i resign my place
    my throne, catch these emotions on my face,"

    i found those lines particularly dope...for the most part this had really good meaning..flow was..ehh..but okay...emotion was there i liked this...better than most shit you see posted up after havin five minutes worth of writing an no thought put into it... keep this shit up and i wont talk any more shit

    no hate...

    pz

  6. #6
    Predatorian
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    you had some cool shit but some of it was kind of dumb... I didnt like the end
    But no problems, keep elavtin

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