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Thread: 04 Bonnie and clyde

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    Boy Nova
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    04 Bonnie and clyde


    (Chorus)
    Just the two of us We can make it if we try Just the two of us Just the two of us Building castles in the sky Just the two of us You and I.


    Yo, Look at this still here laying with my chick
    No longer are you just a bitch or somebody to warm up my dick
    Ya took ya pick coulda had an easy life, stayed livin at home
    Insted you by my side with the knife, traverlin the globe
    No longer on my own i think i like this though
    We havin fun duckin, jivin, divin and escapin the po
    Who wuda known, fuck who wuda thought
    This wouldnt effect ya or have you lookin a little distraught
    All the things we bought, all the nights we shared
    The thing i like bout is you dont give a fuck, girl you dont even care
    The one thing you care about, the one person you love
    Is this guy by ya side, we go together yeah like the hand and the glove
    Shit we gotta get up damn its time to move on,
    Get ya clothes on girl we gotta be gone.

    (Chorus)

    Fuck girl that shit was so fuckin close
    Thank god we stole this car way back in the grove
    Its pritty funny how weve always liked the same things
    Like when we knocked out that rich girl and took all that bitches rings
    How bout the day i finally got released
    You took me home to the hood where we found that fuckin beast
    That fucker who hurt you the one i tried to kill
    Second time round, now hes buried over the mah'fuckin hill
    Now we on the run but like i said you dont even care
    Sat in the passenger seat makin goo goo eyes at me playin wit ya hair
    Deep inside i got all these feelings but i dont wanna share
    Late at night im kicking having those same old nightmares
    But i wake up and you got me in your arms
    I feel the warmth of ya heart all the way to my sweaty palms
    Your always there the sun that melts away the snow
    Bitches come and go, but ride or die will always be there thats fo'sho

    (Chorus)

    I knew you were special on the day our eyes met
    You were takin the dog over the road to that dirty old vet
    We got to talkin bout how you wanted to get out
    The hood was draggin you down you just wanted to shout
    Let ya anger out, yeah im likin that damn
    sick minded freak who turned out to be ya man
    20 years down the line ya gotta understand
    we still gonna be together side by side, hand in hand
    When ever theres a battle we handle it together
    We told each other forever and forever is forever
    Never apart cause thats the way we gonna ride
    We fight the fight together and thats the way we gonna die

    (chorus x2 fade)

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    Boy Nova
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    Ok this is a ryhme that come to mind while on the computer 2nite after i heard the old "just the two of us" on the tv, so its kinda keystyle but i would like feedback on this piece. Holla at ya boy
    nova and out

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    Princess
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    yer das hot i was feelin that nova nice lyrics there lol at the bit bout tha vet

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    it was alright (like dat freeway...lol)....i mean u had some weird shit in there like the opener.....but nice structure and nice vocab.........it was strait, ok not bad
    "ya i see you nigguhs mean muggin on poarches, unload that clip and watch em scatter like roaches"
    ima foo wit it! girl gimme dat pussy i kno wut to do wit it!

    I AINT NO BITCH!

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    Boy Nova
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    Can i get some more feedback??

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    it was alright, it had some good vocab and nice structure and i also liked the opener. keep posting

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    Boy Nova
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    Thanks for the feedback, come on lets have some more, whether its good or bad.
    Holla back

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    Interpersonal
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    aight i liked the vocab and the structure of this piece...usually peeps in here dont post piece on love so that was nice to read something different...keep elevating...one

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    Nice feeling and sentiment here...

    Good shit...stupid story...but good shit.

    And I say stupid shit, cuz...

    Anyone involved in crime, well...that's stupid.

    Anyone involving their bitch in crime with them...even stupider.

    But whatever, Biggie's "Me and my Bitch", Eminem's shit...

    Has you kids thinking it's glorious to have a "hood ho"...or whatever.

    You'll get over it.

    I'm not going into too much detail here...

    Just work on ya flow some, it stumbled in a few places towards the top...
    Pay attention to ya syllable count.

    Other than that...s'good shit for what it is.

    Real good.

    Peace

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    i liked it it had a nice flow annd structure was good as well as vocab... i'd like to see this rewrittin into more of a song instead of a keystyle...
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    Boy Nova
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    Keep it coming, lovin the ffedback so far.
    Holla

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    Fel#ny
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    Nova its ya boy, loved the track playa, created real imagery like a movie n shit... flow was tight cant wait for ya next piece... keep reppin boy
    PEACE

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    Boy Nova
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    Thanks for the reviews people, keep it all coming, good or bad.
    Holla back at ya boy.
    Nova and out

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    Yo I'm feelin tha keystyle Exspically tha opener Keep posting

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