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Last edited by Telekinetic; January 8th, 2005 at 02:28 AM
Last edited by God.; January 8th, 2005 at 05:06 PM
Czech it...
Son, ur ass low as it goes kid, & I ain't just talkin' bout hell
Cuz you've been the butt of a big joke since you joined IJL
So give up thinking your dope, you just can't beat me, bro
Fact is it's Undisputed... that u should've lost 3 weeks ago
Stop speaking, hoe, because you're Type of rapping is off
Think u can Monitor Text? Please, ur punches are Microsoft
And they say IJL is dope? Shit, even they can't explain ya
U couldn't "Stand Up" to me if Luda was ur personal trainer
Dunno what kinda shit influenzya text, but your not ill to me
Cuz when all the chips are down, it's nacho time for victory
Tel ur simply weak, my friend, in this battle u have no hope
Shit, u can study the Bible, & even u won't believe ur dope
Ur rhymes ain't sick or ill yo, w/out u the league's enriched
So we called u yellow-bellied... in attempt to cholera bitch
Cuz u just don't deserve the title, & I don't mean to be rude
But just give up swingin' ur weak shit, we ain't in the mood
Later
*Don't get it, don't vote. IM or PM me. first Even if u think u don't get it.*
God aka T-wrecks…
They set you up to lose… like a nonprofit business
Cause you’ll never see Noel like I ended Christmas
No skill ass crew, give this Cliché killers pride a rip
Cus I’ve merked more CK than a rollin twenty crip
And as for specs n stats? Time for you to drop down
Ya could flip ya screen and still not turn this around
You’re not even on my level enough to be my rival
Cause God’s scriptures are shit
..……………….like I wiped my ass with the Bible
Your text will crash an burn… hell we know it’s shit
&I’d wreck T… but T-Wrecks himself by posting it
You’re a born loser bitch an you’ll never get ahead
Cause…
You find ways to lose, like finding me in this thread
Recycler of peoples concepts… that shits gotta stop
Cause ya don’t need sandals... to see your flip-flops
You being God is a sham, ya fuckin fake to the core
&I’ll show this Champaign more than a liquor store
I've seen ya verses, you're a line flipper, this gift shops
& who wants to walk in your shoes, if the Flip Flops..
&
You ain’t hurtin me. Ain’t got any shit I like.
True, you’ll bring the champ pagne…
…but not until midnight strikes.
double check your lines w/ someone like Smoka (maybe) before you post.
I know its a coincidence but not everyone thinks the same.
no beef.
Smoka feel fre to delete this asa you see it.
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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^First of all get off his dick
Do you not like me or what?
You do this shit ever fucking battle I have.
But....
My champaign line was different you tart.
Mine was how you really say the word.
As in " Sham=fake and Pain= ouch"
Not champ stupid.
And my flipflop line was better. :P
Ok how about his verse now. He used that nacho wordplay
two weeks ago in this fucking league.
And I quote:
"Feeb's washed up, can't suceed in ur own league, ur no longer hot, yo
See, no matter how many cheesy lines ya spit, kid, this win is nachos"
And that microsoft line was flipped:
"Think you Bright? Nah son.. My Presence make the Light Go Off...
That Verse was Beyond Weak... But we know Word is Microsoft..."
So fuck off.
Son, ur ass low as it goes kid, & I ain't just talkin' bout hell
Cuz you've been the butt of a big joke since you joined IJL
good punch and opener
So give up thinking your dope, you just can't beat me, bro
Fact is it's Undisputed... that u should've lost 3 weeks ago
decent,not feelin it much
Stop speaking, hoe, because you're Type of rapping is off
Think u can Monitor Text? Please, ur punches are Microsoft
good punch and creative as well
And they say IJL is dope? Shit, even they can't explain ya
U couldn't "Stand Up" to me if Luda was ur personal trainer
seems played and newbish to me, but still was witty
Dunno what kinda shit influenzya text, but your not ill to me
Cuz when all the chips are down, it's nacho time for victory
ok punch, its inbetween decent and good
Tel ur simply weak, my friend, in this battle u have no hope
Shit, u can study the Bible, & even u won't believe ur dope
good punch and nicely worded
Ur rhymes ain't sick or ill yo, w/out u the league's enriched
So we called u yellow-bellied... in attempt to cholera bitch
nice wordplay and good punch
Cuz u just don't deserve the title, & I don't mean to be rude
But just give up swingin' ur weak shit, we ain't in the mood
ok punch, not that good but over decent
They set you up to lose… like a nonprofit business
Cause you’ll never see Noel like I ended Christmas
decent opener,nice wordplay but could have been direct
No skill ass crew, give this Cliché killers pride a rip
Cus I’ve merked more CK than a rollin twenty crip
selfglorifying,again,get more direct,nice punch tho
And as for specs n stats? Time for you to drop down
Ya could flip ya screen and still not turn this around
decent punch
You’re not even on my level enough to be my rival
Cause God’s scriptures are shit
..……………….like I wiped my ass with the Bible
good punch but i dont like when mcs use that structure to make it look even
Your text will crash an burn… hell we know it’s shit
&I’d wreck T… but T-Wrecks himself by posting it
good punch
You’re a born loser bitch an you’ll never get ahead
Cause…
You find ways to lose, like finding me in this thread
this was inbetween weak and decent
Recycler of peoples concepts… that shits gotta stop
Cause ya don’t need sandals... to see your flip-flops
inbetween decent and good, ok punch
You being God is a sham, ya fuckin fake to the core
&I’ll show this Champaign more than a liquor store
nah wasnt feelin this closer,only weak punch in the battle.
well as u can see from the break down, T-wrecks/God takes this for comen harder and wittier
vote/God
I wrote no beef for a reason.Originally Posted by Telekinetic
You def have talent as a writer
& it would be nice to see you in LLL next season.
Last time I'll post in any of your battles don't worry.
You just keep it up w/ that played stuff
& pray noone ever comes fresh/halfway decent in this league.
Touchy kid.
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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^I took your first post as swaying for him.
I dont care if you called my shit played or whatever.
I just wanted to show you he come played too.
At least mine were fresh to me at the time.
I didnt recycle any of my punches.
And I've had writers block for two weeks now. :/
Also... I still think my flips were better.
So... me + you = no beef... I still respect your opinion.
Peace
Sorry, my bad, I just realized God was in CK =/
Dope battle y'all
Last edited by Logic Speaks; January 6th, 2005 at 06:15 AM
Son, ur ass low as it goes kid, & I ain't just talkin' bout hell
Cuz you've been the butt of a big joke since you joined IJL
-decent personal +1
So give up thinking your dope, you just can't beat me, bro
Fact is it's Undisputed... that u should've lost 3 weeks ago
-ok personal +2
Stop speaking, hoe, because you're Type of rapping is off
Think u can Monitor Text? Please, ur punches are Microsoft
-Played as fuk, no points
And they say IJL is dope? Shit, even they can't explain ya
U couldn't "Stand Up" to me if Luda was ur personal trainer
ha, iiiight +3
Dunno what kinda shit influenzya text, but your not ill to me
Cuz when all the chips are down, it's nacho time for victory
-U flipped this from our battle....no points
Tel ur simply weak, my friend, in this battle u have no hope
Shit, u can study the Bible, & even u won't believe ur dope
-naw
Ur rhymes ain't sick or ill yo, w/out u the league's enriched
So we called u yellow-bellied... in attempt to cholera bitch
iiight +3
Cuz u just don't deserve the title, & I don't mean to be rude
But just give up swingin' ur weak shit, we ain't in the mood
iiiight +3
God = +12
They set you up to lose… like a nonprofit business
Cause you’ll never see Noel like I ended Christmas
clever... good +4
No skill ass crew, give this Cliché killers pride a rip
Cus I’ve merked more CK than a rollin twenty crip
-ok personal +2
And as for specs n stats? Time for you to drop down
Ya could flip ya screen and still not turn this around
-decent +1
You’re not even on my level enough to be my rival
Cause God’s scriptures are shit
..……………….like I wiped my ass with the Bible
-iiight +3
Your text will crash an burn… hell we know it’s shit
&I’d wreck T… but T-Wrecks himself by posting it
-ok+2
You’re a born loser bitch an you’ll never get ahead
Cause…
You find ways to lose, like finding me in this thread
naw
Recycler of peoples concepts… that shits gotta stop
Cause ya don’t need sandals... to see your flip-flops
-seen a few times, blah
You being God is a sham, ya fuckin fake to the core
&I’ll show this Champaign more than a liquor store
iiight wordplay +3
+15
well thats how the cookie crumbles..... oh shit, i jus thought of ill punch from that, lol, anyway tele wins for havin more harder hiittin witty and creative punches. 1
Artificial Intelligence
eh. i see God taking this battle.
vs.Originally Posted by God
God, your verse was good. you had creativity, wordplay, witty concepts, punches, and personals. it was an even distribution between them also. your verse hit Tele harder than his hit you. Tele, your verse was good also.. you had some wordplay, but most of it was played. you had some witty concepts & creativity also, but some of it was played in my opinion also.. overall, i just think God came harder & less played.Originally Posted by Telekinetic
V/ God
^Thanks for voting.
That's 2-1