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Im Ripping this kid apart, I dont give a fuck what he brings..
He's wack and like the World Series of Poker, gets no Ratings..
Voters will see your name in the title, and we won't get views..
Been here for 2 years and still a newb, no wonder your old news..
It should be an honor to battle me, but just quit after this please..
And You=Dope and I=Wack, Well, When speaking in Analogies..
You and a girl, please, You couldnt "sock her", even if you tried kicking..
A loss on your record is coming closer, since the Tyme is Ticking..
I Shouldn't battle newbs, but i was bored, A Win without a doubt..
And your career is like your name, Because it's running out..
In 30 minutes, I end up against a shit gimmick..YOU bout to get blazed kid..
Cuz u only walk tall in church shoes.. the bitch’s prime a special occasion..
See I’ve searched for new victory.. an easy win.. seems ya style’s enough...
By postin that shit.. Maan, who’d u fuck over? NOT even mile high club...
He can’t be predicted over me.. if so.. it’s showed he’s amazingly ass...
N when it comes to me or him?
Shit I’m known to put more asses in seats than his momma’s strip alias...
1,400 posts.. this kids “seniority” prolly attracts a dick-rider or several...
Plus recycled concepts..
Yeah I fucking bet he got two for every time he uses the punch next level..
eclipse
Im Ripping this kid apart, I dont give a fuck what he brings..
He's wack and like the World Series of Poker, gets no Ratings..
not too bad, wording needs work
Voters will see your name in the title, and we won't get views..
Been here for 2 years and still a newb, no wonder your old news..
lol, i liked this
It should be an honor to battle me, but just quit after this please..
And You=Dope and I=Wack, Well, When speaking in Analogies..
nice
You and a girl, please, You couldnt "sock her", even if you tried kicking..
A loss on your record is coming closer, since the Tyme is Ticking..
not bad, nice nameplay
I Shouldn't battle newbs, but i was bored, A Win without a doubt..
And your career is like your name, Because it's running out..
nice, liked the name play again
quite a solid verse, the punches were good. only criticism is you could word some of your punches better.
tyme
In 30 minutes, I end up against a shit gimmick..YOU bout to get blazed kid..
Cuz u only walk tall in church shoes.. the bitch’s prime a special occasion..
pretty wack, nice multies 1st line, second line blah
See I’ve searched for new victory.. an easy win.. seems ya style’s enough...
By postin that shit.. Maan, who’d u fuck over? NOT even mile high club...
second line was dope, not too bad,
He can’t be predicted over me.. if so.. it’s showed he’s amazingly ass...
N when it comes to me or him?
Shit I’m known to put more asses in seats than his momma’s strip alias...
pretty wack
1,400 posts.. this kids “seniority” prolly attracts a dick-rider or several...
Plus recycled concepts..
Yeah I fucking bet he got two for every time he uses the punch next level
could of been dope with wording
your punches didn't quite connect.
the mile high, one was good though.
work on your wording, structure, and make your punches connect.
vote-eclipse
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-Eclipse
Im Ripping this kid apart, I dont give a fuck what he brings..
He's wack and like the World Series of Poker, gets no Ratings..
Aight Opiner...
Voters will see your name in the title, and we won't get views..
Been here for 2 years and still a newb, no wonder your old news..
Nice Good Personal..
It should be an honor to battle me, but just quit after this please..
And You=Dope and I=Wack, Well, When speaking in Analogies..
Aight Not to good...Nice Complexity
You and a girl, please, You couldnt "sock her", even if you tried kicking..
A loss on your record is coming closer, since the Tyme is Ticking..
Good Multie
I Shouldn't battle newbs, but i was bored, A Win without a doubt..
And your career is like your name, Because it's running out..
Good nice Closiner
You Had a pretty Good verse there but mainly it was orginal then
a regular and you had what a Battles needs like similies.. Metaphores
and Flow..and a few hard punches
-Tyme
In 30 minutes, I end up against a shit gimmick..YOU bout to get blazed kid..
Cuz u only walk tall in church shoes.. the bitch’s prime a special occasion..
not Good Opener, Would be better for a punch
See I’ve searched for new victory.. an easy win.. seems ya style’s enough...
By postin that shit.. Maan, who’d u fuck over? NOT even mile high club...
I dont even think you rhymed there, O well..Weak
He can’t be predicted over me.. if so.. it’s showed he’s amazingly ass...
N when it comes to me or him?
Shit I’m known to put more asses in seats than his momma’s strip alias..
Umm No weak again...
1,400 posts.. this kids “seniority” prolly attracts a dick-rider or several...
Plus recycled concepts..
Yeah I fucking bet he got two for every time he uses the punch next level..
Pretty good Closiner and the best line throught ther verse
You had a weak verse and pretty good openers and closiner's but
you came weak with constincy and Flow and Punches didnt really
hit hard and Basicly Keep elevating
OVERALL-EClipse Takes this because He came harder and He basicly
had everything better and He had similies and Metaphores and everything
Better then your verse, but Keep Trying Tyme, View some stuff and Keep
elevating
v/EClipse Return the favor please
tyme...your opener didnt rhyme...bout to get blazed kid and specil occasion..uhh no...
some of your bars didnt rhyme...your structure and flow was ight..work on your vocab..punches were weak..be more personals..the post line was decent..should have more....elavate
eclipse...you took this...punches hit him hard...you dissed on his name pretty bad..
structure and flow was on point..vocaba and creativity was good...keep it up
..tyme keep elavating do cyphers or poems and stuff and you'll elavate greatly..
v/eclipse...
..better overall verse...
return the favor and hit my battles up in my sig....
Eclipse - nice opener, far better structure & flow. '....Tyme is ticking' nice line. Closing not too good though. Tyme - structure didn't really work for me.'.....mile high club' line worked well. Punches did'nt quite hit as hard. Close battle but eclipse got this one just.
VOTE: Eclipse
Hit this up with an honest vote:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136322
I gotta go w/ eclipse in this battle although both of your flows need work. Eclipse had better punches and some funny lines.
Help me close this battle: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135604
This site is bullshit
Up 1 to end this shit..
up2..
not a bad battle here..
eclipse - your verse was pretty good, some good wordplay and some of your punches connected pretty well man, you had better personals aswell and kin da creative...good flow aswell.
tyme - not a bad verse, some lines were kinda played an dothers were kinda weak, noithin really dope or decent, personals need to be harder and mix them with wordplay and hard hittin punches'
vote Eclipse...
return thefavour on my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136691
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