MCeePJ vs Ilmatic D

[Ilmatic D]

aight
10 lines
drop ya verse in a half hour
home rules
you spit first

[Jonezy]

is this all set up right?

[Ilmatic D]

yeah i think so, why?

[Jonezy]

it doesnt sat BATTLE: infront of our names

[Ilmatic D]

It does with me....
just spit man

[Jonezy]

Telling me to just spit..damn you got a death wish

He doesnt have a flow..like a broken blunt fan
He couldnt blow up on the scene..
..if he was a fuckin stunt man
Dont claim to be a vet man...wouldnt you rather say
Punches have him confused...
...like givin his card out on fathers day
He copies other members names...this mans just a hater
Hows he gunna beat me in battle
...when he needs an english translater
The Truth is finally out...Ilmatic D just lacks the skill
Wanna be dope read your own verse...
... no doubt that will make you 'Ill'
'Lines' wouldnt be 'fire'...if electricity 'burnt' his 'cable'
He gets 'smoked' so much....
....hes gettin name after a cigarette label


Blah keyed...drop soon

[Jonezy]

LMAO..i fucked up on the names lines...meant to be

..this mans far from a hater


lol anyway...good luck man

[Jonezy]

its been nearly an hour...u droppin?

[Ilmatic D]

You thinkin my flow is wack, I got news for you ‘feel ya bones crack’
We’ll be up in the ring, I’ll beat ya asse down till the seconds hit ten
Caus ya wanne be the king, but let’s count all ya battles “ya didn’t win”
I’m 19 and I have a job, you’re 17 and you’re life’s is one big flaw
Ilmatic D is handling with a saw, tear ya to pieces caus you’re no longer needed
And if you feel my rhymes you gonna find my style “wicked”
Just like Austin powers when he finds his penis pump and tries to get it
Fuck you’re ass lickin, here’s my dick, suffocate on this
And if ya really wanne be an MC try to learn from the master
Instead of getting ya shit from somebody else his winning spit

[Ilmatic D]

shit, I typed to fast

Up for votes now

[dom-N8]

Ilmatic D - 'you gonna find my style wicked' that line was pretty lame & calling ya self 'the master' was all hyping up shit that wasn't there. MCeePJ - Good structure & flow. 'Read you're own verse no doubt that will make you ''ill' - nice line. Overall clever wordplay. MCeePJ took this quite easily.
VOTE: MCeePJ

Hit this up with an honest vote:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136322

[Ilmatic D]

UPIN FOR VOTE'S............................................ .....vote please

[Jonezy]

cheers for votin....................................uppin

[STUBBY]

ONE SIDED-

MCEEPJ- i liked this verse from you man, you didnt really diss heim personally wise, but you did throw punches that were descent i liked your structure alot man, it went very well with your word play and flow, overall just try and diss him more on what he has said

Ilmatic- man your verse wasnt good man, i kind of see how i used to be in your verses, i think you can ellevate if you worek on it, but in this you didnt really diss him that well and the personals that you threw up werent worded good at all

overall- my vote goes to MCEEPJ for havin btter punches and personals

[STUBBY]

return the favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136680