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scratchy
olkingkole
10 lines
No feeding
30 min/ time limit
Good idea i wont feed off ur verse/Cuz if urz is read first/I'll get the vote without even lettin my brain work/But cha know when i get the on the mic/i leave dudes uptight/ Cuz they didnt think this white girl from sac could write/Well i can and i will/and u know i got skill/when i fuc around on this site just for the thrill/of gettin people's ego's killed/Thinkin they a thug...you aint even a studio gangsta cuz they wuldnt even give u studio time/I cant get to personal cuz i dont know a thing about you/but i can tell you gunna come with something weak...and i didnt read ya other battles to scout you/Yeah u know thats just an assumption/If you tight i'll be suprised...just like the wardrobe malfunction
I'm offering to battle you cuz theres just no stopping me
My rhymes is sick and yours just leave em vomiting.
Fear not I got the cure for this perpetual keeling
Feeling like Marvin I bring you textual healing
Try to keep replyin and matchin my best
But my rhymes'll leave ya dry and scratchin your head.
The only thing about you scratchy is your voice
Cuz you cant talk when my rhymes come full force.
Of cours you know I already won this battle
Cuz your rhymes got more bullshit than a field full of cattle.
olkingkole u won dis by a long shot i luv dat "texual healing" thing dat wuz tight, and u had a nice flow and opening. vote- olkingkole
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"my flow is in da pocket like wallets, i got da bounce like hydrolecs, dey can't call it, i got da swerve like alcohoooooooolecs.............my freshman year i wuz
goin thru hella prolems so i bet up da nerve 2 drop my ass up outa cooooooooolege" -Kanye West
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scratchy-structure was really confusing. i wasnt really feeling the flow at all either. i didnt really see any punches. it was just boring the whole way through i couldnt wait till it was over. i wasnt feelin the opener at all. ending was crap too. NO personals.
olkingkole-i like ur structure a lot. i thought the flow was real good.Rhyming was really good. punches were pretty good, didnt hit real hard, but u had em. opener was pretty good. Closer was real good. this stuff made me laugh with the field of cattle and the textual healing. u got some clevor shit man.
This wasnt a very hard vote at all
Vote:Olkingkole
return the favor pleese
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Dammit I need this battle closed. Vote. Uppin...................
ill break this battle down
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scratchy- u had a terrible structure to yer lyrics. U really need to fix that cuz u will never get any votes with that shit. I was not feelin yer flow and u didnt have any punches. It was really hard to read thru this (c)rap. I dont think yer bad at this but u need to work on a lot of things to get yer scheem and lyrics fixed up.
olkingkole- U had a much better structure and the flow was a lot better.U had sum punches but u Need to work on havin some more in yer lyrics. My favorite line was yer ending about his ryhmes having more bullshit than a field full of cattle. Great ending and punch. this was a no-brainer of a win and u definitly did a better job
my vote=olkingkole
Vote Ol King
He had a better variety of punchs that gave him the victory.
Poizonuz Prince
people vote on this. olkinkole clearly had better word play and flow and punches. this isnt a hard one
aight easy to see who won..
scratchy- had too much of a bad structure man, CHANGE IT, other than that u jus need to get more experience and elevate more
ol- aight verse, nothin too special, but def topped scratches verse, keep it up
vote= olking
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i cant vote right now but olkingkole had this hands down
scratchy
structure was wack as hell...SEPERATE UR LINES MAN!...writin in paragraphs is gay...flow fell off cause i didnt know where u were goin with ur structure at all...no metas...wordplay sucked ass...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...
olkingkole
structure was pretty good...some of ur lines were a little off though...flow was decent...no metas...wordplay was simple, and not good...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...
Overall
neither had metas...neither had good wordplay...neither had good personals...olkingkole had the better structure...as well as the more stable flow...he also had more connecting punches...so basing off of that...olkingkole gets my vote...
VOTE - OLKINGKOLE
PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...
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