D.Zaster (1-0) vs Trahedy Siphon (1-0)

[Aines]

LLL Jr. Week 2

Word

first week went kinda well no shows are gone and cats who showed and who signed up are now in...

same as last week check by wednesday drop by friday come good....if your opponent fails to check but shows then that will be allowed but they will be deducted 2 votes for failure to check.....
so all in all you MUST drop a verse this week.....

last of all voting.....im scrapping the 4 links this week, unless voting activity goes then this is how it will stay and if i catch anyone feeding off the first vote you will have votes deducted...constant offence then i'll boot your ass from the league.....


good luck all

[Trahedy Siphon]

Check, 14. G'luck..Canz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3543507
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...25#post3543525
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...34#post3543534
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3544918
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...71#post3547871

[Violent.]

Ye G`luck man.

14 is fine

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...34#post3549034
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3549355
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...66#post3553966
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=252820

[Trahedy Siphon]

Post early.. went 16 instead.

Making your name off the fat of the land, prep' to be cursed bitch
coz I can see the REAL D.Zaster, man.. written in your verses.
Your simply mediocre, a joker, your bad. But on a lighter note:
D' being made mod' outshines anything he EVER wrote
D.Zaster started a shitty Empire crew, & failed before I doubted shit
then you created a crew with Meters.. & he doesn't even know about it
Peeps got shit to prove, a whole gang got my back if I need
Thats why D.Zasters the first person I'd choose..
to be booted from the league.
Zasters a fag, a fake.. stampin' his face quicker than he can no-show
shit..I been on top of this battle so long, bitch has gave me vertigo.
Canz knows me & he'll probably feed, keeping his ear to the ground
& he's known to always put-up a fight.. ,
after taking SO many put downs.
I kick Canz to death cuz its something I enjoy when in the zone
but when Canz kicks Canz. . he's moving part of his home.
D.. you will be forgotten about, man. I only speak to the truth, cuz
your status will lower quicker than a handicap bus

[Violent.]

Trahedy Siphon Aka Brixton...

Your always comin played, I guess crews just arnt for you
Cos you aint original... No matter how much you beg to join that crew
.
.
.
Youve never been dope, While I stay smashing the hits
Yall can call me a demonstration worker the way Ill be smashin brix
Your not elite, I mean just look at this cunts lines
Cos when I say we`re at war... I mean your just stuck in the front lines
This fag lies, Says Meters aint know about the crew, Listen mayne
Tell me this..
If he aint know about it how the fuck did he come up with the crew name?
This flows insane and yer I fed, But hey who gives a fuck
When I mention the key to success... fag got his lips ready to actually suck
Ill hurt you quick, And smack ya to remove that frown son
Cos when I wish you well... I actually wanna throw you down one
Your ugly as fuck kid, Id rather be seeing your mom in a thong
See...
having hair on your chest aint the only resemblence you have to king kong
Your wack as fuck, Now sit back as this verse nails ya
atleast You got a good family tree.. But thats only cos the crops a failure

[DaTrusHurtz]

Making your name off the fat of the land, prep' to be cursed bitch
coz I can see the REAL D.Zaster, man.. written in your verses.
okay, but coulda done more with the disaster thing
Your simply mediocre, a joker, your bad. But on a lighter note:
D' being made mod' outshines anything he EVER wrote
simple but decent, kinda true tho his topicals are dope
D.Zaster started a shitty Empire crew, & failed before I doubted shit
then you created a crew with Meters.. & he doesn't even know about it
with wordplay this coulda been nice, but the way you said it, it came off too bland and "so what?" ish
Peeps got shit to prove, a whole gang got my back if I need
Thats why D.Zasters the first person I'd choose..
to be booted from the league.
Decent I suppose
Zasters a fag, a fake.. stampin' his face quicker than he can no-show
shit..I been on top of this battle so long, bitch has gave me vertigo.
Creative, not bad, but doesn't hit that hard
Canz knows me & he'll probably feed, keeping his ear to the ground
& he's known to always put-up a fight.. ,
after taking SO many put downs.
lol, I liked this
I kick Canz to death cuz its something I enjoy when in the zone
but when Canz kicks Canz. . he's moving part of his home.
aight cuz it's a nameplay, but homeless shit is so played unless it's like REALLY original... this wasn't
D.. you will be forgotten about, man. I only speak to the truth, cuz
your status will lower quicker than a handicap bus
Just a statement really

vs.

Your always comin played, I guess crews just arnt for you
Cos you aint original... No matter how much you beg to join that crew
Solid personal
.
.
.
Youve never been dope, While I stay smashing the hits
Yall can call me a demonstration worker the way Ill be smashin brix
I feel this needed reworded cuz it isn't really a punch the way you put it, but smashing brix was a good concept
Your not elite, I mean just look at this cunts lines
Cos when I say we`re at war... I mean your just stuck in the front lines
nah, front lines stuff is kinda played/boring unless there's an extremely original twist behind it
This fag lies, Says Meters aint know about the crew, Listen mayne
Tell me this..
If he aint know about it how the fuck did he come up with the crew name?
The fact that you acknowledge it's feeding don't make it right
This flows insane and yer I fed, But hey who gives a fuck
When I mention the key to success... fag got his lips ready to actually suck
Uh, nah man
Ill hurt you quick, And smack ya to remove that frown son
Cos when I wish you well... I actually wanna throw you down one
Nicely executed, but I've seen a few well lines before
Your ugly as fuck kid, Id rather be seeing your mom in a thong
See...
having hair on your chest aint the only resemblence you have to king kong
lol, funny
Your wack as fuck, Now sit back as this verse nails ya
atleast You got a good family tree.. But thats only cos the crops a failure
family tree shit is so played

Damn, After breaking this battle down, I'm very temped to just close the window and not vote cuz this is a very hard battle to vote on, it was madd close. I really liked the king kong line and the well shit was okay from D.Zaster, but as a whole I think he came a little bit more played than Trahedy. I really liked the put-down line from Trahedy and as a whole, his verse just seemed much more consistent and polished than D.Zaster's so I'm giving this to him, but nice battle fellas. Decent effort from both of you.

Vote - Trahedy

[Violent.]

You dont get the success line?

Suck Cess.

Not saying thats why you voted against me, but its just incase.

Pz

0-1

[DaTrusHurtz]

Word, I got it, but still thought it was weak.. just my opinion. Probably good ya clarified it anyway tho cuz I'm sure some people won't get it, it took me a 2nd read to catch it.

[Philly®]

Making your name off the fat of the land, prep' to be cursed bitch
coz I can see the REAL D.Zaster, man.. written in your verses.
good
Your simply mediocre, a joker, your bad. But on a lighter note:
D' being made mod' outshines anything he EVER wrote
meh
D.Zaster started a shitty Empire crew, & failed before I doubted shit
then you created a crew with Meters.. & he doesn't even know about it
meh
Peeps got shit to prove, a whole gang got my back if I need
Thats why D.Zasters the first person I'd choose..
to be booted from the league.
coo
Zasters a fag, a fake.. stampin' his face quicker than he can no-show
shit..I been on top of this battle so long, bitch has gave me vertigo.
Creative
Canz knows me & he'll probably feed, keeping his ear to the ground
& he's known to always put-up a fight.. ,
after taking SO many put downs.
lmao.....nice
I kick Canz to death cuz its something I enjoy when in the zone
but when Canz kicks Canz. . he's moving part of his home.
good wording....punch meh
D.. you will be forgotten about, man. I only speak to the truth, cuz
your status will lower quicker than a handicap bus
meh closer

vs.

Your always comin played, I guess crews just arnt for you
Cos you aint original... No matter how much you beg to join that crew
good personal
.
.
.
Youve never been dope, While I stay smashing the hits
Yall can call me a demonstration worker the way Ill be smashin brix
wording meh, concept good
Your not elite, I mean just look at this cunts lines
Cos when I say we`re at war... I mean your just stuck in the front lines
meh
This fag lies, Says Meters aint know about the crew, Listen mayne
Tell me this..
If he aint know about it how the fuck did he come up with the crew name?
personal, not good tho
This flows insane and yer I fed, But hey who gives a fuck
When I mention the key to success... fag got his lips ready to actually suck
lol
Ill hurt you quick, And smack ya to remove that frown son
Cos when I wish you well... I actually wanna throw you down one
good
Your ugly as fuck kid, Id rather be seeing your mom in a thong
See...
having hair on your chest aint the only resemblence you have to king kong
lmao, good
Your wack as fuck, Now sit back as this verse nails ya
atleast You got a good family tree.. But thats only cos the crops a failure
meh closer

i think this battle coulda went either way, but overall d. zaster came les played to me, and he was more consistant,.....trag had good concepts, but his wording wasn't exicuted right....overall good battle

Vote/d.

[Violent.]

ight 1-1

[KempoMRK]

Making your name off the fat of the land, prep' to be cursed bitch
coz I can see the REAL D.Zaster, man.. written in your verses.

Nice, cool nameplay.

Your simply mediocre, a joker, your bad. But on a lighter note:
D' being made mod' outshines anything he EVER wrote

Wasn't feeling this, too simple.

D.Zaster started a shitty Empire crew, & failed before I doubted shit
then you created a crew with Meters.. & he doesn't even know about it

Pretty decent.

Peeps got shit to prove, a whole gang got my back if I need
Thats why D.Zasters the first person I'd choose..
to be booted from the league.

Nah, didn't really like this.

Zasters a fag, a fake.. stampin' his face quicker than he can no-show
shit..I been on top of this battle so long, bitch has gave me vertigo.

This was cool, nice bar.

Canz knows me & he'll probably feed, keeping his ear to the ground
& he's known to always put-up a fight.. ,
after taking SO many put downs.

Ok.

I kick Canz to death cuz its something I enjoy when in the zone
but when Canz kicks Canz. . he's moving part of his home.

Didn't like this much.

D.. you will be forgotten about, man. I only speak to the truth, cuz
your status will lower quicker than a handicap bus

Nah.


Your always comin played, I guess crews just arnt for you
Cos you aint original... No matter how much you beg to join that crew

ok

Youve never been dope, While I stay smashing the hits
Yall can call me a demonstration worker the way Ill be smashin brix

Wasn't feeling this.

Your not elite, I mean just look at this cunts lines
Cos when I say we`re at war... I mean your just stuck in the front lines

This was pretty decent, wording was good.

This fag lies, Says Meters aint know about the crew, Listen mayne
Tell me this..
If he aint know about it how the fuck did he come up with the crew name?

Wasn't liking the wording of this.

This flows insane and yer I fed, But hey who gives a fuck
When I mention the key to success... fag got his lips ready to actually suck

Nah, pretty weak.

Ill hurt you quick, And smack ya to remove that frown son
Cos when I wish you well... I actually wanna throw you down one

Nice, liked this.

Your ugly as fuck kid, Id rather be seeing your mom in a thong
See...
having hair on your chest aint the only resemblence you have to king kong

Hmm, twas reasonable I guess.

Your wack as fuck, Now sit back as this verse nails ya
atleast You got a good family tree.. But thats only cos the crops a failure

I didn't like the wording on this.


This was close as fuck, a good battle as well, prob the best I've seen so far in LLL Jr. Both came nice but I think that Trahedy edged it as I thought that vertigo punch was the best of the battle closely followed by the well one. Good battle.

v/ Trahedy Siphon

[Lyrical God]

Making your name off the fat of the land, prep' to be cursed bitch
coz I can see the REAL D.Zaster, man.. written in your verses.
Meh.. ok put pretty basic...
Your simply mediocre, a joker, your bad. But on a lighter note:
D' being made mod' outshines anything he EVER wrote
lol decent...
D.Zaster started a shitty Empire crew, & failed before I doubted shit
then you created a crew with Meters.. & he doesn't even know about it
This came across as more of a statement than a punch..
Peeps got shit to prove, a whole gang got my back if I need
Thats why D.Zasters the first person I'd choose..
to be booted from the league.
Not feelin it...
Zasters a fag, a fake.. stampin' his face quicker than he can no-show
shit..I been on top of this battle so long, bitch has gave me vertigo.
Ive heard vertigo lines a lot but still a decent punch...
Canz knows me & he'll probably feed, keeping his ear to the ground
& he's known to always put-up a fight.. ,
after taking SO many put downs.
Lol decent...
I kick Canz to death cuz its something I enjoy when in the zone
but when Canz kicks Canz. . he's moving part of his home.
lmao, this was so blatently basic but it made me laugh....
D.. you will be forgotten about, man. I only speak to the truth, cuz
your status will lower quicker than a handicap bus
Lol cudda been worded better but decent i guess..

Vs.

Your always comin played, I guess crews just arnt for you
Cos you aint original... No matter how much you beg to join that crew
Na....
Youve never been dope, While I stay smashing the hits
Yall can call me a demonstration worker the way Ill be smashin brix
Basic but on point, decent...
Your not elite, I mean just look at this cunts lines
Cos when I say we`re at war... I mean your just stuck in the front lines
Lmao dope
This fag lies, Says Meters aint know about the crew, Listen mayne
Tell me this..
If he aint know about it how the fuck did he come up with the crew name?
Ok but more of a statement than a punch...
This flows insane and yer I fed, But hey who gives a fuck
When I mention the key to success... fag got his lips ready to actually suck
Lol good...
Ill hurt you quick, And smack ya to remove that frown son
Cos when I wish you well... I actually wanna throw you down one
lol decent..
Your ugly as fuck kid, Id rather be seeing your mom in a thong
See...
having hair on your chest aint the only resemblence you have to king kong
lmao good
Your wack as fuck, Now sit back as this verse nails ya
atleast You got a good family tree.. But thats only cos the crops a failure
Not as good as your last few bars, shudnt have been used as a closer but was ok...

This was a decent battle, both came hard and both verses made me laugh. Im givin this 1 to D tho because imo i just thought his concepts were fresher and he had a funnier verse. Tra had a good verse with some funny lines in also, but D's were just a bit more witty.

Vote/D

[Violent.]

lol 2-2

Nice battle Brix.

I can see its gonna be one of those battles.

[Barburyin]

dis was da closest battle i have read all day man both of yall spit real good structure and punches hit hard i think d's flow was a lil better but i think trahedy came wit more witty punches so he gets ma vote and no hate 2 d just bein honest think u should have stood yo groungs instead of tryin 2 defend yourself cuz if u would have came wit more dope punches instead of bein on defense u would have won

v/trahedy

[Philly B. Sparkz]

Making your name off the fat of the land, prep' to be cursed bitch
coz I can see the REAL D.Zaster, man.. written in your verses.
haha, Funny shit. Cool nameplay
Your simply mediocre, a joker, your bad. But on a lighter note:
D' being made mod' outshines anything he EVER wrote
Ha. Ok
D.Zaster started a shitty Empire crew, & failed before I doubted shit
then you created a crew with Meters.. & he doesn't even know about it
It sort of seems that way, but you dont actually know. But still cool
Peeps got shit to prove, a whole gang got my back if I need
Thats why D.Zasters the first person I'd choose..
to be booted from the league.
Blah.
Zasters a fag, a fake.. stampin' his face quicker than he can no-show
shit..I been on top of this battle so long, bitch has gave me vertigo.
Straight.
Canz knows me & he'll probably feed, keeping his ear to the ground
& he's known to always put-up a fight.. ,
after taking SO many put downs.
Nah, not feelin' it
I kick Canz to death cuz its something I enjoy when in the zone
but when Canz kicks Canz. . he's moving part of his home.
I've heard this nameplay against him to many times.
D.. you will be forgotten about, man. I only speak to the truth, cuz
your status will lower quicker than a handicap bus
Meh.

Vs

Your always comin played, I guess crews just arnt for you
Cos you aint original... No matter how much you beg to join that crew
Ha. Cool personal
.
.
.
Youve never been dope, While I stay smashing the hits
Yall can call me a demonstration worker the way Ill be smashin brix
lmao. Cool nameplay
Your not elite, I mean just look at this cunts lines
Cos when I say we`re at war... I mean your just stuck in the front lines
Nah.
This fag lies, Says Meters aint know about the crew, Listen mayne
Tell me this..
If he aint know about it how the fuck did he come up with the crew name?
Nope. Not really a punch
This flows insane and yer I fed, But hey who gives a fuck
When I mention the key to success... fag got his lips ready to actually suck
Nah, not feelin' it
Ill hurt you quick, And smack ya to remove that frown son
Cos when I wish you well... I actually wanna throw you down one
lol. Dope
Your ugly as fuck kid, Id rather be seeing your mom in a thong
See...
having hair on your chest aint the only resemblence you have to king kong
lmao!
Your wack as fuck, Now sit back as this verse nails ya
atleast You got a good family tree.. But thats only cos the crops a failure
Nah.


Hard choice man, this battle was dam close. You both dropped solid verses with good personals and in the most part fresh punches. But, I feel Brix's punches hit a lot lighter and Canna's were a lot more direct and funny.

v//D.Zaster

Cool read, weeks best battle for sure.