KempMRK (1-0) vs K (1-0)

[Aines]

LLL Jr. Week 2

Word

first week went kinda well no shows are gone and cats who showed and who signed up are now in...

same as last week check by wednesday drop by friday come good....if your opponent fails to check but shows then that will be allowed but they will be deducted 2 votes for failure to check.....
so all in all you MUST drop a verse this week.....

last of all voting.....im scrapping the 4 links this week, unless voting activity goes then this is how it will stay and if i catch anyone feeding off the first vote you will have votes deducted...constant offence then i'll boot your ass from the league.....


good luck all

[nolonger]

in...who? drop early.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3535478
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...35#post3538835

[KempoMRK]

Check.

Votes:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3549392
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...39#post3549439
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...90#post3556090
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...15#post3556115
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...48#post3556148
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...88#post3556188

[nolonger]

how did he win last week? Lmfao

How you 1 up? You suck so I wont postpone you’re loss
Shits nothing to write home about, so fuck zipcoding a box
Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate
You far from straight, lightweight you throw nothing I can dig
Whereas ill have you seeing more black stars than my own sig
Fuck you pig, just a newb thinking he’s rude and can spray
I’m real, you’re like the spelling of knife, a silent K
Ok and Kempo slow up you’re tempo, ill leave you hollow bro
Id say that shit hit the fan, but no one really follows you.

please.

[KempoMRK]

when i started in my first season in jr i wasnt shit, really i was wack
i meen i ent great now

First line for this dude, but I'm already through,
Cos punchlines are pointless when ur opponent says it for you,
Ya got 2 years experience so you could wreck in LLL Jr,
You've got the arrogance of a vet yet you're...^^^^^,
I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are,
I got a cracker from #2 in my advent calender today,
So it's ironic how #2 from a cracker defines me vs K,
My punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.

[nolonger]

bump

N'


grind.

[Violent.]

Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate
You far from straight, lightweight you throw nothing I can dig
Whereas ill have you seeing more black stars than my own sig
Fuck you pig, just a newb thinking he’s rude and can spray
I’m real, you’re like the spelling of knife, a silent K

vs

I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are
punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.


V/K

by a hair

[Trahedy Siphon]

K:
How you 1 up? You suck so I wont postpone you’re loss
Shits nothing to write home about, so fuck zipcoding a box

Kempo:
First line for this dude, but I'm already through,
Cos punchlines are pointless when ur opponent says it for you,
Ya got 2 years experience so you could wreck in LLL Jr,
You've got the arrogance of a vet yet you're...^^^^^,
I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are,
My punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.

Overall:
Wow, didn't expect it. But this was a bit of a mauling. Kempo was
just original, and had hard hitting punches. K's wording killed him
here.. had some mean ideas but just couldn't connect. Kempo for
me is an alias. Props to both for showing.

Vote:Kempo

Hit up my battle with D.Zaster.

[Demon Pyrokronix]

Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate

vs

I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are
punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show

Ok battle here, gamecube line was nice even tho it's corny as fuck, the jem line was also very good. The rest of Kempos verse was ok tho I hated the opponent says it for you and the lll jr lines and lmao at Trahedy quoting them. K I just didn't feel your verse man, your wording was off but the check mate line was nice. The shit hit the fan line was horrible, my version was way better. The black star line was ok but I don't like threat punches unless there's some really dope wordplay involved.

Every emcee gets booed once, it ain't nobodies fault
So when shit hits the fans... you'll get locked up for assault

^my version

V/ Kempo

[u n r e a L]

v. K

Just overall better.

You far from straight, lightweight you throw nothing I can dig
Whereas ill have you seeing more black stars than my own sig

lmfao.

[Thor]

Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate

vs

I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are
punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.

V/Kem

[Aines]

kapa thor and d zaster your votes arent counting at the moment

explain the shit properly

check the voting thread if need be

[Thor]

How you 1 up? You suck so I wont postpone you’re loss
Shits nothing to write home about, so fuck zipcoding a box
alright
Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate
nice
You far from straight, lightweight you throw nothing I can dig
Whereas ill have you seeing more black stars than my own sig
weak
Fuck you pig, just a newb thinking he’s rude and can spray
I’m real, you’re like the spelling of knife, a silent K
lol no this is so corny[B]
Ok and Kempo slow up you’re tempo, ill leave you hollow bro
Id say that shit hit the fan, but no one really follows you.
not bad

vs

First line for this dude, but I'm already through,
Cos punchlines are pointless when ur opponent says it for you,
alright
Ya got 2 years experience so you could wreck in LLL Jr,
You've got the arrogance of a vet yet you're...^^^^^,
lmoa but worded terribly
I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are,
lol
I got a cracker from #2 in my advent calender today,
So it's ironic how #2 from a cracker defines me vs K,
nah
My punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.
cool

Basically its

Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate

vs

I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are
punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.

So V/Kem

[Aines]

thnk u thor

[.:KLePTo:.]

How you 1 up? You suck so I wont postpone you’re loss
Shits nothing to write home about, so fuck zipcoding a box
good concept, could of used some better wording
Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate
nice^
You far from straight, lightweight you throw nothing I can dig
Whereas ill have you seeing more black stars than my own sig
lol
Fuck you pig, just a newb thinking he’s rude and can spray
I’m real, you’re like the spelling of knife, a silent K
hell no
Ok and Kempo slow up you’re tempo, ill leave you hollow bro
Id say that shit hit the fan, but no one really follows you.
decent closer, setup could have been better

vs

First line for this dude, but I'm already through,
Cos punchlines are pointless when ur opponent says it for you,
just makin statements here
Ya got 2 years experience so you could wreck in LLL Jr,
You've got the arrogance of a vet yet you're...^^^^^,
decent
I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are,
tired of gaming system lines played
I got a cracker from #2 in my advent calender today,
So it's ironic how #2 from a cracker defines me vs K,
nah
My punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.
best line good closer and its fresh

v/K just felt he came more consistent, thought his verse would have hit alot harder with some re-wording though Kempo your verse was decent but the only line I really felt was your closer.