Lustful (1-0) vs Renegade. (1-0)

[KempoMRK]

predicted to lose, fuk dat, the closer will soon begin
u took the numbers out to look better
.........................but I can still see the noob within

Didn't hit hard, concept was ok though.

ren has no girl, beats his dik like it owes him money
hez gone beyond dickriding
.................him and Thor elevated to butt buddies

Nah, the setup was better.

i no ima son this kid, but still he'z rekoned~to~score
ur crew's roster is like Sadam
...............u lyin wen u say u got weapons~for~war*

Weak, just the whole concept itself was weak and so was the wording.

ur understudies are wak, all of em stay to played styles
and all ur crew callouts get passed over
...........................like they were racist complaint files

Probably your most creative line so far.

ha, told ya i'd merk, u wanted the W but i hadta close the door
but still try to "cum" hard at me
........................................like when ur tag teaming on Thor

Don't use cum lines, they are really played, and the Thor thing was weak anyway.


I've been on top here for a minute now, though your not 1 to love it
So if you'd like I'll pass the torch..right through your fuckin' stomach

Ok, the wording was cool.

N' ya gotta love it. When the kid disses me yet elevates of my rhymes
But, I can help you be more like 50..In the sence of gettin' shot 9 times

Weak.

Your 3 Line style is ass. N' I aint speakin' nonsence when i say u aint legit
So..If this nigga ever said his name was dope, we know lustful of shit

This was nice.

Plus you haven't achieved nuffin << thats good enough to shutup this fag
...When the only way you could own a record..is if you fucked up his mag

Not bad, quite creative.

N' kidz teeth are fuuuucked up, a retainer could take your throne
...I could draft a fuckin' staircase with your teeth alignment alone

Nah, didn't like this.


Renegade took this really easily, he had the lustful line which was cool, at first I really liked his verse then I re-read and it sorta dimmed down a bit. Lustful, just try and improve on your concepts, as you're using really poor played concepts at the moment, and combined with weak wording they ain't gonna hit at all.

v/ Renegade

[Demon Pyrokronix]

haha.. ok there man

Jr. isn't really the league I give my all there really isn't a point to drop hard when kid drops ass is there? He drops first and I dropped some shit that I know can beat it not shit that I want to impress the league with. Its pointless to drop dope punches that you can use against some one who actually drops a good verse and waste them in a battle that you can win w/ a small effort. So say I fell off or w/e but, get a battle with me next week and we'll see what's good.

pz pz pz pz

Lol I don't think you've fallen off I'm just saying you're not dropping as hard as you were a few weeks ago, you're still a very good textee but I haven't seen the same quality from you. I don't want beef or shit and I respect the fact that your better punches are required in better leagues. This is the only league I battle in so I might as well use what I've got, but meh, whatever man. You still won easily, you know you didn't come great and I'm not gonna shit you an say you did. You need more than enough to win and had 2 quotables, seems good to me.

[Philly B. Sparkz]

Yeh. man I'm not trying to spark beef either. I understand when people say that I didn't drop like I usually do or w/e but, you went as far as saying i'm falling off. When I purposely only dropped as good as I had to win the battle. I look @ it as why waste a verse of my better punches when I can with with a few decent ones nahmean. I'm not going to drop to potential until I get a battle with some one that's going to make me work(No offence to lustful).



pz.

[A. Know-phistage]

predicted to lose, fuk dat, the closer will soon begin
u took the numbers out to look better
.........................but I can still see the noob within
Eh I Was Feeling And Thinking You Was Goin Some Where In The Next Bar,But I Lied so Naw
ren has no girl, beats his dik like it owes him money
hez gone beyond dickriding
.................him and Thor elevated to butt buddies
Nope
i no ima son this kid, but still he'z rekoned~to~score
ur crew's roster is like Sadam
...............u lyin wen u say u got weapons~for~war*
naw
ur understudies are wak, all of em stay to played styles
and all ur crew callouts get passed over
...........................like they were racist complaint files
naw
ha, told ya i'd merk, u wanted the W but i hadta close the door
but still try to "cum" hard at me
........................................like when ur tag teaming on Thor
NO

Lust-Over All You Came Very Basic And Your concepts was wack you could of came up with somthen in the beginning but you just fucked it up and you dont look like you tried

vs

I've been on top here for a minute now, though your not 1 to love it
So if you'd like I'll pass the torch..right through your fuckin' stomach
eh decent but naw
N' ya gotta love it. When the kid disses me yet elevates of my rhymes
But, I can help you be more like 50..In the sence of gettin' shot 9 times
heh
Your 3 Line style is ass. N' I aint speakin' nonsence when i say u aint legit
So..If this nigga ever said his name was dope, we know lustful of shit
meh could of reworded it but nice wordplay on his name
Plus you haven't achieved nuffin << thats good enough to shutup this fag
...When the only way you could own a record..is if you fucked up his mag
lmao
N' kidz teeth are fuuuucked up, a retainer could take your throne
...I could draft a fuckin' staircase with your teeth alignment alone
DAMN now thats fucked up lmao If you had a picture of him hehe

Ren-OverAll Your Verse was Coo I Liked Your Concept in the Teeth Bar hehe was mad funny your structure was straight nice wording in your verse some lines i didnt like but very creative verse

v/ren both reasons are after their verse break down pz

[Demon Pyrokronix]

Yeh. man I'm not trying to spark beef either. I understand when people say that I didn't drop like I usually do or w/e but, you went as far as saying i'm falling off. When I purposely only dropped as good as I had to win the battle. I look @ it as why waste a verse of my better punches when I can with with a few decent ones nahmean. I'm not going to drop to potential until I get a battle with some one that's going to make me work(No offence to lustful).



pz.

Lol you're gonna totally rack me for this but I think your drop in LLL was worse than your one here, I didn't feel that verse at all. I don't think the problem is just 'I drop what I need to'. I'll admit, I had block this week that's why I didn't drop as well as usual, I'm not gonna make excuses and say why waste a good verse on someone wack?

[Philly B. Sparkz]

Nah, nothing wrongs with having an opinion. Dood no-showed either way so it doesn't matter much. I got into LLL to late to make playoffs anyway. But, I'm getting confidence back in my writing I'm going to try a new style next week. By next season of LLL I should be ready.

But, till' then I'm going to settle with ownin' y'all..lol =)

[Demon Pyrokronix]

Nah, nothing wrongs with having an opinion. Dood no-showed either way so it doesn't matter much. I got into LLL to late to make playoffs anyway. But, I'm getting confidence back in my writing I'm going to try a new style next week. By next season of LLL I should be ready.

But, till' then I'm going to settle with ownin' y'all..lol =)

Lol yeah good luck next week. When you're at your best you own niggas. Whatever style you use make sure it's not:

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Lol I used to use that style eons ago. I love Fractures old writing style, he had his ...'s perfect.

[Aines]

Renegade. wins

Renegade. (2-0)
Lustful (1-1)