How J~esus CHRIST was crucified (J.christ diss)

damn kid everynow and then someone needs to be put in their place. this just a quick 10 min key sorry about the errors but i wont allow myself to give this kid real thought.
http://mixtapedetroit.com/images/str...20mag%20ad.jpg
most these dissess are from his profile peep him out

i been around here for years been 4 different aliases even been banned
but i aint never been dissed by a man cause he secretly a fan
who got mad i posted a verse he cant understand
i mean damn, i can feel you say it aint you cause you aint relating/
but i using a miniscule iq isnt an excuse to redicule and start hating.
kid you aint taking me out faget we aint dating.
pull your skirt up pussy dont diss me cause you minstrating.
j.christ what kid now you think your annointed?
im switching to muslim cause if you the messiah im dissapointed.
talk about your deep crew put them in the signature to appear fly/
but they aint with you your only in the pic cause you was driving bye.
you want to know what really counts?
try 54 posts 2 verses and alot of shit talk, hoe bounce/
off my dick/ get off claiming a detroit click\
just cause they in the same state your taxes filed/
dirty glove!!! what you think you 8 mile or that proves you thug style?
please that wasnt even convincing evidence of murder in the OJ trial.
i mean be real dawg i was trying to be humble till you started acting dirty/
and how you in your sig if you 18 and each of them cats look 30?
damn twin ill put a period on my dick so you can blow spots/
any felony your involved in has you with your hands up like 12 o clock.
what the hell you think you is the next young jeezy?
good he wack anyway and ORIGINAL CHEDDA BOYZ is just cheesey.
calling you out dont get me no props kid this shit for fun/
im spitting these dimes out even if i have to take a loan for the funds.
waisting them on a no talent queer/
damn i feel like whitney supporting Bobby browns career.
and i read your ish 20% diss is right/to bad 80 percent of this site/
told you stop writting find a real rapper to bite.
then your nextpost comes at me and Big J/
if you had half our skill i would feel if you had something to say.
telling me changing his critique like my word should sway?
when i read his posts, his colorfulwordplay only helps prove he gay.
damn holmes/if you wack you wack with a cd using beats from ring tones.
next time before you front like you ill make sure you can hold your own.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=268718
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...26&page=2&pp=5
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=268943
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=268796

ok ok, not my style but cool.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=268944

its a punchline heavy diss thats all twin

Lol, steller work fam. You put the nails in the cross alright. Some witty punches and metaphors. A lot of personals as well. Can't believe your battle record isn't better but eh... I can't really talk about the originality of the topic since this was a straight diss piece. But you kept me entertained despite the length.

Uppin this, don't sleep rb.

nice diss, some pretty creative punchlines and nice personals.. through the whole diss it flowed nicely. very nice diss.

I don't think it's good enough to be left open, but mr sixfeet thinks so?

No wordplay...
Weak punches...


This wasnt a good diss....

Yeah, this was kind of bad as far as diss verse goes, johny you feeling alright today? I'm starting to question things...

i aintbiracial whats with the mixed reviews? dot god what you mean no punches please define im intrigued as to what hits as real punches.

I should be the judge of worthy disses!

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Originally Posted by noncentz

i aintbiracial whats with the mixed reviews? dot god what you mean no punches please define im intrigued as to what hits as real punches.

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Go read something in LLL.

structure:10 wordplay:10 flow:10 stickin 2 the topic:9.5 overall:10/10 nice job...........oh and can u return the favor by voting in the battle against yungvik vs. gurbil it would be much appreciated......pz :coolio:

twin there were several dissessthere maybe you just aint catching the punches twin...please understand i aint dissing you for your opini0on just trying to see where it stems from every line was a diss or personal.

It's just not up to the level of idss I allow in the OM. Our elite members are allowed to drop diss verses from time to time and there are many example out there to opur through, this is not one by a longshot.

dot god that seams a little one sided and i have held my own with the best here i aint the greatest but i know punches and there were plenty here you of all should know punches being thaT YOU MADE SOME OF THE BEST ON THIS SITE but twin

bounce please show me an example of your dissess what classifies maybe it will help me elivate

here is a quick example of what I will allow in here.

By spit
pitacular:

slut I'm the rudest. bowing down to spit'll be prudent
don't diss me for my ego bitch.. just stop contributing to it
you really that low? hopin my Evolve comment help you sway?
well, I'd give you the benefit of the doubt.. but Ex's busy helpin Lay
hoe you ain't toppin mine.. $pit's the G you fall in line
n' what the fuck I need ya pic for? bitch I see you all the time
alot changed in a year.. n' this my league now get out
'Action' lmao. made ya fame off a Jr. name I STOMPED THE SHIT OUT
need a missle to strike me. I'm cold a diss'll get icy
but pussy can take a punch.. I hear a couple fist'll fit nicely
you ever see me in real life, bitch you won't even glance
lets be honest.. I had to diss Evolve.. just to give you a chance
never got a bitch pregnant. so who cares if a whores back
not sure what catagory you fall under. but I'ma tilt you toward wack
I get it crackin. ya concepts are fuckin wack n' sadly..
whether or not you're Av.. bitch you stay lookin fat n' manly
messed you up. $pit's comin gunnin. you'll need a vest to bust
I make you sick to your stomach. but you're still wack to the rest of us
make you leave RB again.. my fists'll crack into ya skull
now just spread ya legs wide baby.. n' crawl back into your hole
can't see me: the great. battle with me ain't easy to take
n' since you're not one of my fans.. you can just feed me the grapes
bitch I'm not lyin. the dopest. you forget I'm not tryin
n' I've had much better lays than you.. quit talkin shit about ryan
Nique.. Impulse.. whatever alias. I don't care you're a skank
n' you don't have to talk about undermine.. we're all aware of ya rank
I fold rivals. you ain't hot. I'll bake you cuz I'm blazing
the only time you'll hold the title, is if I make you cuz I'm lazy
was gonna stop at 20. fuck it 30.. shit I'm good I got plenty
n' if your reputation's on the line.. you prolly shouldn't drop any.

another
by cam I belive
Whoa. . this lil bitch must really love me, & im over judgemental but,
this kid jocked my style and flow.. then changed his name to ’Mental God’ ?!
like what the FUCK are you thinking?! Your on my dick that bad dude?
hows about I buy you some pom poms. . then you can cheer for me too!
and in every battle im at, you can dance, spell my name, pout
dressed up in some mini skirt, hoping one day I’ll take your ass out.
this wack clowns getting smacked down, and for doubting my name. .
Im bout to start Shutting Down IM . . like im Logging Off AIM.
Plus any lame attempt at a comeback, and I’ll destroy your ass,
Cuz you stay in ‘the same old shit’ . . but whaddya expect from a F.A.G?
yeah this kids my cheerleader, he wants to be all friendly and shit,
but I brought a demolition team when he asked me to Crash at his Crib
and I aint one for blasting kids… but saying that I fell off’s a fluke,
cause when I propose a Toast. . I’ll cock it, then aim and shoot.
And fake fuckers like you, you’d think after phrantik he’d learn…
But mentals the fuck who’s moms egg tried movin away from the sperm
& then was dropped as a baby, in hopes he’d get breast fed
but if its ‘money over bitches’ … im bout to put a Price on ur Head.
Your dicing w. death. . see barons mind set’s for something major
So go breath a sigh or relief . . in an anthrax gas chamber.
Im raps savior. . you’re just a borderline homo with no lover
Yeah, I know mentals got a hoe . . For a mother!
You’ll discover it soon enough, this fat fuck aint funny, look. .
go leave the Cracking of Boards to an Overweight Tony Hawk
cause your aren’t funny at all. . and infact motherfucker,
we don’t laugh at ur wise cracks, we laugh at ya bar structure
cause its terrible, so accept my skill and realize the truth you lame…
beating me? u got no chance in Hell, Heaven, or ANY other mythical place.
Im done spitting today, you look kinda sick you silent whore,
But Greens the colour of envy… so I’ll put my Neon ya spinal chord.
And this is my finisher now. . basically, you’ve BEEN told
Buti’ll drop your corpse froma great height. .


Just to see you Hit the road!

this was a dope piece. the humor was dope in here. the length was perfect. it didnt make me mad cause it was to short. or didnt bore me from length. the structure was meh. pretty striaight for the most part. and the rhyme-scheme was also pretty decent the full way through. not to much to really improve on here to perfect this. just keep droppin b.

-Peace.

Lol@ noncentz
I thought the shit was straight on the first page, Ya wordplay was trash. Speakin direct was trash.
Punches were ass, all in all this was a pretty nice piece.
Had me dyin off of

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dirty glove!!! what you think you 8 mile or that proves you thug style?
please that wasnt even convincing evidence of murder in the OJ trial.

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You almost came hard but it made me laugh . that counts?

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when i read his posts, his colorfulwordplay only helps prove he gay.
damn holmes/if you wack you wack with a cd using beats from ring tones.
next time before you front like you ill make sure you can hold your own.

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Das whaszup, you hot

twin like i said before internet shit isnt real i had fun with this if i saw you on the street it would be peace thats just me though i dont want you to think i dont respect you as a lyricist but i dont respect your comments when i was trying to be humble.

and bounce your ish aint to different from mine some of your punches had multi internals i aint there yet but overall your punches and mine dont differ that much

^Those weren't my punches, and yes the concept developed around them are different. It's just not written att he level I would like to see in here, that is al, no hate or other shit liek that. I just want to keep the OM forum clean and presentable is all. If you drop a diss, it better be dope as fuck or else I'm closing htem, that goes for everyone.

twin it was forfun i wont dispute you closing it if you dont think its up to par i like the idea it gives me a harder goal to push for.
i dont take it as hate trust im to old(25) to be playing kid games cause somone has an opinion. i feel where you coming from and i will elivate.

^ Why can't all members be like that. Trust your understanding is greatly apreciated man, rare that I see that. I am sure I've read better amterial from you in the past, so maybe it's just this verse...

it happens i just need to bust my ass apply harder and learn if i start shit i need to put my all into ending it instead of rushing a half ass diss i feel you

mehhhh...........its was alright.....tho to long for a diss.....atlest in my eyes

yo i liked this you should've let me know an i would've got on it wit you if you wanted. i liked it. flow was good punches out the ass in this one. an you lyrically killed j. christ. just keep at it man