World War II - Feat. Berlins Best

June 6th, 1945. The Omaha beach takeover was a success for the allies, but deeper inland there was another battle breakin out...

Woogsta
D-Day just ended, allies taken over more terroritory
Many men died, but the captured land is a victory
Will make history, happy faces for the men standin
But tears where shed for those who never made the landin
Its obvious now we winnin the war, Britain prevail
We got the Germans runnin like beaten females

Berlins
We lost this battle but we haven’t lost the war yet
Enemy warriors stepped on r doorstep, to come is more death
More flesh to be torn, More souls stashed in this morgue yet
these forces won’t be reborn, allies r known for their short breath
we’ll take em to court back on the War-set
revenge will be evil plus our fallin’ fellows we’ll never forget

Woogsta
While the Beach battle been won, another jus started
We was travellin inlands when we encountered our targets...
Boom, explosives landin makin the earth rumble
Enemies approachin guns aimed spellin out trouble
Allies fire, bullets flyin souljas dyin, a bloody fight
I was firin the tanks M40 when the germans Tiger entered my sight

Berlin
Troops assembled ready to scramble who is to come
We got info on soldiers approachin so foolish and dumb
They think we beat cuz of this minor re-treat
But we’re well nourished in bunkers, firin’s our deed
Fear is r enemy wirin’ our feed, it eats up my nerves like a
cannibal
Trigger fnger ready to squeeze to release a cannon-ball...... here
comes the animal

Woogsta
The tiger movin towards me, both of us firin rounds aimlessly
Bullets catchin souljas, leavin then bleedin into a bloody sea
Few shots ricochetin off our tanks, nothin bein really damageable
Jus this Nazi sympathizer tryna aim for the spot most flammable
Hate them germans, always squirmin, tryna destroy our Shermans
But now tables is turnin, and im happy to destroy this vermin

Berlin
No holdin’ back I feel the first impacts of machine gun shells
Everythings still intact so we burstin back, his dream done melt
We attack with a thirst to crack his armor and dead him
The drama is settin’, he got us in aim but I use my Karma as weapon
Like a sauna I’m sweatin’ steerin’ straight at this white cloud
Last chance to pray befo u be slayin’ and them medals be send to ya
wife’s house.....

Both:
Leavin the MP40, loadin up the rocket then aimin
Everything else a blur, jus the tank remaining
Finger on the button, if i said i wasnt scared i'd be a liar
No time to hesitate now as i press down, FIRE

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60 Years later, two friends is talkin in a bar when they realised they grandfathers died in the two tanks.

Woogsta
Son, i cant believe my grandpops let patriotism kill him
Makin my pops grow up in a one man only buildin
No longer livin, because of some war that wasnt his beef
Jus was young and the goverment called him up off da street
Thrown in the heat, of a battle that he wasnt ready for
Last letter was sent June 3rd, then he never sent anymore
Pops thought he forgot, but never knew his own daddy got buried
Now im talkin to this German, who Grandad is also in da war cemetery
Seems that they met on the battlefield, and claimed the others life
But i guess out there u never think twice about a strangers mothers'
strife
Even tho our grandads were enemies, we both friends
Cuz the war finished then, dont need to start another again

Berlin
Wars were fought people were killed for no good reason
Just the thoughts of a maniac his home country wouldn’t believe in
So he stopped by ready to achieve it in FRG...dreamin’
Of leadin’ the biggest force there can be
Still we bleedin’ from remorse of his deeds
Prejudice are not leavin’ the streets even more seem to grief
The metamorphosis can’t creep...it’s held up by anger
My grand-daddy died for nothing with a bullet in his chamber
I can’t even remember.........
All I know is I’m sittin here listening to an English man
Speakin’ in english and feelin’ not the slight need
To distinguish him between enemy or friend
All I know is if I ever need help, he’ll be there lending me a
hand.....

I know its madd long, but gon appreciate feedback. Props Berlin.

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back up again...lol...well yeah let's get some feed...pz

Oh my badd dogg, i aint been around for a madd minute.

Uppin.

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Fuck sake, stop sleepin bitches.

U all respondin to whack OM's or postin up whack OM's cept a few decent heads, so how bout some appreciation in how long me n berlin spent in this?

Bitch ass muthafuckas.

Leave a link, and decent feed.

:mad:

This wasnt bad, I got the comcepts pretty well and each side came with their own style so it wasnt too bad. I see you've both completed your length size and a good structure, which is what most need. Your tactics to attack the big theme are pretty well met from such an early stage of textcee. But Overall this wasn't a bad piece, a long read no doubt. And dont get offended by whatever I write from now on...

But leave good feedback on this:

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176338

Both of yall, thanks.

thx for the luv and the favor will be returned...pz

Thanks sinamen, ima hit up urs now. Good lookin out.

Uppin.

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Woogsta: ok you came pretty good with structure in all of your verses, there was maybe a few lines that seemed a little bit stretched but your emotion in these take up for that. i really didn 't see to many multis, i might have just missed them but i didn 't notice any when readin, but you still had a good flow nonetheless...your verses seemed to be part story about the war, wich was dope, i was feeling that.

Even tho our grandads were enemies, we both friends
Cuz the war finished then, dont need to start another again

^^i was likin those 2 lines. actually, i liked alot of others, but i wont point them out (don 't feel like lookin for them). but yeah, you came at the topic pretty nice, i think your lines could have been a bit more describing but that 's just my opinion. you came very good in all of this.



Berlin: you seemed to have more violent, gore type verses, wich i liked. you came pretty detailing in most of your verses, multis were pretty good in this. everything also seemed to flow very welll... your structure was good, you had longer lines then woogsta, and some of them seemed stretched but it was still good. emotion in this was good, it could have been better but it fit this topic perfectly. both of you finished good with your last two lines

To distinguish him between enemy or friend
All I know is if I ever need help, he’ll be there lending me a
hand.....
^^^didn 't rhyme, but i was liked the concept of it. you also had some other good lines. you came pretty good in most categories in this.


ok you both came very good in this, to be honest i didn 't favor one of you over the other, you both came with your own style and they fit together perfectly for this topic. and yeah this topic was good, i was likin it and you two came good on it. it was long, but it was worth the read. i hope to see more from you two.

^ wow @ that bein so long lol

anyways, return the favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176592

thank you for the breakdown abusive...glad u liked it...pz

loved the concept and the various plot twists, some great back and forth style between the pair of you as well. Great imagery from both writers and some good multi's from berlin as well. i know Berlin's style but i didn't know yours Ghetto, colour me impressed.

keep on posting.

I#m tired of u faggots not giving feedback...recognize real bitches...pz

Thanks for da good feedback Abusive.

Johnny, u done seen my shit before lol, just a while ago.

Still, good lookin erryone for da feedback.

Upping for more.

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plz

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