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Its called Criticism
criticism is on the rise and is raisin depression
everyone does it....most of them don't make the confession
they get pissed at themselves and just explode
then when they're done they stop to reload
people who are criticized against are then depressed
start gettin paranoid....and then they get stressed
their life revolves around these assholes
poppin up like moles...under every bridge like troles
turn around and they're in your face...staring
you stand there...don't know what to do..glaring
you become weak in the knees and fall
you look up and there all 100 feet tall
Hit this up with feed yo
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"people who are criticized against are then depressed
start gettin paranoid....and then they get stressed
their life revolves around these assholes
poppin up like moles...under every bridge like troles"
Yo this shit's great, I like U'r style and topic.
I almost chose that avatar my self. click above my avatar on my name
and peep my Raged flow, posted on open mic. PEACE
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Be patient with your replies... Dont post again uppin it abt 10 minutes afta u posted it originally
And i wasnt feeling this, it was a little simple and the flow was basic and off
keep droppin and try get the point across next time
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=167239
Hit that up for me son, peace
Oh, and get your links up here... before Credz closes this... He does that yano...
ANDDDDDDDDDD he's gone global!
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this was not great but not wack you need complexity and to use creative word combos and line combos
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You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
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aight i'll get them for both mine soon....don't close til late tonight please man...
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This was average...
You need to come more complex, your lines were to simple in most cases. Your flow was ok, but add some multies and internals. Topic was a'ight but you need to elevate.
Keep droppin
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Very average, there was not much of a flow. You did however use words to bring your point across, I will give you credit for that. 7/10
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this was too short to give loads of feed.
the structure was ok the flow was average, the topic was good but i think you could of wrote a bit more about it.
return the favour.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=167404
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doin this as a favor for feed on my piece..it was pretty average shit man. the rhymes could have been pulled off in a freestyle, much less a keystyle. i like the topic cause i have had my fair share of experience with it but there was a whole lot more you could have done with it. keep workin, up ya game a bit and youll get ya respect
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Pretty tight, I was feeling it. I would recommend making it a bit longer, cause it only took me 15-20 seconds. Good job though, you just need to work on Multies, and Vocab. Overall 8/10
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This waz tight, good caption of the topik. It's like u put yourself in the person an wrote about wat they feel. i'd give this a 9/10.... keep droppen hott (\1/) Holla!
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thanks...uppin for feed....drop a link and i'll hit it up
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alright, this wasnt wack, but it wasnt good. it just sounded like u were taking a rhyme and trying to throw a bunch of big words together that didnt make sense...to be bluntly honest. try to pick a topic and stick to it. then u will throw down some sick stuff. but it was aight..i guess. good structure..just elevate
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shit's ummmm... what can i say... i couldn't catch a flow if any... lyrics was well thought out tho, it ended kinda abrupt like... but mad imagry like i dno, i could picture shit u was say'n ... still, it decent... peace..
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this rap wuz straight dogg
I liked it for the most part
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^ thanks man i appreciate it
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i like the topic....but i agree wit some use some wordplay n extend it a lil more other than that i liked it....keep droppin.....one
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This was iight a lil simplistic.....and a lil short but it was iight good shit....keep postin
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thanks ya'll uppin for feed
