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PBK
3D Gay
Three peice page
Need me say?
Semen stains on his keyboard, from jerkin off eboards
I sleepZZZ snore, tryin to read your meaningless peice, bored
Geek- corned, and prolly wrote before your whole cheap score
Keep stormin gordy, beat me till I cant read more
But each thorn to try to stick at me, I'll just eat four
Wont cheat, nor- will I try to keep you from reward
I'll give you all the props you need, defeat this elite born
Street soldier, breaching through the war like a peace corp
And Peanut Butters grip just wont unstick from my dick
I couldnt even get him off me if bread and jelly was piss
He wishes his shit, was somethin more, but it's at its end
His spit is a trend
Quick fixed, he digs eminem
He's a gitty la femme bitch boy who never gives in
I gotta gritty little tick-toy to give him for Christmas
Cuz I will never be afraid of fuckin PBK
I gotta a three speed rake to dig a knee deep grave
They call me, 'He be Dave'
I gotta beat free spray
You need a meat cleaved blade to beef with me these days
Dont need a PVC pipe to make a bomb
I just speak/write
Luftwaffe.com couldnt email me a sneak flight
I mighta joked around
My boats aground, I cant think right
But when it comes to clownin
I just fool around, kick a freesty-le
Im a battle repeat white ungrounder in clean tights
Im bound for skies like a string kite
And up so high I just keep flight
Rewrite, I know your secret weapon's a note pad
I throw jabs without molded flows or a 'vocab'
Dont need a scrapbook to battle foes who just go grab
Some older shit they wrote, and put my name in, its so sad

Do you imagine how you would spit this on tape? It wouldnt happen, once again, when you nubs write rhymes you gotta whink how yer gonna spit it.-O'Fortune


First of all, I wouldnt write something I couldnt rap. That doesnt happen.
Second, just because you might not be able to rap it doesnt mean the actual person who conjured it cant, try to have a bit more imagination about it. It's people like you that keep this a single minded industry. Whink about it.

ya flow is tight, these were some average battle rhymes though, keep writing and you'll improve post up some deeper stuff that's wat most head's like on here.
return the favour reply to my new post.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160700

that was hot

i liked this man. was pretty funny, had a nice flow to it. punches were nice too

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160895 battle with sinner

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160832 battle with late show

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160810 peanut butter

hey man this was pretty good...but the structure was weak. good vocab, but fix the structure and elevate and youll be money

u pretty ill will puttin words together...i like ya style, similar to mine...check it out at...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...20#post1919320

and i feel u player, cuz peeps always told me that in audio it wouldnt work, but it neva stopped me...i didnt get to read about whoeva said it wouldnt go together on audio...but if u didnt write it, there so many way to lay down a verse, thats its basically impossible to say it aint gunna work in audio unless none of ya shit rhymes...so fuck the haters...but i bet half here cant touch u lyrically...from what i seen anywayz...

good flow but rest was average... keep elavting though

i thought this was pretty tight...was a funny read...but plz stop the beefin'....just battle...pz

thanx yal, I appreciate the support and insight.

To: Berlins Best- You need beef to battle and a battle makes beef. If youre still talking about my 3day spree with PBK, get over it, we truced a long time ago. This is an industry of competitivness, if people cant handle being harranged consistantly, no matter how annoying, then they need to take up pottery or cooking or sumthin else for a hobby.

I hear ya but it's just annoying if it goes on for some time...I find beefin at times pretty amusing myself but one doesn't need to overdo it...pz

this was pretty coo diss. keep elevating, I liked the flow it was constent, had some coo punches.. favorite were the first 2 lines.. to me I laughed alil.. good diss.

Please return the favor:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161296

It's cool, Im learning how to approach things a little better here. But I dont take offense to people who get irritated and pissed off at me because that means Im doing something right. After all, nobody makes them read my shit... you get what Im saying?

sure dog....well keep doin u cuz u do it good...pz

ps hit me over pm dog I got somethin to say...pz

damn, my shit got erased...tis koo