ok, u know the rules....
ok, u know the rules....
too slow....
Your name shows, because you kinda late, Im a game show
I hate hoes that try to play it straight when theyre fake hoes
Youre about to make me crazy, when on stage I may shank throats
I take flows and turn em into blades and my brain throws
The quickest fuckin spray to lay grenades with a great blow
And bank bowls of lenos guts and brains off this page- cold
take your time.... I know youll need it.
Like nas said, you already know who i'm better than/
and bro, the Late Show is with Letterman/
better twists, any spit, berrettas and sick sprays/
separate the N from Gemini, flick the mic, its a switchblade/
bitch made his way up, to his critics he act real/
trick, you get rapped up and stomped flatter than my fitted cap's bill/
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Your name shows, because you kinda late, Im a game show
I hate hoes that try to play it straight when theyre fake hoes
Youre about to make me crazy, when on stage I may shank throats
I take flows and turn em into blades and my brain throws
The quickest fuckin spray to lay grenades with a great blow
And bank bowls of lenos guts and brains off this page- cold
OK FINISH.. BUT 6 LINES BATTLES R STUPID....
Like nas said, you already know who i'm better than/
and bro, the Late Show is with Letterman/
better twists, any spit, berrettas and sick sprays/
separate the N from Gemini, flick the mic, its a switchblade/
bitch made his way up, to his critics he act real/
trick, you get rapped up and stomped flatter than my fitted cap's bill/
STOP TALKING BOUT THE LATE SHOW IN YOUR RAPS.. I AINT GONNA VOTE ON THIS 6 LINE SHIT
gem n eye
Your name shows, because you kinda late, Im a game show
I hate hoes that try to play it straight when theyre fake hoes
^wasn't really feeling your opener
Youre about to make me crazy, when on stage I may shank throats
I take flows and turn em into blades and my brain throws
^decent
The quickest fuckin spray to lay grenades with a great blow
And bank bowls of lenos guts and brains off this page- cold
^def. nice closer
Overall good, but 6 line battles aren't that easy to judge...wasnt feeling your opener so the rest had to be HOT n i thought it was nice but not really BAM...you kno? But would be different if it had been longer probly
Late Show
Like nas said, you already know who i'm better than/
and bro, the Late Show is with Letterman/
^wtf...nah man...
better twists, any spit, berrettas and sick sprays/
separate the N from Gemini, flick the mic, its a switchblade/
^huh? doesn't make any sense whatsoever to me lolz...
bitch made his way up, to his critics he act real/
trick, you get rapped up and stomped flatter than my fitted cap's bill
^decent closer
Again, with these 6 lines, shit's gotta be smoking and this wasn't the case so wasn't really feeling your drop...
Vote goes to gem n eye
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Open Mics:
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Poems:
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
how r u goin to say anything about late show in a negative way, u fuckin dick rider that idiot hes battlin rhymed hoes, with hoes ..that is ridiculous.Originally Posted by Miss_Jess
actually, it was 'show' with 'hoes'.....I dubbed them both on purpose, dont be such a cockbite
gem n eye
Your name shows, because you kinda late, Im a game show
I hate hoes that try to play it straight when theyre fake hoes
mm okish opener rep rhyming but alright
Youre about to make me crazy, when on stage I may shank throats
I take flows and turn em into blades and my brain throws
like the build up keep going....
The quickest fuckin spray to lay grenades with a great blow
And bank bowls of lenos guts and brains off this page- cold
strongish closer it's ok i guess
Late Show
Like nas said, you already know who i'm better than/
and bro, the Late Show is with Letterman/
good opener like it
better twists, any spit, berrettas and sick sprays/
separate the N from Gemini, flick the mic, its a switchblade/
mm okish punch
bitch made his way up, to his critics he act real/
trick, you get rapped up and stomped flatter than my fitted cap's bill/
lol made me giggle like the closer
so there you go a few of my thoughts on your battle it was alright even though it was only a six liner....gem n eye thinkin that you need to elevate on your vocab but your flow and structure are right...Late Show like your flow and you came with a funny punch and i like that.
vote : Late Show
Omfg Matez This Is Shite
Die Of Aids Yeahhh????????
And you both are dq'd seeing as you did not follow the rules. I even made an announcement saying that you WOULD be dq'd if you did not follow the 10 line rule, and you guys chose to drop 6.
closed
Posting Rules
