U cAnT's FuX wIt Me...cypher

[PII]

Constructive writer I touched igniters and struck the lighter to erupt a fire for the bus and drivers of truck and bikers, plus I’m higher so I cut the tires so these fuckin’ liars with slut attire can be good for something else then havin’ nut’s inside her…

When the news played I moved pace and cruised way far for two days til’ who they caught they thought was right but soon made the decision they were wrong…but they TOO LATE. Im gone…



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...45#post1919345
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...69#post1919369

[PII]

guess this aint the spot to drop a cypher

[warchild]

this was dope, the flow was good, but it was too short, post up a couple of written verses id like to read more of your stuff, l8r.
return the favour reply to my last post.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161055

[PII]

heres a verse from a song i got called "yo girl"...(my real nick names king)

Whats he’s tryin’ to say is that ya bitch is getting’ around/
It’s king aka the new kid in this town, Committed to sound/
my flow brings the captain the ship has been drowned/
Like weight stay hittin’ the pounds, of that shit growin’ from a stick in the ground/
I stay happy why’d I wanna stick my dick in a frown/
Lickin’ it down, jesus gave this nigga the crown/
I walk and keep my nikes clean like ive been kickin’ a towel/
Since im givin’ it out, I fucked a bitch as big as a house/
Im sorry Rhonda, but I can get each dick in the crowd/
Licked in about, 5 minutes is ya sisters around/
Flippin’ an ounce, double up I triple then count/
Im a pimp type to make a bitches fake tits get aroused/
Ill make ya clit drip wit’ a drought like Venice canals/
Cover the ears of ya innocent child/
The menace that prowls, my pen is in route/
To make every citizen proud, cuz this is a shout…to yo girl…

[PII]

guess u cant be a newbie either and expect responses...

[gem n eye]

thats for damn sure, but dont worry
once you make an impact they wont get off your ass
I think you got what it takes to put a dent on some veterans
here's a key note to remember, I almost got banned for not knowing:
if you wanna start a beef or a battle with someone go to bitchslapped to start it before posting on open mic or front lines. I pissed a good sum of people off for that.

[PII]

1 mo time around

[BLACK~MAGIK]

Again man, sick with them multies...ill shit...7.5/10...felt u shoulda made this a lil longer...but its all good...hit my shit up...1

[EnVy BROOKLYN]

Thats Not To Bad For A Newb Should Use More Wordplay Though.........................................

[Tony B]

b more creative, tha multies were decent but coulda been much better, ummm...yea

[PII]

awww this jus a keystyle while at work...i got meta 4's to blow u away...several lil' ones in the second post i posted in this topic jus 4 example if u wanna go back an check...

[PII]

my "flow" brings the "captain" the "ship has been drowned"/

Like "weight" stay hittin’ the "pounds", of that shit growin’ from a stick in the ground/

I walk and keep my "nikes clean" like ive been "kickin’ a towel"/

Im a pimp type to make a bitches "fake tits" get "aroused"/

[DarkIce]

Pretty fine if it was just a keystyle at work espicially for a newbie but too short. That other rap you posted was good too keep it up. Oh and hardly anyone will pay attention to you when your a newbie but keep this up and people will start talkin.

[PII]

"guess u cant be a newbie either and expect responses..."

figg'd that early on...