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16 lines sound good man
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136082
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136090
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...24#post1528224
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...39#post1528239
Death Approaches
[rawness]..|Barz.Bury|..[/rawness]
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[My Verses Attack Soon, Punches'll Put Your Head Down Like Hearin Bad News.]
[Your So Far Behind I'll Leave P Behind The Bush Faster Than Camping Trip Bathrooms.]
[I Would Talk About Your Rap Life, But Seriously There's Nothing To Tell.]
[The Only Way PJ Is Underground, Is When I'm Washing Laundry In A Well.]
[Having You Piss Your Pants, Leaving Your Underwear Full Of Skids.]
[Your Picture Proves Your Location, U.K. Stands For Ugly Kid.]
[I Spill Blood Through Your Inner Organs That'll Slash With Knives.]
[This Kid Praises Barz With His Bars, Cause He Just Sacrificed His Life.]
[Your Name Is MCeePJ, So Of Course I'm A Make My Point, And Be The Winner.]
[By Crossin A Stake And Your Heart, Like Crucifixin A Cow For Dinner.]
Blah we agreed 16 lines...but ill drop 12 ..and that pic aint me man
I freeze his Barz ..ya wouldnt bring heat... if i lit a lighter in you
ya can 'Super Glue' ya asscrack......but im still 'Tighter' than you
His styles just like tornados.....cos basically it just 'blows'
Hes like Big problems at 'Theatres'...always 'No Shows'
I didnt think RB was gettin wack...but with you here it must be
Cos the only way you be 'fuckin' dope...is if it had a 'pussy'
Ya wackness has turned infinite..ya need help..im here to give it
I will show ya the 'ropes' son......so ya can hang yaself with it
Fuck his homo voice tone.... ill Bury his chance to fight on
Ya audios would be dope.......if ya didnt turn the mic on
Like sex with dwarfs..ya to just short..so please stop ya shit
ya home location maybe 'IN'..but ya tourny location is opposite
not a bad battle... not a good one either... i think mc took this one cause he had stronger punches even though i think barz had stronger personals. MC made me laugh with a few of his lines which Barz verse failed to do so with that I am giving my vote to MCeePJ.
Vote - MCeePJ
Decent battle....bars........ you had an ok verse you didn't really have anything in it that stood out though, ya punches were pretty weak but they were there, but overall your verse was pretty weak
MC...good verse you had a hard punch on almost every line, they turn ya mic on punch shut it down, you swayed me wit that one right there nice, good verse good flow nice metas an wordplay throughout a complete verse u got it son
Vote: MCeePJ
yea.. nice battle man.. 'luck in round two..
mc got this hands down...no need for much
you no said already kinda shit..he just hit
so much harder with concepts and...
consitency...barz drop the [][][[]][][
they wack like whoa man....keep it up
..Barz, U need to come harder with your punches & shorten your lines a lil
U have allot of potential, cuz u can battle (textualy)
..The bad luck was your opposition was better
Nice work, But keep it up.. Ull get better with your punches
..MC
Nice punches.. (Pretty shit tho, Cmon.. Admit it, They were soft as shit.. )
Seriously, Nice/Hard punchess..
And thats what i like..
When u were showing them to me bar by bar, it didnt look as good as it was up there ^
But, this was good..
Nice Battle
Vote/MC
yeah this was ok
but mc took it with harder punches and more wordplat though very played
barz your punches jsut didnt hit home that well
and you have to remeber that just cuz you use another font it doesnt make you look like a vet
v/mc
Not a bad battle, MC got this for havin' punches that hit much harder and for havin' good wordplay.
V/MCeePJ
Pz
i thought i had a few good punches.. but i guess not.. :(.. but yea.. mc.. you had some nice punches on me man.. good work..
Yeah, good battle.....thanx for the votes.
it's pretty obvious who got this battle,
[The Only Way PJ Is Underground, Is When I'm Washing Laundry In A Well.]
V.s
ya can 'Super Glue' ya asscrack......but im still 'Tighter' than you
mc got took to the dry cleaners.
nah only kidding,
PJ merked the shit out the other dude, he was talking about his laundry an shit,
better punches, an a better verse won this battle.
pj = pajamas = laundry.. just explaining the punch..
upp for sum more votes..
Barz....you started off strong...you had a decent opener and you followed it ok....but then you just fell off something ridiculous...looks like you had writers block or something...best line...
My Verses Attack Soon, Punches'll Put Your Head Down Like Hearin Bad News.]
[Your So Far Behind I'll Leave P Behind The Bush Faster Than Camping Trip Bathrooms.]
PJ...verse wasnt thaaaat much better...but you were more consistent...the punches didnt start to lack like they did in Barz verse...you had a lot of played lines...like the opener...i've probably heard that exact punch 1000 times...never mind ones that sound like it....but your best line was.....
Fuck his homo voice tone.... ill Bury his chance to fight on
Ya audios would be dope.......if ya didnt turn the mic on
now Barz best line was better then PJs....but PJ had a more consistent attack..sooo
Vote....MCeePJ
^ i knew i had a good one ;)
but anyways.. uppin for final touch.. and good luck in round 2..
/v MCeepJ
barz ur shit was forced and stretched...and not humorous at all....work on your structure and non-forcing punches....
MC ur shit was iight, a littl played but it was kind humorous.
MCeePJ advances to Rd.2, closed.