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u check & its out with nard
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im considered the best, but u.... ur just new
u think inside the box, but not becuase ur in the crew
well im poppin my collar, ur just tipping the cuff
few can talk trash..... while ur stuck picking it up
ur outta ur luck... ur garbage kid, time has taken toll
and ur so bad, u decide to battle with a fake poll
ur lacking balls, contrary to what ur name implies
and im serving up punches, and ur serving me fries
^ lol at me secretely insulting myself, to bad u cant feed
cuz if wackness was food, ud be bigger than me
10 lines..... here u go
erm i don't get this i check first right?
if so...
Check
Yo yo..
You cumin in this ugly, like your bitch on the end of your dick
geek thought he could post phat by opening threads of his pic
|ok geek put on your glasses for this|
Pfft, fuckin wanna be, make this wigga really drop and holla
Then touch this bastid pimp and really pop his collar
I知 bi-talented, but just now my right hand is controlling ya health
Then Ill raise ye soul so you can really watch over yaself
Am here now ye interest rate lowered like yall move mortgage
An I値l have dizzle in a panic like theres a fuckin food shortage
All this shit talk and confidence you値l be regretting royally
Rip off ye flesh, an have ye spine bein viewed like checking loyalty
Go figure, fat boi aint depressed, hes a real happy dude
Kus As long as you can laugh at yourself you will never cease to be amused
good luck kid... most metas were simply, if you dont get them dont vote...
good battle........... upping.
sorry for the unneeded up
you didnt need to up it, nor post that nonsense.. somebody delete these last two posts...
im considered the best, but u.... ur just new
u think inside the box, but not becuase ur in the crew
Played, but decent flip.
well im poppin my collar, ur just tipping the cuff
few can talk trash..... while ur stuck picking it up
Lol.
^ lol at me secretely insulting myself, to bad u cant feed
cuz if wackness was food, ud be bigger than me
Lol
That surprised me. Decent verse Dizzle.
Pfft, fuckin wanna be, make this wigga really drop and holla
Then touch this bastid pimp and really pop his collar
Ill concept, but the wording and setup were so fucked that it ruined it.
I知 bi-talented, but just now my right hand is controlling ya health
Then Ill raise ye soul so you can really watch over yaself
Decent
Besides that, the closer had potential. I think SDizzle edged this out. He just had better wording on his concepts, so they hit much harder. Nard, you got the concepts, just work on wording.
Vote:SDizzle.
-W1
im considered the best, but u.... ur just new
u think inside the box, but not becuase ur in the crew
---Have seen this concept before but it was decent. well im poppin my collar, ur just tipping the cuff
few can talk trash..... while ur stuck picking it up
---Ok. Not bad
ur outta ur luck... ur garbage kid, time has taken toll
and ur so bad, u decide to battle with a fake poll
---Links are soo gay. No.
ur lacking balls, contrary to what ur name implies
and im serving up punches, and ur serving me fries
---lol. Its funny but not that good of a punch
^ lol at me secretely insulting myself, to bad u cant feed
cuz if wackness was food, ud be bigger than me
---Decent.
Ok you came pretty good. Links are bad. Bigger than me line was cool so was opener and trash. You flowed ok. Maybe try and Throw in a few multies good structure I guess. So a decent verse.
You cumin in this ugly, like your bitch on the end of your dick
geek thought he could post phat by opening threads of his pic
---Uh....not bad...try to stay away from dicks and such.
Pfft, fuckin wanna be, make this wigga really drop and holla
Then touch this bastid pimp and really pop his collar
---Dont get it..
I知 bi-talented, but just now my right hand is controlling ya health
Then Ill raise ye soul so you can really watch over yaself
---Didnt like it.
Am here now ye interest rate lowered like yall move mortgage
An I値l have dizzle in a panic like theres a fuckin food shortage
---Sdizzle weight lines are played.
All this shit talk and confidence you値l be regretting royally
Rip off ye flesh, an have ye spine bein viewed like checking loyalty
---Wheres the punch?
Go figure, fat boi aint depressed, hes a real happy dude
Kus As long as you can laugh at yourself you will never cease to be amused
---Decent I guesse.
You came with some wit. But no good punches. You exceeded his line limit anyways so the line I dont get I just wont count. Closer was ok. Opener was ok. I didnt like anything else. The structure was kinda messed and wasnt really feeling the flow. You came wittier than dizzle but I felt dizzle edged this one.
Vote/sdizzle
Lol.
Vote-nard.
All this shit talk and confidence you’ll be regretting royally
Rip off ye flesh, an have ye spine bein viewed like checking loyalty
I liked that spine/loyalty line.
sdizzle obviously didnt take you serious & I wasnt feeling his punches at all. It was way too simplistic. Although, your closer was decent.
there was no lime limit i didnt agree with anything... plus i said if you dont get it dont vote...
2-1 thanxz for the votes... its appreciated.
decent battle competition wise...
dizzle,
im considered the best, but u.... ur just new
u think inside the box, but not becuase ur in the crew
not a good opener.. not even true. no punch 2/10
well im poppin my collar, ur just tipping the cuff
few can talk trash..... while ur stuck picking it up
better... good concept, decent hit. 5/10
ur outta ur luck... ur garbage kid, time has taken toll
and ur so bad, u decide to battle with a fake poll
personal, flow was bad, punch was ehh.. 3/10
ur lacking balls, contrary to what ur name implies
and im serving up punches, and ur serving me fries
ehh, not even tru. not a good punch. 3/10
^ lol at me secretely insulting myself, to bad u cant feed
cuz if wackness was food, ud be bigger than me
stupid again... too basic.. not a good closer. 2/10
dissapointed, thought you'd come wittier, no wordplay, flow wasnt good,
punches were weak at best, concepts were trash... metas were basic,
shit was elementary. bad verse from you, i expected more.
15/50
nard
Pfft, fuckin wanna be, make this wigga really drop and holla
Then touch this bastid pimp and really pop his collar
fed a little here... -2 points... so... decent.. 3/10
I知 bi-talented, but just now my right hand is controlling ya health
Then Ill raise ye soul so you can really watch over yaself
good concept, not too hard a punch, flow was off 3/10
Am here now ye interest rate lowered like yall move mortgage
An I値l have dizzle in a panic like theres a fuckin food shortage
good personal, punch... made me laugh... 5/10
All this shit talk and confidence you値l be regretting royally
Rip off ye flesh, an have ye spine bein viewed like checking loyalty
no. flow off again...1/10
Go figure, fat boi aint depressed, hes a real happy dude
Kus As long as you can laugh at yourself you will never cease to be amused
good closer.. good punch flow was better.. 6/10
flow wasnt great, metas were decent here n there, no wordplay really...
concepts were ok.. some lacked... overall wasnt to bad, first i seen of you...
18/50...
vote - nard
If he said 10 lines you have to agree or in your check in state otherwise.Quote:
Originally Posted by nard
#3. All opponents MUST agree on a line limit IN THEIR CHECK INS!!!
he should of stated in his check in... then i would of agreed in mines, but lets just forget about it :thumbup:
thanxz for the votes people... somebody deletes these freeposts..
^Usually you should match him...if he didnt do it in check ins....
good battle here
structure:Can't really give this catergory 2 anyone cuz y'all structure was cool was both equally cool here
Personals:Nard had better personals to me, even tho dizzle personals were good, the personal bout the loyalty and royally i understood completely which made his personals better(y'all must not know what happened btween jay and kayne)
Punches:Sdizzle got this 2 me, both had cool punches but dizzle's punches hit harder, like the other guy said the weight lines on sdizzle are getting played
2 me punches outweight disses, and sidizzle also had disses to back up good punches which won this for him
V/Sdizzle
im considered the best, but u.... ur just new
u think inside the box, but not becuase ur in the crew
wack opener
well im poppin my collar, ur just tipping the cuff
few can talk trash..... while ur stuck picking it up
meh its ok
ur outta ur luck... ur garbage kid, time has taken toll
and ur so bad, u decide to battle with a fake poll
meh its alrite, could have been bettter
ur lacking balls, contrary to what ur name implies
and im serving up punches, and ur serving me fries
no not feeling it
^ lol at me secretely insulting myself, to bad u cant feed
cuz if wackness was food, ud be bigger than me
lol i like the last line
You cumin in this ugly, like your bitch on the end of your dick
geek thought he could post phat by opening threads of his pic
lmao at first and second line, dope
|ok geek put on your glasses for this|
Pfft, fuckin wanna be, make this wigga really drop and holla
Then touch this bastid pimp and really pop his collar
nice diss on his pimp pic
I知 bi-talented, but just now my right hand is controlling ya health
Then Ill raise ye soul so you can really watch over yaself
1st line is nice, 2nd is dope
Am here now ye interest rate lowered like yall move mortgage
An I値l have dizzle in a panic like theres a fuckin food shortage
LMFAO...2nd line was dope lol
All this shit talk and confidence you値l be regretting royally
Rip off ye flesh, an have ye spine bein viewed like checking loyalty
yea feelin both lines, nice punch
Go figure, fat boi aint depressed, hes a real happy dude
Kus As long as you can laugh at yourself you will never cease to be amused
lol another dope and funny line
overall i think sdizzles verse was alrite but not that good, some of his lines where played and not that good....a few lines where funny...overall you lacked personals and decent punchlines
nard...i was laughing through the whole of ya verse...you had some really funny personals and delivered them like noone else has before....structure was good...and all metas where perfect
vote - nard due to better personals
Dizzle's verse lacked creativity in his punches... The punches that he did have did not have much impact because they were very plain and obvious.
Nard's verse...although weak at some points...included some very funny punches at dizzles appearance and brought some creativity to his disses...
So, Nard took it
Sdizzle-some creativity, i liked ur closer, made me laugh, liked the trash line also. fake poll bar had no flow. punches were weak..
Nard-lots of creativity good strucutre.. metahs were ok i thought.. verse came stronger than dizzle's...
v/nard
am i the only one who knows that he fed off my verse.......... i wasn't gonna mention it cuz vets have all said, dont sweat the first 2 votes for him cuz ur gonna win with ease............ but
well im poppin my collar, ur just tipping the cuff
few can talk trash..... while ur stuck picking it up
^ my bar
Pfft, fuckin wanna be, make this wigga really drop and holla
Then touch this bastid pimp and really pop his collar
:nono:
i was playing off your pimp attitude...
sdizzle - Had some good lines, and i liked his verse. it was creative, and wasnt half bad.
Nard - Was heaps creative, with punches and more w/p than dizzle's verse..
v/nard
Im amazed, but i think Dizzle takes this one
Decent battle, as far as the two verses compared to each other
Dizzle came out and surprised me a lot....he had like 2 or 3 lines that really caught me off gaurd...looks like somebodys been saving up huh? lol...anyways...best ones were....
well im poppin my collar, ur just tipping the cuff
few can talk trash..... while ur stuck picking it up
that was a decent line...connected...i dont think he matched it...
nard came out pretty good too...but on some of the punches...everything was there, they just werent that strong...or at least strong enough...best line was...
I知 bi-talented, but just now my right hand is controlling ya health
Then Ill raise ye soul so you can really watch over yaself
but you could have worded it a lil better...
vote-sdizzle
Vote nard he had some decent lines..
Sdizzle had some good lines but dropped a verse as he was expecting Nard to either..
1.Be wack..
2.No Show..
I believe Nard fed twice though so i dunno if he survives..
pz.
I'm not in this but Dizzle wins W00t.
V/ Sdiz
harder punches.. worded better.. he just edged
pretty close over all
7 - ?
8-7 Nard I think..
no..... i was gonna say 7-6 bucuz i wasn't really gonna count rascals..... so its 7-7 if for some reason rascals is counted
i say sdizzle took this wit better punches, and wordplay an shit. the otha cat didn't come off very strong.
vote- sdizzle
lol ok battle.....
punches-tie
flow-nard
structure-nard
vocab-sdizzle
well close.....NARD gets the vote by like a half..........lol surprisin dizzle........
Lol, this was a good battle, both had funny punches. But woah, nard's punches hit harder.
Told you not to underestimate him dizzly boy. Sorry, but yeah, nard took it.
:cool: Now don't fight over this, both of you are in the same crew, now play nice.
Lmao :D...
V/Nard
i agree with kahn
Sdizzle- overall i think that you did pretty good i mean you had good rhythem and good punches, and your vocab was not too basic, but nard cam harderin punches
Nard- overall man your pretty good for the level that your at, i like the way you threw out your punches man, nice job all together though
V/ Nard
^ no your not....Quote:
Originally Posted by sdizzle
anyway, onto the battle..
Sdizzle-
opener was played and weak...the picking up trash line was kinda funny...I didn't like how you worded the "serving punches/serving fries" line, but it was ok..."if wackness was food, you'd be bigger than me" lmao...god...it's almost pathetic, but atleast you can diss yourself and make a decent punch out of it...decent verse, not good or bad...I expected worse tho...
Nard-
You're opener was completely played...the food shortage line was kinda funny, but dissing Sdizzle cuz he's fat is played...closer was pretty tite...
unfortunately for Nard, the dizzle just wasn't in him...lmao oh god I feel gay for saying that....damn I'm sorry :(
v/ Sdizzle
Surprisingly my vote goes to Dizzle.
Flow- U both had a decent flow and both of ur structures were simple so tie on this aspect.
Punches- Dizzle edged u out nard. He had the picking up trash line and his closer and some more that just seemed to edge u out. Nard most of ur punches were played except the food shortage one. That was KINDA funny.
Personals- Nard I think u had dizzle on the personals. U kept dissin his weight and his pics. They were weak tho. Dizzle u only had line on or 2. U had the fake poll one which was ok.
Overall nard u got edged out. Dizzles stronger punches beat ur weaker personals. Keep it up tho. Not bad.
No no no no no no no no no no no no no!
Nard did not win this. No.
Sdizzle got this by a long shot. What wins battles? Wordplay or Punches....?
*Plays Jeopardy Music*
Punches!!!!
Nard ha dhardly any notable ones. Dizzle had sum good lines that surprized me and made me laugh. Dizzle had some wordplay also but also used punches.
V/Sdizzle
vote=nard
like u sdizzle i thought nard was gonna be wack cuz everybody was predicting for u.
sdizzle-had some nice lines like the trash one but it seemed like u werent tryin hard at all.
nard-came off nice. the opener and soul line did for me. also that food line was funny.
Oh, my the big battle... I knew I was not to be dissapointed. Creativity was in an abundance by both of you I highly enojoyed both verses. The punches by Sdizzle were... well quite humour I was actually laughing. Props to you. Nard simple metaphors and nice punches this seemed the more Lyrical of the verses. Vocab was there too. Well done. Sdizzle though.. that shit was hott haha I seemed to of liked your verse more. It was more of my style of straight and to the point. Close battle props to both. Nard I believe has great potential.
Vote-Sdizzle.
pretty good battle....
sdizzle you had a pretty good verse.. lil plain.. nothing too spectacular.. but i believe it did the job. That was funny how you pointed out the dis on yourself.. admirable too.. i kinda enjoyed reading your verse... work on creativity holmes...
Nard you needah work on alot. Structure. flow. creativity... everything! Punches and personals especially! furthermore dont feed it makes you look deperate... try thinking of each line before you write them... cuz than people will actually be excited bout reading your posts... elevate...both of you
Vote - Sdizzle