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u know the rest of the rules
Checkin' in...
Yo yo *takes a notebook* yo, *looks for a pen, finds one, grabs it* yo yo...
...*begins writin' letters of death* aiyyo...
(fuck trying)
ha ha, ur sig admits it, ur wack.... and im better
boo ba doo gha ogea jgkia odf wiojd aofe oadj
ajfopd asjgma........djafeo ahjfdoe daojfd doaf
dovcajaio diocvan dfodja dfoj dkofe dhjooaf
dahj..........djyey ahjdiie jsiufdhj kiuca
...........dajfhdui adhie huca
dfda louj lduuj dluoua jvuydf euiycb jdiaoght
now my verse proves it..... ur wacker then u thought
i used gibberish, no english.... u didnt se it coming, i bet
..... and i still beat u without breaking a sweat
the gibberish didnt even RHYME man! *Slaps forehead*
Ok, now what the fuck is this?!
I'm serious, you're wastin' my fuckin' time.
Keyed in 5 minutes, I'm not gona waste a real verse on that.
Btw, to whoever votes, just look at his verse & you'll understand all the punches.
Aight check it...
Kid's in a wack ass crew, but... what's even worse
is that God was gettin whored...
...so no one ghostwrit his verse!
Read this carefully son, as you sit down, & cry
u defined TNL with that post...
...pussies that never even try!
I'll go easy, I mean, I don't wana offend him
what a pity...
...even his crew member turned agaisnt him!
I said 30 min, he needs time, and said tonight
Goddayumn yo...
...I thought we're battlin in English, right?
We ain't on the same level, seriously, coz it seems
ur plain wack...
...i'd have to be like u, to know what ur verse means!
Blah...
perp - wtf...man...that was horrible....u tried to be creative and beat him...but instead u were stupid and lost...nothing to comment on....what a waste of a battle....you didnt even have any good punch at the end....damn man i give it a 1.4/10...
ill - simply put....you won....u had personals....punches....flow....everything....kill ed his....wow what an easy win....lol give it a 6.4/10....
vote - iLL
I cant poll but i took time to leave feedback...please hit my battle up with an honest vote....it is in my sig....against V' Tech...thanks...
ok ill vote on this even tho its not even worth it and please return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134407
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134382
Personals/ Punches: Ill didnt come with anything spectacular, but then again he just didnt have to. Perp's verse had 0 punches, let alone personals, so Ill got this by default. Ill gets it
Flow/structure: Since Perp's gibberish didnt even rhyme, he automatically loses this one too, Ill gets this by default as well.
Creativity: Perp was trying to hard to be creative, and he ended up with nothing. Ill gets this too.
Vocab: Ill gets this for just using real words.
V/Ill Kahn
Now please return the favor
^^sorry I didnt realize I couldn't poll, but I took my time so please return the favor anyway
[QUOTE=L.I.]perp - wtf...man...that was horrible....u tried to be creative and beat him...but instead u were stupid and lost[QUOTE]
ummmmmmmmm no
it was not a shot at creativity
i didnt feel like wasting time on this dude
and just did wateva
^^No matter what, you still won't merk me.
Uppin' #1
LMAO@actually uppin this mess :rolleyes:
iLL you won man, no doubt.
^^Duh lol. I didn't even try, even though almost everyone in my crew told me to spit real lol.
Uppin' #2
I'll return the favor, just vote & drop a link, I hate havin' open battles.
Perpetual - Your structure was poor, even out your lines. Your flow was horrible, mostly because of all that bullshit in your verse. You had no personals, they are important in a battle. You had no punches, basically you had nothing that hurt your opponent at all.
iLL Kahn - Your structure was kind of confusing, although it did remain consistent. Your flow was off and on, you need to use a set syllable count. Your personals were okay, nothing really stood out though. Your punches were alright, but they didn't hit hard.
Vote - iLL Kahn
^^Duh, I didn't even try.
Anyhoo...
Uppin' #3
Uppin' #4.........................................
Uppin' #5
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Perp's "dsgsadbhak" bullshit doesn't qualify as a verse.
No punches in that.
Ill's wasn't stellar, but he dissed, punched, and got the job done.
Why even bother battling, Perp?
Wasted thread.
Ill wins for punching.
Peace
This... sheesh...
Perpetual: Do I have to comment? This was horrible. You could've at least tried on this battle. You were weak all around, dawg. Not one funny line. The gibberish just pissed me off. Damn.
ill Kahn: Ur verse was okay. It was kinda witty. Who was I gettin' whored by? :rolleyes: Anyway, you took this with better punches, flow, and metas, though they were kinda weak. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: ill Kahn
lol, kahn is trying to get an easy win, lmao
well upping to give him the win
ha ha
ur a funny dude
Perpetual:
It seemed like you just didnt care and put whatever, i wasnt feeling gibberish, sorry perp. Theres not much to say here except that you had nothing, no personal, no punches, i dont know if i can say that you even had vocab...... The only thing you had was not givin a fuck.
Ill Kahn:
This was kinda handed to you... you had decent punches, personals, and also a vocab that i could understand. Nothin complex, no metas or similes. You came weak this battle but its good you did, it would of sucked wasting good material on this battle. There wasnt much you had to do besides put a readable verse down and give an attempt to win this one.
v/ Ill Kahn
please return the favor with an honest vote
Theres nothing to explain. Ill Kahn tried and actually laid a verse down and Perpetual just wrote gibberish. I think this is a fair and an explained vote. Plain to see.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135536
Perpetual - your whole entire verse was wack man, i didnt like any of it ii think that your structure sucked it didnt go with your word play at all, i dont think that any of your punches or personals connected, only good thing that you had goin for you was.........NOTHIN
Ill kahn- once again i really enjoyed your verse, this is one of the better ones that i have read from you i think that overall your structure was fine it went well with the flow, and your punches actually connected overall pretty good verse man theres no corrections comin from me in this one
V/Ill for comin better on everything