u spit first 10-15 lines u know the rules
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u spit first 10-15 lines u know the rules
let it be written in the books of philosophies that i aint no beginner//
like this text battle bitch im the winner//
you acting hard (u aint got guard) u hidin behind that pc // like a charlie on a tree// you aint even close to 'allevate' hes a small improvement above you jus by a notch, but his punches arent microscopic like your crotch// talk hard rollin with ya crew// but when you on that solo creep you dont repeat those lines of thirst devine violent rhyme scream 'fuck you bitch' scheme// bitch imma split your spleen// fell my punches thru your computer screen// at the end of the verse no need to spit ne philosophies, cuz i can sense u shakin and barely sittin still// ill help ure scared bitch ass out with my punch rhymes to knock u out like nyquil//
nigga i squeeze with my right but i gotta serious lefty
Only way the Don could beat me is through empical techniques
yea let it be written in the books, how im the joker playin ya cards
how can i take you serious with a dragon ball Z name, "Sao The DOn"
You's a tiny specimen, decreasin ya intervals, with elevated decimals
It looks like u the one need to improve, cause u all on allevate's testicles
its crunch time, amatuers like u spit horrible punchlines
i humiliate this rap fellon by just quotin his horrible dumb rhymes
if u not a beginner, then what u consider ya self as
when i spit u get nervous like when they talk bout pussy in health class
u will never be a winner in a text battle against philosopha
say u the don, but u will never be half as popular
its nothin
the don = high chair... maybe uve never heard of makaveli the don... .. well good try..
UPPIN 4 Votes
yea i have motherfucka dont get smart and your no where near Makaveli anyway uppin for votes
descent battle
SAO- PRETTY GOOD MAN, AT FIRST I WAS THINKIN MAN THIS FOOL STRTCHED HIS LINES A BIT BUT THE I BEGAN FEELIN YOUR FLOW, U HAD DESCENT PUNCHES AND NO GOOD PERSONALS I LIKED YOUR STRUCTURE THOUGH
PHIL- I ALSO THINK THAT YOU DID PRETTY GOOD I FELL THAT YOU HAD VERY GOOD STRUCTURE AND NOT BAD PERSONALS YOUR PUNCHES WERE GOOD ALSO I THINK YOUR FLOW WENT BETTER WITH THE BATTLE OVERALL
v/phil
philopsophy, how long did u have to suck and ride the stubby dick for that vote?
Fuck You Man, Now U Prolly Aingt Going To Get Any Votes Because U Dont Accept Proper Feedback, Thats What U Do Battles For Is To Get Good Feed Man, So Just Shut The Fuck Up You Stupid Ass Sao The Don
kid stfu set a battle between me n u and ILL RIP THE SHIT OUTTA U
upppin for votes
uppin.............................
Sao i agree with stubby... u should just accept the critisism wether it be good or bad, because thats what battling is about. we have to criticize. so dont be a sore loser about things.. anyway i think you were pretty good. i had a hard time following your flow at first. but keep up the good work. dont get discouraged and call people dick riders...
Phil- punches hit a little harder, nice with the personls, smooth flow, better structure and wordplay. sounds like u actually gave a little thought to what you're writing. only flaw is your wording.. i thought that u could have worded some things a little bit better.. work on that...u have potential
vote-phil
uppin
Sao your verse wasnt realy great, i think you need to work on hitting personals and harder punches , you didnt have any good punches really your flow was ight. but work on punches.
Phil your verse was ight, had some good punches that were better than saos by fat, you hit hard on sum but others were weak, but ya flow was ight and so was ur structure. some good wordplay also.
v/ Phil for coming harder props
return the favour on mine plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134353
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i already put in a vote on this phil..............
let it be written in the books of philosophies that i aint no beginner//
like this text battle bitch im the winner//
filler
you acting hard (u aint got guard) u hidin behind that pc // like a charlie on a tree//
lol.
you aint even close to 'allevate' hes a small improvement above you jus by a notch, but his punches arent microscopic like your crotch// played, filler, all of the above..
talk hard rollin with ya crew// but when you on that solo creep you dont repeat those lines of thirst devine violent rhyme scream 'fuck you bitch' scheme//
i cant tell wher ethis line ended its so long..
bitch imma split your spleen// fell my punches thru your computer screen// at the end of the verse no need to spit ne philosophies, cuz i can sense u shakin and barely sittin still// ill help ure scared bitch ass out with my punch rhymes to knock u out like nyquil// ok punch...
nigga i squeeze with my right but i gotta serious lefty
Only way the Don could beat me is through empical techniques
didnt rhyme well enuf..
yea let it be written in the books, how im the joker playin ya cards
how can i take you serious with a dragon ball Z name, "Sao The DOn"
at least it dissed him..
You's a tiny specimen, decreasin ya intervals, with elevated decimals
It looks like u the one need to improve, cause u all on allevate's testicles
ok..
its crunch time, amatuers like u spit horrible punchlines
i humiliate this rap fellon by just quotin his horrible dumb rhymes
ok..
if u not a beginner, then what u consider ya self as
when i spit u get nervous like when they talk bout pussy in health class
hmm... no
u will never be a winner in a text battle against philosopha
say u the don, but u will never be half as popular
filelr but dissed him at leats.
v- phil
its nothin
ok voting on this return the favor if you havent already thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134407
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134382
Punches/ Personals: Phil was more personal in his attack and his punches requird a little more thought, so I give this to Phil
Creativity: I'll give this to Phil because the pussy in health class line made me laugh, even tho the flow on it was messed up at least it was creative and some wit behind it, work on addin some humor STD
Flow/ Structure: I didn't think either of you did a good job with this category, Phil your lines varied a lot and weren't consistant, and STD your lines were confusing in your structure, so neither get this one
Vocab: Nah neither was really good
So I give this to Phil for better punches, personals and more creativity V/ Philosopha
Now please return the favor
uppin will retun favors
sao the don- was ok a simple verse your flow and structure was good nothin creative nothin out of the ordinary no real and good personals it was a newbe verse your verse wasnt that interesting well ok a little bit your overall verse stat was a 5/10
Phil- it was a pretty good verse more than enuff to rip sao your structure was k and so was your flow I saw some personals your vocab and wordplay was also good it was enjoyable and interesting your verses overall stat was a 7/10
vote: Philosopha