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Drop first
I'll drop soon after
G'luck
Check. Give me a few minutes.
I'll type up now. Good luck.
checkin
How the fuck are you better? Lying fuckin whore
Claimin original member, when ya joined in January 2004
Lemme guess, you were great when halls were hallowed
But that's a contradiction
Cuz even deep down, you manage to be shallow
Has ya all lonely, cuz with peeps ya ass is dull
And feeling a great emptiness
Similar to the one in ya skull
So take ya weak lyrics, all ya skills are errant
But don't feel bad
Cuz if the meek inherit the earth, you're the heir apparent
Look at ya Sig, How you kickin my ass when you the one bout to die
If we compared lyrics...Mine elevate so much yours look like pestacide
Your battles prolly get slept on, cause ya shit aint worth readin
Didn't believe you were as whack as peeps said...But seein is believing
Comin at me with big words...No one gives a shit bout ya vocab
You win...
...Nah the voters explanations will have mo punches than ya vers had
And I dun care where your from, my lyrics are felt world wide
Hack ya email where your gay conversations you confide
This battles done with...easy KO, you de-elevate with time
Bust ya self esteem at the seems...5-0 me like ya waist line
Lemme guess, you were great when halls were hallowed But that's a contradiction--> KNOCK OUT LINE LOVING IT.... I HELLA LEARN A LOT FROM THIS BATTLE...THE PUNCHES WAS GREAT AND MY VOTE GOES TO MICHAEL FLATLEY ... BUT HEY CHECK OUT MINE AND PLESE VOTE... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116545
This battle was pretty good but Lyric got it. He had the better punches, not saying that Flatleys weren't good its just that they weren't good enough and his personals weren't directed at any particular person they were like open disses. Both had a nice flow to it but Flatleys verse had bad structure in it, Lyric had one line out of place but that was all. No multis from either and Flatleys best line was his closer. He needs top add more multis and better metas but a good verse though. Due to the impact of his punches i give this one to Lyric.
VOTE_LYRIC
OPEN BATTLE(ME vs KO WANING'S)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116477
chea...thanks....up 1.....
Michael Flatley got this. His lines were all different lengths, but he managed to make it flow. what the hell? All i know is, he kept everything short and sweet, and just killed lyric.
Fav Lines:
Michael Flatley
So take ya weak lyrics, all ya skills are errant
But don't feel bad
Cuz if the meek inherit the earth, you're the heir apparent
Lyric:
Your battles prolly get slept on, cause ya shit aint worth readin
Didn't believe you were as whack as peeps said...But seein is believing
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Back again. Mmmmm. Ok. Tied, huh?
Well, more votes are needed
I'll try and up my post count this weekend so I can return poll votes
I'l give a good broken down explanation in just a bit
Hopefully, the mods will know I know what's up
And maybe they'll let it count
yo lyric got this, yo fatley i asn't feeling u at all man sry. my vote goes to lryic, i felt his flow alot mroe then urs dude.
vote goes to : lyric
K this was kinda tricky but my vote gonna have to go to micheal
micheal had way better vocab and wording and thats what really diferentiated the 2 rhymes.
lyric and micheal had good punches but because micheals was more complex he gets my vote
Flow:micheal even though his lines were pretty wacky lenghts(wierd)
Structure:micheal
Punches:lyric(that seeing is beliving one was tight)
Multis:noone nothiung really came acroos as a good multi
Personalls: micheal
vocab:micheal
overall micheal
now since i took the time to vote plz vote on my battle vs dissonnan or UNDEAD
because there dope
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michael dropped an o.k. verse.....a pretty basic and non complex one...but it wasn't dat good to beat lyric's verse...lyric's verse and punches ripped right through dis nigga like he was a paper shredder...anyway michael had weak punches and lots of filler and no real point of da verses diss was made....lyrics verse wasn't his best and sure as hell wasn't great....but my vote goes to lyric for having a better verse...with harder hitting punchlines. Michael try using compare and contrast to diss your opponent better and don't type up much filler...jus elevate...lyric put some better wordplay in there and keep on elevating but overall o.k. battle..
*vote on ma battles here*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116164
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114817
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114748
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Oh my god you are such an herb, I'll get your vote deleted for very apparant stupidity
Compare and contrast? That's the one of the lower levels of rap battles, kid
Constant metas? Some are ok, but you're saying I need more?
I used personals, get your head out of your ass
Personals are much harder hitting than fuckin metas
I hate to sway, but I've been drinking and your idiocy just irks me
I see that someone in modville wants to see me lose
Why?
someone in mod ville does want you to losev
if they didnt then they would stop fucking dickriding me and deleting everything i do
i once had like 1200char explanation and they invalidated the vote ...... is anyone thinking that there corrupt and jsut controlling everything so their buddys///alter egos win??????
uppin for honest votes
up3... drop an honest one here
Descent battle but lyric ripped MF..
Michael-you had very few punches, good flow and structure and all, but punches are what win battles and all you gave was a little slap..Not too much action if your askin me lol..
Lyric-atleast you had punches, not bad, had personals aswell..Okay flow and descent structure..Not to many multi's or meta's but your verse was a lot better and struck your opponent more..
Overall vote-Lyric..
~1~
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Thanks.....up4
Last up..Come on and drop an honest vote....I follow links to good votes
MF - dropped an ok verse ... had a few punches...a personal or two ... vocab was good....structure was iight and it flowed well ... thought he came pretty decent ....
wordplay was pretty good.....metas not bad at all.... overall i'd say ... 14/20
Lyric - had some nice punches ... structure was good ...came pretty tight here i'd say ... vocab wasnt too bad ... wordplay was ok ... your punches were ok and some personals here and there....more than he had ....metas were nice ... and flow was good ... overall i give you 15/20 ..... just thought u came harder more cosistantly
vote - lyric
MF-Ur structure was all over the place as was ur flow-ur punches needed to be more directed, they could have been about anyone-creativity, I really liked ur closin line that was tight-Overall-I think u need to work on structure,Ur last lines showed u can do it, more consistency.
Lyric-Structure,this was good-Flow,good again-Punches, some witty lines in there,especially liked the 'seein is beleivin' line,that shit was tight,not consistent throughout though-creativity,Yeah this was pretty good could of been better
-Overall, I enjoyed reading this verse.
I think both need to be more consistent as both showed signs of being able emcees.
U asked for an honest vote, this is.
Vote=Lyric
Return the favour MF and drop an honest vote on one of my battles=wiv magnificent-MC aines or Prophesized-Con. Appreciate it
yo yall both did good but i think lyric did a lt better
but u were right behind him
{personal}lyric
{punches}lyric
{structuer}lyric
um all i can say on this really is,
lyric lyric lyric lyric lyric,
to be honest fletely was wak...he had a wak strucutre,
poor punches and a swear some are bit,
alot of played lines also and flow was ite,
but punches didnt hit man............lyric,
your punches came really nice here man,
only bad thing about your verse wich you can,
easily improve is strucutre i just felt you came,
a little streched art times wich can affect flow,
but o well you merked.
MF=can u drop an honest vote on one of my battles an return the favour-would appretiate it
aight i think that lyric takes this for a beteer verse
he also was great in personals and the pounches hit pretty hard
the flow was ok and the struture was good
the opener was good and so was the closer
fav.line from you:
flat had a really good verse alsoQuote:
Originally Posted by lyric
his punches hit
personals were not there...thats what lost you the battle
there was only like 1 and thast was wack
flow was ok
same with strtcture
good verse
u got potential
but for personals and harder punches
v/lyric